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Intrinsicallyexternal..
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He stared, scratching his chin in an absentminded manner. He yawned. He returned to staring at his laptop, god he was bored, he thought, and tired. He was bored with youtube, bored with the internet. He yawned again, everything seemed so predictable, the usual conspiracy theories, he knew them all. The forums had heard his arguments. He wasn't interested in watching any films, all full of illumnati symbolism, he hated anything Hollywood. He wasn't a gamer but he had even thought of trying one of the more popular ones. It had taken maybe 2 minutes for him to log out. He had turned to Twitter with little hope of entertainment, but, he thought, it was better than Reddit which had always seemed like a bunch of rowdy teens trying to outweird each other.
The tweets filled his screen with a seemingly endless scroll of inane chatter, god he was fucking bored he thought sullenly.

__intrinsicallyexternal__ _well i dont know what to do_

He clicked on the reply icon, whether it was the boredom that drove him or something else he wasnt sure, but before he was really aware of why he had done it there was his reply already it had appeared in the now strangely quiet twitterworld.  He realised he must have clicked straight to the timeline of that profile without actually consciously deciding to do so.

__northman28__  _sup bro?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__   _hey sweet i didnt think anyone would reply :) and theres no door_

He looked at the tweet he was slightly bemused but bored enough to go with this as his nights entertainment. 

__intrinsicallyexternal__  _and im not a bro :)_

Oh, right, ok, he thought, that brightens  things up a little.

__northman28__ _no door?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _thats right no door_

He sat trying to think for a moment. This didnt make much sense, he thought, what the hell was she on about? no door? He wondered if he had a 'live one' and was contemplating whether or not he should have pizza.

__intrinsicallyexternal__ _there was one i used it to come in_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _nothing now though :(_

He frowned. 

__northman28__  _you went in through a door that is now gone?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _yup_
__intriniscallyexternal__ _perfectly ordinary door worked fine, i opened it entered the room saw nothing here, turn to leave no door_
__northman28__ _wut?_
__northman28__ _that's impossible_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _i know! was only seconds! turned round all i can see is walls :(_
__northman28__ _is there a window?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _nope jus four pale grey walls  white ceiling dark grey floor so, i dont know what to do :(_ 
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He rubbed his forehead, he screwed up his face,  he then dragged the palm of his hand over his face and thought, well suppose I was bored, but this makes no sense.

__northman28__ _maybe someone knocked you out? moved you somewhere?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _nope there was no one here, plus i remember opening the door walking in turninf round didnt lose consciousness and no one ere_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _turning*_
__northman28__ _where are you? i mean where is this room youre in?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__  _well its a library but upper floor said it had art class so  went upstairs saw this room opened the door_
__northman28__ _how long have you been there?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _well only about 20 minutes so far but it really starting to freak me_
__northman28__ _youre sure theres no door? have you felt the walls? it might be concealed_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _yup i already thought of it spent last 20 minutes groping the walls....nothing :(_

He laughed a little, he was starting to like this woman, despite himself. 

__northman28__ _ok how about knocking or tapping all over the walls? try that?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _ok_

He watched the screen, he kept refeshing the page, he waited.

__intrinsicallyexternal__  _nothing :(_
__northman28__ _is it day time? where you are i mean_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _it was when i etered but theres no window my phone says its just after 2pm_
__northman28__ _ok try switching the light off maybe something will show up in dark?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _like that neon light stuff? but i dont have a blacklight thing:(_

She was right, he thought, and now he felt embarrassed that he had said it.

__intrinsicallyexternal__ _i tried it anyway except_
__northman28__ _wut?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _no light switch_
__northman28__ _use your phone to take a picture see if anything looks odd anywhere_

He sat back in his chair, this was turning into a bit of a mystery, must be an ARG he decided.
The pizza idea entered his mind once more, enticing him away from the laptop.

__intrinsicallyexternal__ _my phone has nearly no battery pic showed nothing i cant phone out i cant text i am going to try fb_ 

ok, he typed and wandered off in search of pizza.
His mind stayed with the woman though, if it was an ARG then why couldnt he find anything about it? He chewed slowly on a mouthful of cold pizza. He had searched all the usual sites, nothing, no new ARG happening. He went on a forum or two, one was actually active, but drew nothing. 
He went back to Twitter.
His forehead creased in puzzlement, he had kept the tab open, nothing should have changed, he even briefly wondered if he had been hacked, had someone somehow managed to remote control of his computer? The screen showed Twitter, it gleefully blinked at him  a continuing bland conversation of a zillion people all communicating in buzzwords and catchphrases. He hadn't changed anything; it should still be on her profile, her timeline, it should be showing his and her tweets.
No one else had interacted with either of them.
He tried to find her profile.
There was nothing.

The  cat hissed and scratched at him.
"Sorry puss, didn't see you. Your fault anyway, if you didn't get in the way then you wouldnt get stood on" he said and laughed.
He sat at his desktop and tried to figure out how he would find this woman again. He hoped it was an ARG and he hoped it would be a good one. He figured it must be, or he wouldnt be sat staring at his computer at 3am.
He loaded Twitter.

__intrinsicallyexternal__ _not much left on my phone now:(_

He almost gasped, 

__northman28__ _i thought i had lost you_

Shit, he thought, this was starting to feel like some kind of relationship. He laughed at himself, need to give my head a shake he thought, probably lack of sleep.

__northman28__ _still no door then?_

He felt stupid when he saw his tweet; course there's no fucking door, he muttered internally.

__intrinsicallyexternal__ _nope :(_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _im hungry now :( and i want to go home_
__northman28__ _i take it you tried yelling?_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _yup :( til my throat was sore_
__intrinsicallyexternal__ _then i had a good crying session_

He felt a lurch deep in his stomach, suddenly he was afraid for her. He reminded himself that it was just another ARG

__intrinsicallyexternal__ _something happened i got a text just some site https://intrinsictest.com/subject/8898 but phon is on 8 % :(_

He clicked screensave without hesitation; he wanted proof this time, a record of what they had said, plus if it was an ARG  it would give him something to analyse.
He blinked. 
It was gone.
The screen was showing the endless drivel of fifty thousand people tweeting.
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He checked his folder, it was there, it had saved and he felt relief.
The website took him to a strange videohosting site he had never heard of before.  It appeared like it was a rudimentary version of Youtube; nothing fancy, not even a homepage icon. There just a few channels, maybe ten in all. 
There it was; the first one, a channel named _instrinsicallyexternal_  it must be her, he thought and clicked.
There weren't many videos, he chose the first one, though none had any kind of thumbnail to indicate content; just an icon and a number.
The white screen played for a few minutes then a playback of a tape began. 
It showed a plain room; four pale grey walls, a dark grey floor, a white ceiling, a woman curled up in the corner softly sobbing, it was her.
 He watched, silently staring, his eyes starting to redden with stress he willed the white screen to show something.  It was probably not that long but it felt like  it lasted a long 5 minutes then cut to what seemed like a huge, bright, white, space. It was filled, in regular rows, with large white boxes, each around the size of a small room. The camera angle was above one of them, on the top he could see 
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The video ended.
He tried another.
The same scene began again; the same room, the same woman, this time she was sat quietly staring, at nothing.
He tried another.
Again, the same room, this time the woman was hitting all the walls, punching, flailing wildly, she launched herself in attack at the wall while shouting and crying.
He went through them all, and in each she was more distressed, he didn't want to admit to himself that he was scared.
If this was an ARG then it had a really good team working on it; the camera work was film quality, the effects were strikingly realistic, more so than CGI, he mused internally.
He tried another one of the channels, again no identification, just the channel and a name after it.
He realised that all the channels seemed to be named _intrinsicallyexternal_  
He clicked on one. The white screen began to show the same room, same grey walls, the only change was that this time there was an old man banging  his fists on the walls, cursing in language that was worse than his own. He watched, morbidly fascinated as the old man screamed curses at the empty room.
The screen now showed the vast white space filled with boxes for what seemed like infinity. He found it hard to take in
he looked to the top of the box that  was nearest and it said;
__intrinsically external..SCH  577856__
He looked at the tops of those boxes he could make out they all had the same thing but each time the number was dfferent.
He tried another channel.
It showed the same grey walls, dark grey floor....except for the skeleton, it lay fragile, dessicated, and on the point of crumbling into dust, in the corner of the room.
Scowling his  chose another channel, amd he baulked as he watched the next video. The corpse it held in the corner of this room had reached a visually distressing state of putrifaction.
By now he was unable to stop himself and hurriedly he tried another channel. In the room along with the same pale grey walls, and on the same grey floor there was a small baby. It's pale, emaciated body was clearly on the verge of death and he did emit a  short, strangled cry of disbelief at this horrific scene. He wanted to reach through the screen, save the baby, be the hero. He couldn't stand it anymore and he slumped in his chair. His brain wasnt really able to comprehend any of this being real, it couldn't be, he told himself once more it was just an extremely good ARG....
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It was a bright morning, the sunshine glaring in through the windows was sharp and hurt his eyes. He drew the curtains, drank some coffee and sat hunched over at his computer. Once more he stared, feeling numb, at the screen and it showed each box had a different number, with the letters SCH, obviously, he thought to himself, the number was to identify the victims. He furrowed his brow, his brain was working over time, he was trying to figure out what the letters SCH meant.
He thought about the name _intrinsicallyexternal_ there had to be a clue in that....something intrinsic... that meant inside, something within, he was sure but googled it just to get a correct definition.
Yup inside, he confirmed to himself. He doodled as he continued his thought path, external, hmm, outside. His thoughts were now locked into the right path he could feel it, so inside, outside.
__SCH__
What the hell did this all mean? he thought, and he sat disconsolate, he felt his brain beginning to complain at all the work it was having to do.
For want of anything better he just started typing SCH into the search bar but it was such a vague search term it provided nothing of any use. He fiddled with the pencil he had been doodling with, while the cogs of his brain whirred and he slowly realised he had doodled the vast space with the boxes. He stared at his doodle... row upon row of boxes... each with a person stuck inside.  Some dead, some alive, some barely so. His brain could not let go of this but was tired of thinking about it and looking at the scribbles he saw he had doodled a cat sat on one of the boxes, why had he doodled a cat? He half laughed as it came to him Schroedingers cat, then his face showed the lightbulb moment, though this was a look of horror rather than inspiration, this was a cold sweat of nauseating realisation. He had figured it out, the ARG was based on the cat experiment, except with humans?
He hoped with more intensity than he had ever felt, he more than hoped; he was wishing,  he was silently begging, that it was just an ARG.
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"Just pop to the shop for us" she said and he agreed, helping his mum would take his mind off things, he wandered to the post office first.
"Just up the stairs sir, second on the left" the old woman said and he duly went up the stairs, he knocked first. There was lack of any reply he decided to go in and he turned the doorknob and entered the room, oh must be the wrong room he thought and turned to go back out, there was no door, in fact now that he looked these four walls were a familiar pale grey colour.
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@beckieg ·
hi many thanks for your support i really appreciate it , much respect
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@audreybits ·
You write so beautifully, you got me totally immersed in this story. I love how mysterious the story kept getting as it progressed...

The creepiness in the story is so subtle, yet it can get one to really freak out! Just like him, I hope its just an ARG

I hope he hasn't gotten trapped.... Thanks for writing this nice story...
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@beckieg · (edited)
hi, thank you for visiting my place on steemit its lovely to meet you, thank you very much for your kind words and i am really glad you felt the tension play :) i always feel that the more deeply frightening horror is something that creeps inside your head and wont go away , i am afraid though that he is stuck in an endless schroedingers experiment and worse the meglomaniac that powers the whole thing is insane he thinks he will find out the answer to immortality, he thinks if he can figure out how to achieve the state of the universe not knowing if he is dead or alive then he can exist in a dimension where he is neither and is therefor immortal, the problem with meglomaniacs especially insane ones is that they should never be allowed too much money, they almost never use it to help people, only try fantastic feats like playing house on mars; or selling the concept to us ~the ordinary peoples~ as a dream of saving the human race and moving it to mars, and in the mean time us ordinaries we go to the sho,p we put bandaids on our childrens knees , we go to work, we live and die an ordinary life while an ultra rich insane meglomaniac builds his own hadron collider, and plays god with physics, the most frightening thing in life is that we have no control , see  i nearly wrote the sequel there :) or was it the main story ? i hope you have a lovely sunday much respect to you my friend
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@audreybits ·
Oh, I so much love your reply! Thank you so much for taking out time to reply!

People getting obsessed with crazy ideas that end up hurting others because they feel they have it all and are in control but just as you said, we are never in control! Our feeling of being in control most times is just an illusion. And once people with such insane mindset of wanting to be in control happen to have "power" or influence. Well, others suffer for it...

Yeah, those kinds of horror are the ones that stuck!

It will be really great if you give this story a continuation, don't you think so??
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@barakexpansion ·
This is really brilliant. You sure know how to captivate your reader. I felt myself getting scared as he watched video after video of those poor people in captivity. 

Then you broke my heart with the last paragraph. Can it be that those who gets contacted gets captured next? I think this story should have a sequel! 
Wonderfully written @beckieg. Congrats on your curie upvote too!
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@beckieg ·
hi, its very nice to meet you, thank you for visiting my little home here on steemit i really appreciate it, thank you for such a lovely comment, really cheered me up on what was a slow sunday morning :) i am glad you enjoyed my story i have written a few over the years though there is only a couple here on steemit the rest were written a long time ago, and the story can go whatever way you want t to go :) this is definitely a vast landscape and if i didnt have a zillion other stories to write then i would do a sequel, only once have i actually managed to  negin to write a sequel~ to a book i wrote around maybe six years ago and i havent finished it yet! :) i have so many ideas i always end up starting another :) many thanks again for your kind words i really appreciate your words and friendship, i hope you have an excellent day, much respect to you
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@curie ·
Congrats on a Curie vote!
Hi beckieg,
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@beckieg ·
hi, many thanks for your kind words and support, i really appreciate it and consider it an honour to have you visit my little corner of the steemit world, many thanks also for the upvote and support it was a lovely surprise to wake up this morning and find this, my thanks and full respect to the curiesteem community
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@delishtreats ·
What a scary and creepy story! You got me at the beginning with describing how bored he was. I thought there will be a great twist to the story.. then the girl and the research that he did.. and the the post office.. what a sick experiment! 

I loved your story! It starts so peaceful and gradually becomes overly creepy :) It's however not a forced creepiness but something what evolved naturally in the story. Perfect!

Congratulations on your curie vote! You absolutely deserve it!
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@beckieg ·
hi, many many thanks for your lovely kind words, i really appreciate you visiting me, and to leave such a lovely comment you have made my day thank you, i am really happy though that you really got how the story was paced:) its a favourite of mine to lull the reader into a false sense of complacency :) i prefer the sort of horror that comes with the mundane, to me most of us live predictable lives and we settle into that comfort , i like to unsettle the comfort :) i find it more real, the horror of seeing or experiencing something that sits so comfortably in our every day lives being revealed to us as a new area laden with possiblilties,  my kids have grown up with me telling them the most surreal (though not so much of the horror :) ) campfire stories :) and they are never bored :) it was lovely to meet you and i hope you have an excellent day, much respect to you
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@organduo ·
I thought this story was like a diary of a bored person. Like it really happened to you and you afterwards chose to write it down. Scary ending... In any case, it's a good idea to write when we are bored...
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@beckieg ·
hi, thank you for visiting my little place on steemit, I have written short stories for years :) mostly because there are a zillion stories in my head :) I always like to write something that will make the reader think, I have a huge love of quantum physics and like to play around with possibilities :) I am really glad it felt like that to you and I really appreciate your commenting thank you, i hope you have an excellent day, much respect to you
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@organduo ·
Yes and quantum mechanics means there are endless of possibilities to create stories... Or to catch them from imaginary world...
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@scrawly ·
Great story that started slow but the pace and creepiness keep building up gradually and certainly. Reading this reminds me of SCP stories, of which I am a big fan.
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@beckieg ·
hi, many thanks for dropping by and commenting i really appreciate it, i hope you have an excellent day, respect
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@ssg-community ·
Thank you for your continued support of SteemSilverGold
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@beckieg ·
many thanks and much respect to all ssg community, i always appreciate your help
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@stef1 ·
Mysterious and a bit scary story, this is a nice skill to keep people in tension, to make them wonder what is going on, to have different thoughts and ideas and at the end t leave them with all ideas alone, still in unknown. Love the way how you build up the story and the idea of it is great. That reminded me on movie “Cube” when people awake in a cube, like labyrinth, again nobody knew how they appear there.
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@zoexantelamv ·
I enjoyed this short story very much, the right mix of horror and sci-fi. Please keep writing! And congrats on your first Curie upvote ;)
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@beckieg ·
hi, lovely to meet you, thank you for popping in to visit my little corner of steemit your kind words and support are very much appreciated and it was lovely to find your comment when i woke up, thank you very much i hope you have an excellent day, much respect to you
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