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Carta ao amigo & O tango mortal(poemas) - Letter to a friend & The mortal tango(poems) by malgarise

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Carta ao amigo & O tango mortal(poemas) - Letter to a friend & The mortal tango(poems)
Estou participando com esses dois poemas de um concurso de poesia aqui no Brasil, pela Editora Vivara, o que significa que um deles pode ser publicado num livro que vai ser uma coletânea dos melhores poetas que participaram! Sintam-se livres para mostrar suas opiniões nos comentários, eu gostaria muito de ouvir :)

**Carta Ao Amigo**

Tenho visto-te ainda, por aí,
incompleto, como não você
como cada um em que te vi tivesse roubado uma parte de ti,
mas todos estes continuam incapazes de ser-te, verdadeiro…
Àqueles que têm o teu rosto
falta a decoração nos braços
Àqueles que têm teu sorriso
falta conhecer um fato teu…
pois não víamos-te sorrindo.

Para nós, que somos ímpios,
é doloroso não ter um depois
somos como pagãos sem fogueiras ao redor das quais dançar
como cristãos sem túmulos aos quais carregar flores mortas…
Àqueles que creem, o Éden,
mas, a nós, nem um inferno.

Tenho visto-te ainda, no mais
como fosse uma loucura ver...
como transfigurado d’outro mundo para este, em breve tempo
nas pessoas, que desconhecemos e não desejamos conhecer…
Àqueles que têm teus braços
falta esta luz, suja, no cabelo
falta o balé sutil no mover-se
falta, mesmo que seja astroso,
todo o teu, defeito, defeituoso.

![the women on the shore - edvard munch.jpg](https://images.hive.blog/DQmY5RsAuodfVaHXguAtcz6sStAJkmP2SkSdUyAbkjw644T/the%20women%20on%20the%20shore%20-%20edvard%20munch.jpg)
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**O Tango Mortal**

Caronte não é a morte, mas anuncia o tango
e dançaremos como alegres, quando ocorrer
este tango que existe tenuemente entre-vida
e faz-nos ver desaparecer tudo que é perto…
Unimo-nos em casais, dançamos, morremos
durante a dança, apenas assistimos o morrer
n’este tango que soa tenuemente entre-vida
e faz-nos cegos ao que ainda está por surgir.

Este é um triste pensamento meu, que posso livremente dançar
assim como disse-me Discépolo que fizesse.
![melancolia III - edvard munch.jpg](https://images.hive.blog/DQmbWvAbxNvym2jXu7CKefjPVyUu83SM8sQAxNCX29Jn5BU/melancolia%20III%20-%20edvard%20munch.jpg)
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Obrigado por sua leitura e voto! :)

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I'm participating with these two poems in a poetry contest here in Brazil, by Editora Vivara, which means that one of them can be published in a book that will be a collection of the best poets who participated! Feel free to show your opinions in the comments, I would love to hear them :)

**Letter To A Friend**

I have been seeing you still, around
incomplete, like it was not you
like each person in which I saw you had stolen a part of you,
but all of them are still incapable of being you, truly...
To the ones who have your face
it lacks the decorations on the arms
To the ones who have your smile
it lacks knowledge of a fact of you...
for we did not see you smiling.

For us, who are wicked,
it is painful not to have an after
we are like pagans with no bonfires to dance around
and christians with no graves to put dead flowers on...
To the ones who believe, the Eden,
but, for us, not even a Hell.

I have been seeing you still, between lines
like it is craziness to see...
like you are transfigured from another world to this one, in brief time
in the people we do not know and do not wish to get to know at all...
To the ones who have your arms
it lacks this dirty light on the hair
it lacks the subtle ballet in the movements
it lacks, even though it is lugubrious,
all of your, defect, defectuous.
![the women on the shore - edvard munch.jpg](https://images.hive.blog/DQmY5RsAuodfVaHXguAtcz6sStAJkmP2SkSdUyAbkjw644T/the%20women%20on%20the%20shore%20-%20edvard%20munch.jpg)
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**The Mortal Tango**

Charon is not death, but he announces the tango
and we will dance like we are happy, when it happens
this tango exists faintly in the between-life
and makes us see desappearing all that is close...
We unite in couples, dance, die
during the dance, we only watch the dying
in this tango that sounds faintly in the between-life
and makes us blind to what is still to come.

This is a sad thought of mine, that i can freely dance
just the way Discépolo has told me to do.
![melancolia III - edvard munch.jpg](https://images.hive.blog/DQmbWvAbxNvym2jXu7CKefjPVyUu83SM8sQAxNCX29Jn5BU/melancolia%20III%20-%20edvard%20munch.jpg)
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Thank you for your attention and vote! :)



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