Nice start.
> All feedback is highly welcomed

Just a few spelling/inconsistent errors. I myself am no spelling/grammar genius, in fact I hate it when people point out my errors when responding to a post. You did ask on one of your more recent [post](https://steemit.com/flashfiction/@pibara/from-ragnarok-conspiracy-part-two-chapter-five) for correction and varios feed back. Not sure if you meant for feedback this far back though, so will be the only one for now until I am sure you want a pick me apart spelling consistency corrections. 
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Here goes:

Dakila **had to spent hours** on end running his virtual ladies in sync-mode just to keep his targets from dropping out and moving on. *(had spent hours)*

Dakila had too much time invested in his AI-farm to let that happen now. Even in sync-mode **Akila** *Dakila* needed to be on his toes 

**Dakilla** *(Dakila)* grew quite weary trying to come up with different excuses for dropping off the radar for a few weeks. There had to be a way around them! **Dakilla** *(Dakila)* had never been hit this hard before. Each of Dakila's

**Dakilla**, *(Dakila)* are you coming down, dinner is ready!

Could you send me **an other** BareunCoin or two to help me pay my rent this week? *(another)*

We will be talking about that **putty** mouth of you tomorrow darling, *(potty?)*

Who is Kidlad working for? People who can pull **of** a quantum blockchain heist? *(off)*
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Enjoyed the story so far.