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Maya's Compartmentalized Forest - Part 2 by dwixer

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Maya's Compartmentalized Forest - Part 2
[part 1](https://ecency.com/hive-199275/@amirtheawesome1/mayas-compartmentalized-forest-part-1) by @amirtheawesome1. *This article is a continuation of a story written by the above user. Check it out for better understanding of the part 2*


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The gear turned, interlaced with another, and another. His eyes traced the inner workings of the machine to the place where the light shone. Vertical wrinkles appear between the wolf's eyebrows, it gazes around as if searching for where the scream is emanating from. The wolf weakened by the repel stared at the shimmer of light and back to where Maya and her mum stood. Maya had misunderstood his intent, he was trying to save her from a danger, nothing seemed right in this forest, the one who had transformed him into a wolf was planning a bigger evil for Maya. The squinching of machines, the darkness, and the arching of the forest tree wasn't what Maya had built, only him and Maya knew this, only them, the only crime he had committed was leaving  without a goodbye. His howling resounded in the encaged forest each time he tried to communicate this with Maya, he lowered his brows disappointed in what he had become.



"Why are you here?" Maya asked her mom again, her mum was everything but lovely, surprised to have seen her protecting her from a wolf was rather strange. She was the reason why she had come to the forest and why she had earlier wanted to jump from the cliff.


"You know why," she repeated. Maybe she was here to finish what she started and the only way was to buy her trust, Maya thought. 


"There's no one here with us. Just the two of us"  Maya's younger self whispered to her ears.


"Mom is here with us" Maya retort, but again the tiny voice whispered "There's no one here with us. Just the two of us". Maya turned in the direction where her mom stood but no one was there, fear gripped her as thick darkness enveloped the part of the forest where she stood. She heard the loud angry screaming again but this time so close to her, her knees became weakened, standing beside her was a ghost of her mum. She stood there motionless, stuck in the position with no life left inside of her. 



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[Photo Source](https://www.pexels.com/photo/women-s-black-coach-212410/)


"I've waited for this moment all my life, a moment when you would go extinct. You've helped me kill your dad, the wolf, I knew the voice sounded so familiar but he had come as a wolf while I was there in sheep clothing" Maya's mom said laughing instinctively.  Memories started to flash through Maya's mind, yes, now she remembered, she had been here before, the wolf, the light, the forest, her younger self, except, she paused, Eureka! the devil, that was her mum. She tried to withdraw herself from the beast standing before her but her legs couldn't carry her

"You can't escape from me" her mom who was now transformed said, piercing her long nails into her skin.  "It's no longer your happy forest, the same forest you've built with your dad will become your doom" she added. She picked up a metal that looks like a machine with gears and sharp edges and walked gently toward her humming. The machine squinched with the scream like that she heard in the forest, it was her mum all along. Suddenly the wolf dashed at Maya's mom, throwing her off balance. 

"Run" it said to Maya. She seemed to understand him now, she could see the pain in his eyes,  "run" he said again growling. Maya ran sobbing loudly in the woods. She had reached a far distance when she stopped, "it was her forest, she had created it, again she could bring back the colorful and beautiful sound that was in it" she said boldly wiping off her tears.


Maya's mom and the wolf's clashing could be heard in the woods throwing down trees and ripping off the green plants. Maya sneaked behind the trees while lurking her devilish mom, she stabbed her from behind using the metal that lay on the floor. She screamed and vanished into thin air, "I'll return" her voice echoed among the trees.  The wolf lay helplessly on the floor beaten by the magic from Maya's Mom, "rebuild this forest" he said to Maya who held him passionately lying in his pool of blood.


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@amirtheawesome1 ·
It's very cool setting up a story and still getting surprised by the outcome. You have done a great taking this story an even more uncharted territory and I am actually now glad that we didn't speak about the conclusion prior as I had different ideas but this was great and influencing it to go any other way would have been a crime. 

Great job. Don't forget to submit it to Dreemport today if you haven't. 
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@dwixer ·
Thank You for this feedback. I'm glad you find it to fit just fine for what you started. 

I'll definitely submit it on dreemport 
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@balikis95 ·
Wow, this is nicely written, and I just had fun reading it. It is like in the movies.
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@dwixer ·
Wow! Glad to know someone had a lot of fun reading through the story. 🥂
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@balikis95 ·
Yeah, I did.
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@deraaa ·
I never saw that coming! Wow! You really outdid yourself on this one. What a story and the suspense and the thrill was something. You had my heart racing back there. 
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@dwixer ·
Thank You deraa, glad you loved all the thrill and twist
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@pizzabot · (edited)
RE: Maya's Compartmentalized Forest - Part 2
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@samsmith1971 ·
What a brilliant twist to the tale. You took the story in a completely different direction and made the good guy bad and the bad guy good. I did not see that coming! I actually went back and reread part 1 to see if you had broken logic... but nope... it all works just fine! Nice one @dwixer - great flow in the story. I was very satisfied with this ending. !PIZZA !ALIVE
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@dwixer ·
Thank You. I am glad to know the ending is satisfactory. I was hoping to give a little suspense with the twist 
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@wrestlingdesires ·
What a wonderful surprise ending 🙌 I hope Maya will do as her father wants :)


!PIZZA !ALIVE !LOL
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@dwixer ·
I believe she will.
Thank You for your kind comment 
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@wrestlingdesires ·
My pleasure, keep up the great work 🙌


!PIZZA !ALIVE !LOL
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