<div class='text-justify'> <center></center> <center><sub>[Photo by Yaroslav Shuraev:](https://www.pexels.com/photo/woman-in-blue-dress-under-cloudy-sky-4938095/)</sub></center>  When the young ones grow With lots of expectations and hope With mountainous dreams about the morrow Of which only time will tell Not even the wise can tell for sure The fulfillment of man's lofty goals But the heed to wise counsel fosters The realization of youthful vision. One that has a million dreams Should neither be a dreamer nor victim Of fantasies without virtuosity In realizing ones thoughts Cause change is the ultimate goal One who wishes to catch up With time that definitely will tell If one be a realist or a dreamer. Unless one to his cabin withdraws And goes back to the drawing board The moment he stumbles over a stump He's bound to wallow in the ocean Of failures and stifled dreams He must be conscious of the fact That time will tell man's ability To manage failure and the like. <hr> <hr> <center></center> <center><sub>[Photo by Yaroslav Shuraev:](https://www.pexels.com/photo/woman-in-blue-dress-under-cloudy-sky-4938095/)</sub></center>  [Esp] Cuando los jóvenes crecen Con muchas expectativas y esperanza Con sueños montañosos sobre el mañana de los que solo el tiempo dirá Ni siquiera los sabios pueden decirlo con certeza. El cumplimiento de las altas metas del hombre. Pero la atención a los sabios consejos fomenta La realización de la visión juvenil. Uno que tiene un millón de sueños No debe ser ni un soñador ni una víctima De fantasías sin virtuosismo Al darse cuenta de los pensamientos Porque el cambio es el objetivo final El que desea ponerse al día Con el tiempo eso definitivamente lo dirá Si uno es realista o soñador. A menos que uno a su camarote se retire Y vuelve a la mesa de dibujo El momento en que tropieza con un tocón Está obligado a revolcarse en el océano De fracasos y sueños ahogados Debe ser consciente del hecho Ese tiempo dirá la habilidad del hombre Para gestionar el fracaso y similares.  <hr> <sub>[Also posted here](https://blurtlatam.com/blurtpoem/@blurtpoem/poem-the-pregnant-morrow-eng-esp)</sub>
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Greeting fellow poet. 🤝 So I usually don't read poems but something told me to give this one a try, and I'm glad I did. I **love** the message, or what I got out of it anyway. Dreaming is essential, but we have to have the fortitude to be steadfast in the face of obstacles. Dreams are not reality and we must treat it as such. Good shit. 👍 My only suggestion/critique (and this only applies if you want to get better 🙂) is to weave the metaphors together. For instance, what if the entirety of the poem is in a forest? That way all your metaphors add to one another. Instead of falling in the ocean, you fall in a cave or whatever. You get me? This adds another level to the poem, gives in depth, volume, as it were. Anyways. Good stuff. Hope to read more in the future. 😁 🍻
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Hmmm, I never thought about that, thanks for the idea, I appreciate 🧡🧡
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👏✍️💪💰💯
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