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Write Club report: First story drafted!
Today was a great day! I reached an important milestone in my Write Club journey and completed the first draft of the first of 8 stories I will write during the 16 weeks. I realize it may not sound like an enormous achievement, but this is one of my longer stories. 

For a little perspective, my typical stories for Steemit are about 750-1,500 words. That's 1-2 pages of writing. (For some examples, see the list of my Steemit short stories on my [intro post](https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@jayna/re-introducing-myself).) The requirement for Write Club stories is 1,500 to 7,000, which means the range is from about 2 pages to about 14 pages. My first story is over 6,000 words - about 13 pages. But it's fun and readable, I think!

![sparkler-677774_960_720.jpg](https://steemitimages.com/DQmTVvEDuwyCYBphX5mR6t3P9hykaPzbh9oqso7kDZzHtrW/sparkler-677774_960_720.jpg)
Image credit: Pixabay

<H2>What's next?</H2>
Well, when I say drafted, that means that the basic story is in place. It has a beginning, a middle, an end, and a storyline with hopefully interesting, complex characters. Now I'm letting it rest for a bit until tomorrow, when I will look at it with hopefully fresh eyes and begin the editing process. I expect that to take a good chunk of hours tomorrow (thank goodness it's the weekend), followed by a rest and another edit on Monday. 

And then the peer editing cycle begins. The 8 of us will read each other's stories, and there's an editing process where everyone's story will be critiqued by at least a few other writers. 

I know what you're thinking. Why does writing and editing a story take so long? Well, it depends on a number of factors, including the length and complexity of the story. And in my case, I have to work my writing around my full-time job and other commitments. But in general, if you have a fairly lengthy and complex story (which I do), and if you want it to be polished enough to submit to literary magazines at the end of it all (which I do), the process of writing, editing, and polishing a story can be very involved indeed!

Thanks for reading. If you want to know more about Write Club, click the #writeclub tag.

*If you are a writer seeking community and support, you can find editors to help you at [The Writers’ Block on Discord](www.mspfictionworkshop.com/how-to-join-the-workshop/).*

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@caleblailmusik ·
Good job!! Now we just have to survive editing and critiquing and we’re home free (till we have to write another story :p )
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@jayna ·
Yes! (*Queue Rocky song.*)
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@naquoya ·
Writing stories of that length is no easy task. Especially when we get so used to the regular Steemit length of approx 1000-1500 words. I too have found these to be the ideal length, given attention spans, and competing interests. I wrote a couple of longer stories last year, but broke them up into posts of that lengths. But it is hard work. i can understand why it takes the time it takes. Particularly with a full time job and other commitments.

Editing is the big time killer. And it needs to be done right, doesn't it. And I am pointing the finger squarely at myself right now!
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@nobyeni ·
I also feel those fingers pointed at me... It's great to be surrounded by people like @jayna who take things serious. No time to slack! On to writing & editing!
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@naquoya ·
Yes I agree. The writing groups at discord are helping me focus on writing issues beyond just writing down words. And I keep an eye on the wonderful @jayna's work as she does have insight in this area. But like you say, no time to slack (echoed by my internal editor...)
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