I like your use of vague pronouns like "they". I wonder who "they" are. I also like the vague use of "here" and "there", for the same reason. Alongside the imagery these terms create a transindental quality to the poem that for me references a human's ability to exist not only in the physical but in the mental in many different ways, and the spiritual as well. The last line is my favorite. For me loan is the frothy mixture produced when water hits itself, where the impurities bubble and firm a stagnant foam. I envision a writer impressing a calloused heart onto loan (a substance that can be almost anything). Thought provoking. I like it. 😎

Wow, excellent place to make photo-shoot!

this is the best wow so nicely and creatively written :)

You chose the right pics to help create the imagery.

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Saya mengamati puisimu @d-pend saya menangkap ada filosofi hidup yang hendak kau bagi baik tentang keindahan semesta maupun dengan sisi lain mengumpulkan keberanian dan mengubur dalam-dalam ketakutan

I love how you use italics to create contrast between worlds. You have such creative observation skills and keen imagination. You create near perfect analogies to connect these pictures to both the world we live in and worlds unknown. I love that your poems always take me to places I’ve never been and stretch my horizons.

Wow beautiful poem I am spritual poem writer check my blog if you want will find some heartful poem  will join discord server for poetry classes.
Thanks mate for let us know Cheers :)

Again metaphysical sedimentary poetry @d-pend. I am a rock. 

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Well written poem @d-pend. The pictures which you select, give the true meanings of your poetry.

Beautifully written poem

This bring back memory in me. A grieving period that resonated again and again. It is well

In leather binding, laced with salt,
    Pages etched in iron groves.
    Soul is here in sanguine lines,
    Trickling down the slopes to flow
    Through soft lithography—

All is relative and all leave their mark over that which they pass, changing minds and hearts, the placement of heavy things, the flight of the soft, and even the course of rivers. 

Wonderful exploration into the esoteric, Daniel:)

NICE POEM
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such as the flow of water will penetrate the pores until it finds the estuary
the sound goes through the media to the ear until  to  ear
like the wind that always blows into the empty spaces
to occupy the softness of thought and taste
it is knowledge that makes us more wise
to dispel doubts in the work
bring our minds to one success
with the community reach the top
when others think to destroy
let's get rid of the debris
when others think to discredit
let's wake up with positive energy
to achieve success

I am glad I attended your class yesterday. Learned so much in one sitting. I wish I had not missed the previous ones. 
To me, the above poem reflects the state of affairs now- the younger generation not wising up and the wise souls disperse and the remaining are returned to the soil.

stones are so full of magic
in Russia we say: "Even walls have ears", meaning they can hear and remember everything

But I have the same idea when I'm looking at stones. How much they saw, how much they knew, and how much they can "tell" us if we can "feel" them

stones are used in many rituals, they're really powerful

and the last photo is just wow!

@d-pend the Poet. Thanks for your poems as they leave me smiling