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Solo me falta tu presencia| La historia de David y Elena [ESP-ENG] by mariela53

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Solo me falta tu presencia| La historia de David y Elena [ESP-ENG]
<center><H3>***Solo me falta tu presencia| La historia de David y Elena.***</H3></center>

<center>***Esta historia está inspirada en hechos reales.***</center>



<div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-left">Elena estaba felizmente casada con David, llevaban una vida sin complicaciones. Llevaban más de veinte años de casados.  Parecían el encaje perfecto. Se llevaban muy bien. Sus encuentros íntimos eran los mejores que cada uno de ellos habían conocido. Eran el uno para el otro. Aun así se sentían felices, a pesar de no tener hijos. De tener hijos no estaba en sus planes, ya que Elena tenía problemas para concebir. Y salir embarazada pondría en riesgo su vida.</div> <div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-right">Elena was happily married to David, they led an uncomplicated life. They had been married for more than twenty years.  They seemed like the perfect fit. They got along very well. Their intimate encounters were the best each of them had ever known. They were right for each other. Yet they were happy, even though they had no children. Having children was not in their plans, as Elena was having trouble conceiving. And getting pregnant would put her life at risk.</div>
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<div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-left">Pasaron los años y Elena empecé a sentirla extraña. Se lo atribuía a procesos menopáusicos. A procesos hormonales. Nuestra vida sexual se fue deteriorando a tal punto que ya no teníamos encuentros íntimos. Hice todo lo posible por llevarla de paseo a la playa, que era el lugar que a ella más le gustaba, su lugar predilecto. Se medio animaba y contemplábamos el atardecer. La arrollaba con mis brazos y sentía su corazón latir incansablemente. Le susurraba en el oído y le pedía: -solo me falta tu presencia, te siento ausente amor. </div> <div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-right">Years went by and Elena began to feel strange. I attributed it to menopausal processes. To hormonal processes. Our sex life deteriorated to such an extent that we no longer had intimate encounters. I did my best to take her to the beach, which was the place she liked the most, her favorite place. She would half cheer up and we would watch the sunset. I would wrap my arms around her and feel her heart beating tirelessly. I whispered in her ear and asked her: -I only miss your presence, I feel you absent, love.</div>
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<div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-left">David muy angustiado por el estado de salud de su esposa. Decide buscar ayuda médica. Cada día Elena se deterioraba. Fue sometida a una serie de exámenes. Y con la triste noticia que el médico le informa a David. Elena sufre una enfermedad incurable. Y aparte de esa enfermedad estaba embarazada. La reacción de David fue de impotencia, confusión, tristeza, asombro, etc. No asimilaba la situación por la cual estaba pasando su amada esposa. Fueron momentos terribles para David. Pero algo en su interior le decía:-lucha, tú puedes. Eres un hombre valiente y puedes sacar a tu esposa adelante.</div> <div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-right">David is very distressed about his wife's health condition. He decided to seek medical help. Every day Elena deteriorated. She underwent a series of tests. And with the sad news the doctor informs David. Elena suffers from an incurable disease. And apart from that disease she was pregnant. David's reaction was one of helplessness, confusion, sadness, astonishment, etc. He could not assimilate the situation his beloved wife was going through. These were terrible moments for David. But something inside him said to him: "Fight, you can do it. You are a brave man and you can get your wife through this.</div>
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<div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-left">David se aferró con mucha fe y esperanza en Dios. Tuvo sostenidas conversaciones con él y le pedía encarecidamente que le salvara a su esposa y a su hijo que llevaba en su vientre. Se entregó en cuerpo y alma al cuido de su amada esposa. Pasaron los días y el vientre de Elena crecía y crecía. David conversaba con su hijo y le pedía: -cuida a tu mamá, solo un milagro puede salvarla. Estoy trabajando en eso. El médico visitaba semanalmente a Elena y practicaba una serie de exámenes. El eco revelaba que el bebé estaba muy bien. Para el doctor era algo asombroso. No lo podía creer como el bebé estaba evolucionando satisfactoriamente.</div> <div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-right">David clung with great faith and hope in God. He had sustained conversations with him and earnestly asked him to save his wife and the child he was carrying. He gave himself body and soul  soul to the care of his beloved wife. The days passed and Elena's belly grew and grew. David talked to his son and asked him: "Take care of your mother, only a miracle can save her. I am working on it. The doctor visited Elena weekly and performed a series of tests. The echo revealed that the baby was doing very well. It was amazing to the doctor. He couldn't believe how the baby was doing so well.</div>
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<div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-left">David incansablemente sus oraciones se convirtieron en parte de su jornada. Construyó él mismo un altar con la imagen de Jesús de la Misericordia. Y junto con su familia rezaban el rosario todos los días por la salud de su esposa y su hijo. Ya Elena iba para siete meses de embarazo y el médico aún no había revelado el sexo del bebé. No se dejaba ver el sexo, siempre estaba con las piernas cruzadas. Hasta que un día va el médico con su equipo de eco portátil y cuál es su mayor sorpresa que pudo revelar el sexo era una hermosa niña. David saltaba de alegría y por sus ojos brotaron lágrimas que recorrieron sus mejillas. Y salió corriendo hacia el altar y se hincó de rodillas para darle gracias a Dios.</div> <div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-right">David tirelessly made his prayers part of his journey. He built himself an altar with the image of Jesus of Mercy. And together with his family he prayed the rosary every day for the health of his wife and son. Elena was already seven months pregnant and the doctor had not yet revealed the sex of the baby. She did not let the sex be seen, she was always with her legs crossed. Until one day the doctor went with his portable ultrasound equipment and to his great surprise he was able to reveal the sex, it was a beautiful baby girl. David jumped for joy and tears flowed from his eyes and ran down his cheeks. And he ran out to the altar and knelt down on his knees to thank God.</div>
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<div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-left">Se acercaban los ocho meses de embarazo de Elena y el médico decide practicar una cesárea. Elena seguía recuperándose y el médico práctico nuevos exámenes sobre su enfermedad y era asombroso lo que observó no había rastros de la enfermedad. Pareciera que nunca había sufrido de esta cruel enfermedad. El médico tratante, en un tono de mucha alegría y asombro, le comunico a David: -estamos en presencia de un milagro. David salió corriendo hacia el altar, se volvió a hincar de rodillas y besando a Jesús de la Misericordia, le daba gracias mil gracias por el favor recibido. Elena y la niña están en óptimas condiciones. Se recuperaron satisfactoriamente. No lo podían creer si Elena estaba desahuciada. Y como volvió a la vida. Estos son misterios que la ciencia médica nunca ha podido dar explicación. David le susurraba en el oído a su amada Elena: -solo me falta tu presencia. Te confieso, amor mío, que soy el hombre más feliz del mundo y con nuestra hija tengo la felicidad completa. A la niña la pondremos Milagros de Jesús.</div> <div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-right">Elena was approaching eight months pregnant and the doctor decided to perform a cesarean section. Elena continued to recover and the doctor performed new tests on her illness and it was amazing what he observed, there was no trace of the disease. It seemed as if she had never suffered from this cruel disease. The attending physician, in a tone of great joy and amazement, told David: "We are in the presence of a miracle. David ran to the altar, knelt down on his knees and kissed Jesus of Mercy, thanking Him for the favor he had received. Elena and the little girl are in good condition. They recovered satisfactorily. They could not believe it if Elena was hopeless. And how she came back to life. These are mysteries that medical science has never been able to explain. David whispered in his beloved Elena's ear: "I only lack your presence. I confess to you, my love, that I am the happiest man in the world and with our daughter I have complete happiness. We will name the child Milagros de Jesus.</div>
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<div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-left">David Junto con su esposa, hija y familia, todas las tardes se dedicaban a rezar el santo rosario a Jesús de la Misericordia. Elena le susurraba a su esposo en el oído:-Aquí estoy amor de mi vida para acompañarte junto a nuestra hija por todo el resto de vida que nos queda. Y David le decía: -Porque solo me faltaba tu presencia para ser feliz y seguir adelante y ya estas aqui conmigo amor mio.</div> <div class="text-justify"> <div class="pull-right">David together with his wife, daughter and family, every afternoon they dedicated themselves to praying the holy rosary to Jesus of Mercy. Elena would whisper in her husband's ear: "Here I am, love of my life, to accompany you and our daughter for the rest of our lives. And David said to her: "Because all I needed was your presence to be happy and to move forward and now you are here with me, my love.</div>
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@davidpena21 ·
hola amiga, muy bonita historia, nunca hay que rendirse hasta el ultimo minuto de nuestra vida, dar todo, este joven,  pudo lograr lo que mas esperaba tener esa familia y gracias a dios todo están sano, ademas el amor es muy importante. Saludos.
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@mariela53 ·
Hola amigo @davidpena21 mientras hay vida hay esperanzas. Y la Fe mueve montañas. Saludos
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@davidpena21 ·
hola amiga, muy bonita historia, nunca hay que rendirse hasta el ultimo minuto de nuestra vida, dar todo, este joven,  pudo lograr lo que mas esperaba tener esa familia y gracias a dios todo están sano, ademas el amor es muy importante. Saludos.
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@fjjrg ·
Hermosa historia milagrosa, todo un reto para la ciencia, la cual, ante la presencia de Diso qeuda inservible.

Gracias por compartirla.
Saludos.
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@mariela53 ·
Gracias @fjjrg por comentar. Agradecida. Saludos
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@janettyanez ·
Una hermosa historia, donde el amor, la fe y la esperanza son los protagonistas, me gustó mucho tu relato, gracias por compartir 🤗 
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@liveofdalla ·
Que bonita historia amiga, es así, la fé nueve montañas y los medicos solo son instrumentos de Dios, si Dios así lo iba a querer Elena iba a tener a su bebé e iba a estar bien, hermosa historia de fé amiga.
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@mariela53 ·
Gracias amiga @liveofdalla que bueno que te haya gustado la historia. Muchísimas gracias por comentar. Saludos
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@mariela53 ·
Gracias amiga @janettyanez por compartir mi publicación. Agradecida. Saludos
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@susurrodmisterio ·
**(ENG)** Hello, I hope you have a happy afternoon, thank you for sharing your story in our community, it seems to me a very well done story, with an interesting development and as it is also based on real events, it leaves us multiple teachings from the point of view of human development, well done for that! I take this opportunity to give you the recommendation to use the long script or literary hyphen to start the dialogues, that will improve the visual appreciation of the reader. I leave you the link to our coding guide in case you don't know how to use it.

**(ESP)** Hola, espero que tengas una feliz tarde, gracias por compartir tu historia en nuestra comunidad, me parece un relato muy bien logrado, con un desarrollo interesante y como además, está basado en hechos reales, nos deja múltiples enseñanzas desde el punto de vista del desarrollo humano, ¡Bien por eso! Aprovecho para darte la recomendación de utilizar el guion largo o guion literario para iniciar los diálogos, eso mejorará bastante la apreciación visual del lector. Te dejo el enlace a nuestra, guía de códigos por si no sabes cómo usarlo.  

https://ecency.com/hive-132410/@hive-132410/aprende-como-usar-los-codigos-en-tus-publicaciones-con-susurrodmisterio-eng-es

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@mariela53 ·
Hola @susurrodmisterio gracias por la acotación. La tomaré en cuenta para las próximas publicaciones. Muy agradecida por facilitarme la guía de códigos. Saludos
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