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Im trying to learn writing a story. by hirowb

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Im trying to learn writing a story.
# Writing story can be easy as a pie. 
I can write 1500 words in one day or more. But the hard part is the "wordplay" and everything you need to know about constructing the storyline and the character personality. The storyline must be balanced, connected, logic and a wave of event.

If you just write with a straight line the story wouldn't that great and it just going to die in a flat line. That is my current problem right now. I did make it to the fifth chapter but as I read what I wrote it just give me a giggle. BECAUSE ITS HORRIBLE THE WAY I REPRESENT IT IN WORDS HAHAHA. but very very different in whats going in my thoughts and the way I imagine it.

Like the detailed of the scene where the Guy stand still in a middle of a road that in the world of the apocalypse. i even can see and imagine so perfectly detailed where there's a crack in the road, the car still burning while there's a dead people underneath the car trapped, a smokey wind with a greyish dust and the air mix with the smell of blood and dead bodies and the smoke everything mix in one aroma.
The person cloth, I can see every detailed in his pants. but when I tried to convert it to text, I hardly to translate it into good words to represent what I'm trying to say.

The detailed of the texture of everything is very hard for me to translate into a paragraph, why I need to write it down because I want it people to see what I see and feel the situation at that time with a background music that maybe intense music or sad but glad at the same time confuse, happy, and felt lost in the same time.
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### "READ A BOOK !"
YES, i did, but to be honest i am so lazy to read the novel. I just love to imagine and write but when comes to reading to be honest i never read any novel or book unless i've bI'veforced to do it or i love the book. I can remember what book that i read and i can count. That's how many books that i read like sci-fi theory book, Stephen Hawkins book, nikola tesla, and some physics.

I like movies, I like to watch every movie that has an interesting concept of The City Of Ember.
Where there's a small survivor of human mankind left in the world that had been forced to live underground to keep the mankind survive the hideous catastrophy that almost wipes out everything. So a small colony had been survived long enough and its time to emerge out to earth surface lived like once again how people lived in modern society above the ground.

Or maybe if you guys watch Back to the future. Where it connected to logic and science fiction theory where the butterfly effect. if you step on a butterfly you can change the future. if you pick a pebble on the ground and change its position it might have a huge impact that can change the human course in the future. Or maybe you ruin the first timeline and it will make Three new Timeline where if you start at one Dot and end to Only one Dot but since you make a new timeline so you will start at One dot but you can either end with The second dot or the third dot. The new timeline has been created or so do speak it might open to another parralel universe. 
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