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Writing With Bubbles
<p>I use a simple method when writing that helps me quickly organize everything I am going to put in a piece without requiring a lot of time and effort.</p>
<p>Organization is critical to good writing because it keeps things in order and allows the logical separation of ideas, but when students get taught organization for writing (if they are even taught organization!) it often takes the form of rote formula.</p>
<p>I use a method I call the bubble method. It's not sophisticated, but it's scalable and helpful for very simple organization.</p>

<p>The first step is to set the outer extent of a work. This is as large (e.g. a book) or as small (e.g. a 500-word blog post) as it needs to be, but it's not the largest component.</p>
<p>When I write fiction, this is something like a mixture of a character and event, and is a synopsis:</p>
<blockquote class="wp-block-quote has-text-align-center"><p>"The narrator is walking home from the bus station after a first date."</p>
</blockquote>
<p>When I write non-fiction, this takes the form of a thesis statement:</p>
<blockquote class="wp-block-quote has-text-align-center"><p>"I will explain the way I organize my writing."</p>
</blockquote>
<p>Once I've created my outer bubble, I fill in interior bubbles with all the required elements.</p>
<p>One is going to be the introduction, and one will be the conclusion. When I taught students this method, I'd give them formulaic introductions and conclusions to use as they wrote (e.g. begin with an overview of the topic, move to a relevant detail, provide your thesis; invert that for your conclusion), but I don't consciously do that with my writing.</p>
<p>For this piece, I would've drawn the organizational structure out as an overall bubble (the piece itself) and labeled it with my thesis statement above; then moved into each of the individual components.</p>
<p>For a piece of fiction–let's use <a class="keychainify-checked" href="http://kwilleywrites.com/fiction-friday-the-laughing-maiden" data-type="post" data-id="57">The Laughing Maiden</a> from a few weeks ago–this might take a slightly more complex form.</p>
<ul><li>The protagonist is seeking the Holy Grail<ul><li>They stop in the town</li><li>He scouts it out<ul><li>He finds nothing to worry about</li><li>The others are gone</li></ul></li><li>He retires<ul><li>He is the last traveler still awake</li><li>He doubts his abilities and is physically weak</li></ul></li><li>He meets the Maiden<ul><li>She introduces herself</li><li>She knows the secret of the Grail hunt</li><li>She leaves him hanging on a question</li></ul></li><li>Their conversation is interrupted</li><li>The protagonist ends his recollection with a rhetorical question</li></ul></li></ul>
<p>You can see that I don't require symmetry within these bubbles. The structure is flexible, going down to each point as required without being dogmatically required to do much in a single bubble.</p>
<p>However, by keeping things within bubbles, you can track ideas (in nonfiction) or events (in fiction) coherently. There is no chance of the Maiden talking to the protagonist outside the bubble she appears in.</p>
<p>It also gives pacing control.  The most interesting parts of the story may have a single bubble that contains multiple bubbles, showing the focus. Less interesting places are important to set up scenes, but don't have as many sub-points.</p>
<p>I use this organizational method because it's fairly simple and flexible, so it doesn't eat into my time and can scale up to larger formats. It is a great tool to keep ideas in their right place and prevent random errors.</p>
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@maddogmike ·
This is a great way to lay everything out before starting to write the main story.  Makes writing much easier to manage your content as you go.  I have never tried this but I can see how it will simplify the whole process.
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@kwilley ·
Thanks! I've used this process for a while now. It emerged out of a mix of tight deadlines that required very fast drafting and editing schedules (I used to do daily posts over at @loreshapergames before I started my MFA and had to abandon that) and Pulp Fiction, of all things. I only really started applying it to creative writing later, but considering what the inspiration was it  was a natural transition.
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@ph1102 ·
I'm using a similar method with my content creation... Bubbles inside the big bubble... and at the end, I connect the bubbles... :) (If the topic isn't chronological...)

Thanks for sharing... And yes, it would be great if children would learn more about organizing things and thoughts... 
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@kwilley ·
I was actually thinking of doing a post this week or next talking about doing the connections in different styles (e.g. how you might do it for a nonfiction narrative or creative writing context), so you've successfully anticipated my next move 😛
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@ph1102 ·
Hehehe... As you have written it down, now you have to do it!
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@pixiepost ·
My brain likes this organizational technique. I haven't heard of the bubble method per se, but I do use a similar approach when I do write. Sometimes, I even do this for some of my videos when planning out what I am going to talk about or do.

I think this is a much easier way of formulating your ideas & giving yourself a clear path of what you're going to write about. Once you have the parts written out, you just connect the dots & there you have it. 

Thank you for sharing this. I really like this idea. It was a good reminder for me to go back to it. :) 
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@kwilley ·
Thanks! I'm hoping to do something of a deeper dive on this this week, though I'm not sure if I've got my thoughts in order to do so yet.
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@pixiepost ·
That sounds awesome! Don't worry - you will figure it out. It can take time, which I can understand lol.
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@russellstockley ·
we often talk about using mindmaps for planning and devloping our business but also there are some that need to plan their writing, 

This is particularly usefull for those that are new to blogging or writing fiction

Blog posts themselves need to be treated like an essay, essentially creating 4 simple bubble to stem from, Introduction, Question, Support, Conclusion

This is very much a mind mapping process and is something that can benefit everyone for just about any process.

This is particularly helpful when writing because it helps you to stay on track.

Thanks for sharing your post with us @kwilleywrites

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@kwilley ·
Thanks!

I've found that organization is really helpful for people as one of those things that gets ignored as "extra effort" but then becomes the easiest way to get over things and just go.
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