<html> <p><img src="https://i.supload.com/BJePTRtPx.jpg" width="640" height="435"/></p> <p><a href="https://supload.com/BJePTRtPx">source</a></p> <p>"I'm never going back. No I won't go back"</p> <p>It almost seemed as though those words were the fuel my spirit needed to keep pushing on. </p> <p>My breath was starting to lose me. My eyes were already retreating but my spirit kept pushing. </p> <p>It was totally black ahead of me. I had no idea where I was. I could hear sounds from around but couldn't see anything.</p> <p>I had been running for a while and couldn't find my way out. I could not imagine stopping; it wasn't an option at all. I had to keep trying. </p> <p>I tried until my legs could no longer carry me, then I hit the floor.</p> <p>Next thing, it was as though I was floating. I wasn't breathing heavily, there was no pain. This place was nowhere like where I was before. It was different but quite similar. It was very bright all around but I still couldn't see anything. </p> <p>Then I started to feel my hands dangle. "Where am I?" </p> <p>I began to hear those noises again. They were far away at first, then drew closer with time. I wished so hard that I could have a clue as to what was going on. </p> <p>I tried moving my body but only my hands moved. I could not see anything apart from the bright light, no matter how hard I tried. </p> <p>"Will she be okay?" a voice had said. I could finally start to make sense of the chattering my ears have been endlessly bombarded with all along. </p> <p>That was good news. At least they speak my language. This however brought more pain than joy to me. The questions began to pour in. </p> <p>"Where am I?" </p> <p>"Why are they asking if I'll be okay?" </p> <p>"What happened to me?" </p> <p>These questions kept bugging my mind till the lights came on again and I began to notice strange shapes floating around. It was all blurry but I could see one of these floating shapes come very close to me. </p> <p>"You'll be alright, Kathy" the voice said as it moved slowly away from me and back to the others. </p> <p>"Who is Kathy?" </p> <p>"You'll be just fine, Kathy" the voice replied and touched my head. I thought it just left to be with the others some seconds ago, or was there another one? </p> <p>I should have been overly scared but instead I felt some sort of calm. </p> <p>"I must be Kathy" I thought to myself and believed his every word. </p> <p>"I was very excited to wake up this morning. It was indeed a confusing and stressful dream." </p> <p>Aaron and May exchanged glances. Tears began to roll down May's eyes. </p> <p>"It wasn't a dream my dear" Aaron whispered. </p> <p><em>It wasn't a dream?</em> I mused. </p> <p>"No it wasn't" May reiterated as she tried to wipe the tears off her face. </p> <p>I was confused. What do they mean? Why are they crying? </p> <p>I tried to readjust myself and sit up a little more but I couldn't. </p> <p>"May, why can't I sit up?" I waited for an answer but none was coming. </p> <p>"May..." I was going to repeat my question when I looked up and couldn't find either one of them. </p> <p>The room looked different too. It was a glass house overlooking a lawn that led down to the lake. </p> <p>There was a dog running in circles, trying its best to get a hold of the toy bone that was being dangled in front of him by two kids. They looked happy. It was a beautiful scenery until they all stopped. </p> <p>"Mummy. Mummy" the kids seemed to scream in unison as they made for the room where I was laying. I wanted to cover my head with the duvet but there was no duvet. I was not on any bed either. It was a classic style rocking chair. Must have belonged to someone's grandfather. </p> <p>"Mummy" the kids were now in the room. Apart from the fact that they looked so cute, I had no idea who they were. </p> <p>How was I supposed to respond? Do I have kids now? When did this happen? Where am I? </p> <p>These many questions in my head and the kids didn't seem to notice, at least that's what I thought, until I felt someone pull my hand. </p> <p>"Mummy why are you not saying anything?" </p> <p>"Hey, what did I tell you about troubling your mom?" a voice said from the doorway. </p> <p>Your mom? I'm a mom? They are my kids? </p> <p>"Daddy, mummy isn't talking to us. What's wrong with her?" </p> <p>Oh now this is getting interesting. I'm married to this Greek god looking man and we have two kids? </p> <p>"Eleanor is awake. Go play with her" </p> <p>"Okay daddy" the girls said as they skipped out of the room. </p> <p>A wave of sadness swept through my entire being. These kids had looked very excited to see me and I couldn't match their enthusiasm. I didn't act like mummy should have acted. </p> <p>"Don't feel bad dear, you'll get better with time." </p> <p>I was very certain I had heard that voice before. It was way too familiar. </p> <p>"I have questions..." </p> <p>"I know you do, and you'll definitely have the time to ask them all but not now." </p> <p>This was the same voice that put me to sleep the other time. It was the same voice I was telling May and Aaron about. It was the same voice because it was beginning to make me feel the same way I felt then. </p> <p>The lights went out and from then on, I began to long for the darkness as it became my way of escape from the chaos I've found myself in lately.</p> <p><hr></p> <p> <a href="https://steemit.com/fiction/@fisteganos/technically-incorrect-two">Next Page</a></p> </html>
| author | fisteganos |
|---|---|
| permlink | technically-incorrect |
| category | fiction |
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Great start!! Wow, nice, I am already engaged, wondering what happened here. Heading to the next one ;)
| author | dreemit |
|---|---|
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I'm happy you like it. Reborn got me hooked from the first post about it. I'm only just starting out so your words mean a lot 😊
| author | fisteganos |
|---|---|
| permlink | re-dreemit-re-fisteganos-technically-incorrect-20170129t173508939z |
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You are a writer my friend, if this is you just starting out then I am super excited about your future!
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|---|---|
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Nice!
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|---|---|
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Haha. Coming from you, I feel on top of the world. I'm sure there are ways you could rewrite it but this comment means a whole lot to me. @smalltalk I see what you did there. I can't be that calm when I get this type of remarks.
| author | fisteganos |
|---|---|
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"Thanks 😊 Doing all I can to prepare for the big one 😃" he said.
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