RE: A tale of two pizzas - the secret's in the dough! by iskafan

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hive-150329 · @iskafan · Sep 24 '21

Now, where is Charlie and where does the come in again? Cos I lost him when you began to describe the tablet with the secret recipe 

I hope there is a continuation though

👍 samsmith1971

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@samsmith1971 · Sep 24 '21 (edited)

ha ha ...@iskafan ... we shall have to wait and see which contest entry is chosen as the next chapter in the story by @dibblers.dabs who will then write a new chapter himself before inviting the next chapter from anyone who wants to enter the contest. Hopefully there will be a blockchain novella published by the end of it. you should follow the link in my post and read the full story so far. It's really well written and full of intrigue :-) Why don't you have a go too after you up to speed? :-) Then you can choose for Charlie to be and do whatever you choose in your version of the story😊
I wanted to move the story forward with a few characters which is why the first part of the chapter is focused on Charlie's perspective and the second on Otto's.

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@iskafan · Sep 24 '21

>I wanted to move the story forward with a few characters which is why the first part of the chapter is focused on Charlie's perspective and the second on Otto's.

Well, you did justice to this point and it came out beautifully 

>Why don't you have a go too after you up to speed? :-) Then you can choose for Charlie to be and do whatever you choose in your version of the story😊

I have no idea if I am good with forming characters as you do.... You and @wrestlingdesires do have a thing for this stuff .. thanks for the offer though

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@samsmith1971 · Sep 24 '21

"I have no idea if I am good with forming characters".... you won't find out unless you try ;-) And I'm sure you will do a great job. Just pretend that you are the character. See things from their perspective. Feel what they would feel. Think what they would think. When you imagine yourself as a character and view everything else as external, you shift your perspective entirely from outward looking in,to inward looking out :-) I hope that gives you a bit of an idea of how I internalise the creative process.

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