![image.png](https://images.hive.blog/DQmd6AbNBSLwdGxDKwcSrosEUdiPDHKJuAvShKhhbs2tURg/image.png) https://pixabay.com/ It has never been this cold before. It is something that I have never known; It makes me think that I could not go on anymore, And it's a life that I'm ready to disown. The snow, as thick as the scars on my heart. The wind, as brittle as the light within me. I couldn't believe that living like this, apart. Something I thought I would never have to see. My face is white as snow Every time the wind tries to blow I never thought I missed the sun I never thought it will be gone. Your kindness, your warmth, and your smile. That thing that shines from at least a mile. And of course, I thought I'd never miss. Your delectably warm and sweet kiss. If this unknown and cold forest I shall take, Now that you're gone and I'm the only one awake. I'd rather be beside you, that's what I have found. And it doesn't matter even if it's six feet under the ground. ![aar.png](https://images.hive.blog/DQmVh4Abc6JAws3SMXqwVtKw6wLjahyNXGdaKbLXuCJCy6P/aar.png) This is my entry to this writing prompt: https://hive.blog/hive-161155/@freewritehouse/a-picture-is-worth-a-thousand-words-422022 Last time, I wrote a story and I wanted to try something different now and came up with a poem. It's just a short one but I like it. ##### What do I see? I see a forest in the middle of winter with a single path leading to nowhere. ##### What do I feel? Nothing much, I just feel the cold. Although it never bothered me anyway, LOL, I just felt the biting cold from this image. Instead of the path leading to the unknown, I just focused on the cold, mainly because I'm currently under the airconditioner in our office. Brrrr.... And that's how this image lead me to a cold world without a person I lived with and loved. I could imagine that living in the world, alone, and away from the warmth of your loved one will somehow look like this one in the image.
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I like it too. It reminds me of an old song, a duet about the sun. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. 👍
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My pleasure.. :)
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