Writing (Week 7) by dragonslayer109

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writing · @dragonslayer109 · May 29 '17

$106.42

Writing (Week 7)

A week of hell awaits! I honestly don't know where I am going to find the time to do everything I need to do. Why does all my friends choose to get married now...?

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-xf86fiKffqg/VQcdueYQOhI/AAAAAAAAFio/KSZM63qD1CA/s1600/go-panic-it-s-hell-week.png
[Image credit](http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-xf86fiKffqg/VQcdueYQOhI/AAAAAAAAFio/KSZM63qD1CA/s1600/go-panic-it-s-hell-week.png)

At least some joy came out of looking at my class work. Awkward sentences, oh man this will be interesting to learn! I never knew a sentence could be awkward. Reminds me of something like this, but still how can a sentence be like this:

https://m.popkey.co/7460bd/4M89V.gif
[Gif credit](https://m.popkey.co/7460bd/4M89V.gif)

Grammar lesson:

* Avoid Awkward Sentences

Paragraph and Essay Development:

* Transitions and Coherence
* Integrating Quotations
* Paraphrasing, Summarising, and Quoting

So as this week is the week of my cousins wedding I will be in a house surrounded by complete chaos. I will enjoy laughing at everyone stressing, I find joy in that. We all need to find some joy in stressful times. 

I am also singing at this wedding, I really feel sorry for the peoples ears. The song chosen is really nice:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Q3UM67a66g
[Video credit](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Q3UM67a66g)

Time to let the cats die!!!

*Just on a little side note for self improvement. I will be doing 1 push-up for every 1$ earned on my posts and will give a short feedback every day at the end of each post. As promised I will be doing 83 pushups, today, for the previous post. Any not done will carry onto the next day. 40 is carried over to the next day.*

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@allasyummyfood · May 29 '17

really good one!! thanks!!!

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@anarcho-andrei · May 29 '17

You're a crazy, glorious bastard.  I love you.

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@freertomorrow · May 29 '17 (edited)

@dragonslayer109, if it is hard to find time to write when your friends are getting married, imagine how tough it is when you are the person getting married! My wedding was just a civil service event here in Ecuador, but it still blew a hole in my work schedule.

As for the sentence fragments and so on, I've found books like Zinsser's, "On Writing Well" to be helpful. 

![](http://freertomorrow.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/05/on-writing-well.jpg)

For more interactive help, you might try the Hemingway Editor at http://www.hemingwayapp.com/

Now that I mention it, I need to get back to using both of those more regularly myself!

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@dragonslayer109 · May 29 '17

Wow thank you, I will definitely check this out and improve my writing. I am so happy I am not the one getting married.

👍 freertomorrow

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@funnyman · May 29 '17

CoOL! Learning a lot from you man! :)

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@looftee · May 29 '17

$0.03

If someone give me money, I would do 2 Pushups for each dollar, I might get fit as well as rich by doing so. Great.

👍 looftee

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@dragonslayer109 · May 29 '17

Hahaha well I needed the excuse to get fit

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@looftee · May 29 '17

that's great.

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@sulev · May 29 '17

You hands will explode like that from all the excess awesomeness you are pumping into them each day all thanks to steemit.
Then the laugh will be on you, pun intended :D

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@dragonslayer109 · May 29 '17

hahaha true that

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@thankyoujay · May 29 '17

Hey @dragonslayer109! I feel like Ed Sheeran's "Perfect" is a great song for a wedding. Also, that's awesome that you're doing one push-up per $1 earned. I might have to adopt the same habit myself. I was randomly browsing and came across your content. Good luck at the wedding!

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@dragonslayer109 · May 29 '17

Thank you. I would love it if people started to join in on the pushups. It would be really cool if everyone did so

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