### About the Poem *Billy and Caesar* is a poem about a man trying to catch an elusive fish and the respect he develops for it over the length of his quest. Beyond the story however, the poem is a metaphor for a man's search for God. https://i.imgsafe.org/80a2a45d2f.jpg *A Line Running Between* ### Caesar and Billy Billy takes wide and careful stride ending in teetering balance and rattling oars. His lantern, set on the dock, paints yellow highlights on the barbs of his hooks. His wife blows a kiss. Billy looks up, unlashes his boat and rows into darkness. The weathered aluminum hull glides like a homemaker’s iron smoothing black silk to a spot out beyond Preacher’s Point. A weed line of hydrilla and coon tail where moonlight and lillies play tag in a remnant of wake. Billy puts up his oars and lets down the anchor, deep, deep, deep into subconscious mystery where a leviathan catfish wallows in a depression of algae and muck. Billy knows he is there, has been watching his shadow all summer with never a bite. He calls the fish Caesar and tells him the bait he prepared is too good to pass up. But Caesar understands hooks and exhales small pod of bubbles that boils to the surface. Billy lights a cigar, watches the smoke encircle a star. A transistor radio is playing the gospel. Billy tells Caesar his joys and his sorrows then drifts into slumber. Caesar thump on his line but spits out the bait. Billy jumps up, he knows that it's Caesar. https://i.imgsafe.org/80a3dd3042.jpg ### Background *Billy and Caesar* is poem that seems to have a mind of its own. It has been on and off my desk for about ten years in various forms of re-writes. I keep trying to direct it and tell it what to do, but the poem is always rebelling and taking me in different directions. Strangely I really don't mind; I can be patient and will wait to see just what it is the poem wants to teach me. https://i.imgsafe.org/80a3dd3042.jpg ### Thank you for supporting my work. * FOLLOW ME @beginningtoend * Comment and I will try to reply. * Visit my website [GOO FOO](http://dalepattersonart.com/). https://i.imgsafe.org/083eaba7ce.jpg ### Writing and art are my own.
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Amazing work. I really enjoyed the imagery. I was captivated, completely. There's so much depth here.
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Thanks
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It seems that Billy and Ceasar have finally bent to your will. Please check out my poetry contributions; I value your opinion, given the quality of your work.
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Do check out my poems too
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Wow, the imagery here is top notch. The aluminum hull on the lake image was particularly poignant. I feel like this poem wants to be a fully fleshed novel, maybe that's why it's been haunting your desk for the past decade? The material and theme you are covering are certainly enough to fill the pages, and your way with words would guarantee that I'd read it cover to cover.
author | prufarchy |
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Thanks, I have tried to write long things but find that I am too much of a perfectionist. I can't keep writing further because I am always going back to do rewrites. I hear the F. Scot Fitzgerald was that way with his writng. He drive himself crazy perfecting each page. thanks for reading, all the best.
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I completely understand that sentiment! Steemit actually helped me break out of a block when I teamed up with @timsaid and others to collaborate on some community stories. It forced me to commit and afterwards made me want to hit "post" more and more. This isn't to try and convince you or anything, I respect your view wholeheartedly. I just really enjoy your writing style and have never been in a position (before steemit) to speak so often with authors I read. Ok, fine, I'm going to try and convince you... over time ;)
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