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The story in series: Chapter Two
* [Introduction - Rules of Play](https://steemit.com/thestoryinseries/@michalis/the-story-in-series-has-begun-rules-of-play-win-at-least-10-sbd)
* [Special contest for Chapter Two]()
* [Prologue](https://steemit.com/thestoryinseries/@michalis/the-story-in-series-prologue)
* [Chapter One](https://steemit.com/thestoryinseries/@michalis/the-story-in-series-chapter-one)
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## Chapter Two
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First there was silence in her head. The shock was so great that her mind froze. No thought would come, as her brain was trying to comprehend what had just transpired. “ Marcus!” she shouted, and that first action was more of a reflex than anything else. But like a jump-start, this shout set her mind in motion and within a split second a river of thoughts flooded her head, as if a dam had broken. “Oh my God!” she shouted, as the rushing thoughts brought with them the harsh realization. *“Run to him! Go see!”*, said the first rational voice in her head, unfreezing her. *“Don’t get too close!”*, said the thought right after and made her stop a little short of the gaping, black hole. Her safety should come first. _“Call out to him again!”_ ordered her rational brain; _“see if you can see him”_. “Marcus!” she shouted once again and tried to look in the hole. But all she saw was darkness. 

And that was the last of her rational thoughts. That river had now taken over and one after the other, in unbelievably quick succession, came the thoughts that carried all the possible fates that Marcus had met. One in particular came again and again and it felt like a woodpecker pecking at her brain. _“He’s dead”_, said that thought. *“No, he might have just broken his legs”*, protested the next one. *“He’s dead”*, said the woodpecker again. *“He might just be unconscious”*, argued Zoe with herself. *“No, he’s dead”*, insisted the annoying thought, almost simultaneously. The silence that responded to her shouts could only enhance its persistence. 

“Oh God! Oh God!” she shouted, as the rate of the pecking in her mind became unbearable. “Marcus!” she cried, once again, in a desperate attempt to cast out her fear of the worst. Her voice broke at the end of his name. *“Why did my voice break?”* she asked herself, and that singular thought that ignored the pattern which had formed, gave her mind a chance to catch a breath. But, indeed, why did her voice break? Without having realized it, her eyes had filled with tears and now she burst to full out crying. “Marcus!!” she cried, literally.

![jez-timms-139495.jpg](https://steemitimages.com/DQma5gfeUtJmtvkxXp14tP5u6BBvEaQZx8qtfGu9r4VDDPX/jez-timms-139495.jpg)

“Ugh!” came a grunt in place of a verbal response from below. “Marcus? Marcus! Can you hear me?” she called, approaching the edge of the precipice. 
“Yes, Zoe…” responded Marcus. Zoe released a long awaited sigh of relief. It seemed like hours had passed since the earth gave in, but in reality it was only a few seconds. *“Suck it stupid thought!”* she said to herself triumphally.
“What? You were worried about me?” asked Marcus teasingly, but trying to laugh only resulted in another aching noise: “Ugh!” 
“Marcus! Are you alright?” asked Zoe worryingly.
“I hurt my back and I think I broke my leg”, replied Marcus.
“Try not to move”, shouted Zoe.
“I’ll try to get up”, said Marcus. He reached out in the darkness with his hand. “Shit! I can’t see a damn thing. Zoe! Throw me your phone!” he shouted upwards.
“What? Are you crazy?” replied Zoe, taken aback by the obviously irrational demand.
“I can’t see a damn thing down here! It’s pitch black! I need your flashlight!” replied Marcus.
“Marcus…” she hesitated. The first instinctive reaction was being set aside by a rational thought. These were special circumstances that demanded unconventional actions. She should give him the phone. It was the logical thing to do. Who could blame her for trying to help a man in need? But still. She couldn’t bring herself to make that decision. 

“Marcus, I can’t give you my phone. You know I can’t.”
“Zoe, please! I can’t see shit down here.”
“What if it breaks?” That was a reasonable argument, although she knew it was only an excuse.
“I’ve seen the case it wears. “The Force XL”? That thing doesn’t break even if you hit it with a sledgehammer. Zoe, please. I won’t tell anyone”. 

While trying to convince Zoe to throw him her phone, he was reaching out with his hand, trying to feel around to see if there was a rock or something to hold on to, when suddenly his hand touched something metallic. *“What the hell?”* he thought. Before having time to answer that semi-rhetoric question, came Zoe’s response from above.

“Okay. Fine. I’ll leave the flashlight on so you can catch it. Please try to catch it”. She had finally conquered her fears of the consequences, much to the delight of her rebellious side. But still. Her unwillingness to give her phone to a man in need, a man she actually happened to like, because it was illegal, highlighted a conservative side in her that she didn’t know was there. And not only was it there, but, much to her disappointment, it was the side that first came out and she had to fight to suppress it. *“Damn! It is in a crisis that a person truly shows their colors! I thought I was better than that…”*

Her refusal, for as long as she remembers herself, to conform with being the daughter of her father and follow in his footsteps, much to his dismay, was because she wasn’t conservative, she wasn’t a pawn of the system, a system she believed was unjust and corrupt. And although the status quo certainly favored her family and herself, she always opposed it and thought of herself as a revolutionary. Until today, when her action, or better yet her inaction, in time of need, proved her wrong. Perhaps she wasn’t as brave or rebellious as she thought. Perhaps she was a conformist after all. That thought shook her to her core.

Paf! The phone had landed on the ground. “Sorry!” came Marcus’ voice from below. “I tried to catch it”, he apologized, although his effort, honest as it may have been, wouldn’t have been enough. It had fallen quite near him but out of reach of his outstretched hand and moving fast wasn’t an option.

“Did it break?” asked Zoe with an anxious voice, which she immediately reprimanded herself for: *“Oh, enough with the damn phone!”*
“No, don’t worry”, said Marcus examining the phone. “I told you it wouldn’t break”.
“So, what do you see?” said Zoe, her focus swiftly shifting from her phone to the mysterious cave.

Marcus first turned the phone to the direction of that metallic thing he had touched. It was a perfect metal rod lying on the ground, less than a meter high and about 10 cm thick, with golden-bronze color and intricate embellishments of leaves and vines on the top. He grabbed it and set it up right to use as a cane to help him get up, but also to examine it more closely. As far as he could tell, from pictures he had seen, this rod was one of those used to create aisles with ropes in fancy museums, although it missed its base. But what the hell was it doing in that cave?

“What do you see?” asked Zoe again impatiently.
“I found one of those poles you use to make aisles, you know? With ropes”.
“A stanchion?” replied Zoe, with disbelief in her voice. 
“Yeah, that!”
“What’s it doing down there?” 

Zoe, who could now see down where Marcus had fallen, was wondering not only what a stanchion was doing in the bottom of a cave, but also how had Marcus survived the fall, because it was quite big. Most importantly though, she was wondering how he was going to come back up. She should call for help.

“Hell, if I know”, responded Marcus, leaning on the stanchion to help him lift his weight. “Ugh! It’s definitely broken!”
“The stanchion?”
“My leg!”
“Oh, right! Try not to hurt it more.”
“What the…?” said Marcus not as a response to Zoe’s suggestion but as a reaction to what he saw as he turned the flashlight towards the other side of the cave.
“What? What is it?” asked Zoe.
“Well, this is a definitely a stanchion or whatever. Cause there is a lot more of them down here!” said Marcus. 
“What do you mean?” asked Zoe, not sure that she understood correctly.
“What I said”, replied Marcus. “I mean this seems to be a tunnel that… Holy shit!” shouted Marcus and with that shout he back stepped and fell to the ground, grunting in pain, once again. “Fuck!” he shouted, half due to the unexpected sight, half due to the pain. 
“What? What happened? What is it?” shouted Zoe from above, trying to make out what Marcus had saw, only to realize that was impossible. From where she was standing she couldn’t see anything except from the spot Marcus had fallen.

“Fuck! What the…? Fuck!” Marcus kept saying.
“What is it?” said Zoe, feeling more anxious by the second as Marcus wasn’t responding.
“Fuck!”
“Stop saying fuck! What is going on?” said Zoe, not recognizing that this last “fuck” had a tone of amazement in it.
“Well…” hesitated Marcus, “it’s not easy to describe”. As he continued talking, he also tried to get up again. “You see the tunnel has these stanchions running along both walls, like the tunnel is an aisle or something. And…” he hesitated to continue.
“And?” asked Zoe, the anticipation almost vibrating in her voice.
“And the floor of that “aisle” is littered with bones. Lots of them!”
“Bones?! Human bones?”
“As far as I can tell”.
“Oh my God! How did they get there?”
“I haven’t got the faintest clue! There must be another way in here, besides falling through the ground. I’m going to follow the tunnel to see where it leads.”
“Are you insane?!”
“Well, how else am I supposed to get out of here?”
“We’ll call for help. Use my phone!”
“Zoe, it needs your retina to unlock.”
“Shit! That’s why I shouldn’t have thrown it down!” said Zoe, upset that this hadn’t been the reason of her unwillingness to throw the phone, but instead it had been her conformity.
“Even so, I doubt there is a service in here”, continued Marcus, trying to reassure her she had made the right choice. 
“Okay. Then I’ll go get help!”
“Before we get to that, let me follow the tunnel to see if I can find another way out.”
“What? No! I’ll go get help so that you don’t have to go down that tunnel!” 
“Zoe, I’ve got your phone. I don’t have mine. I fell down a hole full with human bones. If we can avoid bringing people into this, don’t you think we should do it?”

Zoe thought for a second. Her plan wasn’t to call the authorities of course, but instead her father’s men. However, letting her father know of this whole story, or mess better yet, wasn’t something she was looking forward to either. So she reluctantly, and stupidly as she would later think, agreed to let Marcus look for another way out, while she waited there. She insisted though that he would talk to her for as long as she could hear him and if he didn’t come back soon, she would go to her father, come what may.

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Marcus made his way through the bone littered tunnel limping, using its walls and the stanchions for support. He was looking with awe at the bones that were scattered all over the floor. He was no doctor but it was clear to him that these were human bones. And by the looks of them they must have been down here for many, many years. He wondered if maybe this cave was some kind of cemetery or catacomb long ago. Amongst the bones he could see small pieces of red fibers, which he figured that must be all that was left of the rope that ran through those stanchions.

It was only until just a few moments ago that he was still able to hear Zoe’s voice calling out to him. Up until that point he was describing to her what he was seeing and she was telling him to be careful. But her voice was growing steadily fainter with each step he took, in a much faster rate that he would have expected. *“That’s weird”*, he thought, but he kept going and so it came that just a while ago he stopped hearing her altogether. And at that point he felt a shiver run up his spine and thought for a moment to turn back, only to dismiss that thought right away, with a shake of his head that quickly propagated throughout his whole body.

He mustn’t have walked that long. In fact he figured he must be halfway through the spot where he fell and were the herd should be above him. That’s when the tunnel took sharp turn, more than nighty degrees, to the left. And as soon as he followed the turn, he found himself at the end of the tunnel. The space here opened up to form something of a room, but still not that much wider than the tunnel itself. The rows of stanchions also came to an end right before the turn. The floor here was literally covered with bones, so that someone wouldn’t be able to walk across it without crushing a skull or two with their feet. Disgusted by the sight he turned his flashlight upwards to illuminate the whole room.

“Whoa!” he exclaimed, as no other words came to his mouth. In front of him, just a few meters away across the bone covered cave floor, were two grand metallic doors, both in size and splendor. They were golden-bronze, like the stanchions, and covered with strange runic symbols. Both the carvings and their whole construction revealed great craftsmanship. He could tell that even from were he was standing and with the lack of any special knowledge. 
But the awe that those doors inspired was nothing compared to what came next. The light from the phone reflected and scattered on the metal of the doors, illuminating the whole cave, revealing that the walls and the ceiling were all covered with similar runic symbols that began to glow as the light hit them. 

“Whoa!” was rightly so all he could say at the moment. Almost mesmerized he limped across the room, kicking and crushing bones as he walked. He was looking with amazement at the doors and the symbols on the walls, which now kept on glowing even if no light was hitting them any more. With this feeling of total amazement and the repeating question: *“What the hell is this?”* battering his head, he took some steps that brought him closer to the two metallic doors. And he turned to them, taking his attention from the rest of the room. He examined the symbols curved on their surface but no matter how hard he tried, he couldn’t even discern if these were some sort of letters. 

And then his amazement and disbelief reached a whole new level. The runic symbols above the doors glowed brighter and started to shift and change right before his eyes turning into regular letters and those letters forming words and these words sentences. And when the transformation had completed he could clearly read what was written. A sentence had formed above the doors that read:

<center>**WHOEVER CHOOSES TO ENTER WILL TAP INTO AN UNIMAGINABLE POWER**</center>
<center>
![golden-doors.jpg](https://steemitimages.com/DQmQXQmqPW5Mt59DJ9eBuupstuqMzHsqqhQSzxp2FxMkXmg/golden-doors.jpg)</center>

He had barely finished reading that sentence, in utter astonishment with what was unfolding right before his eyes, that the symbols on the doors now began to swirl and shift and change. And within seconds they had turned into sentences as well, the one on the left door saying:

<center>**IF YOU CHOOSE TO ENTER HERE BACK WILL YOU GO. A DAY OR LESS IN THE PAST, COMFORTABLE WHERE YOU WERE, NO MEMORY OF THINGS NOT YET ACCOMPLISHED.**</center>

while on the other one it said:

<center>**IF YOU CHOOSE TO ENTER HERE, JUMP AHEAD A DAY OR LESS. FIND YOURSELF SOMEWHERE ELSE, AWAY FROM DANGERS PAST AND MEMORIES OF THINGS FORGOTTEN.**</center>

Millions of questions formulated in his mind at that time and were added to the millions more that were already there, all of them fighting to be answered at the same time. So, out of this mayhem, only a single word managed to get through, as a whispering sound: “What???”

But even that single word, which was probably the embodiment of all his questions put together, was meant to be left unanswered as the symbols all over the cave started changing and formed the same sentences, over and over again.

<center>**WHOEVER SEES THOSE DOORS MUST ENTER**
**THE GIFT OF TIME MUST BE TAKEN**
**OR TIME WILL RUN OUT FOR ALL LIFE IN THIS HALLOWED PLACE**</center>

Still trying to understand the meaning of those words, of any of this really, the writings changed once again, all of them except on the two doors, all over the cave to one single word:

<center>**ENTER**</center>

and then once more to the number ten. 

<center>**10**</center>

A cave filled with tens, glowing now really bright, illuminating the cave on their own. But only for a second, because then they turned to nines. And a second later the nines turned to eights and the eights to sevens. Marcus was looking at that marvel dumbfounded and it was only when the number reached four that he seemed to realize what the changing numbers meant. He gasped and the phone dropped from his hand, as panic began to creep up to him, but just before he was overtaken by it, he dashed forward, as best as he could with his broken leg, opened a door and entered.

![12.jpg](https://steemitimages.com/DQmRJjqZCm2J4LdCGMY5LdGW6hgggWmEWdTvr9ptP6T6smE/12.jpg)

As soon as he came through the door the bright light blinded him. He squinted and put his hand over his eyes, while they adjusted. It took him a few seconds before he could see clearly their garden in front of him. *“Damn, it is sunny today!”* he thought. But with that thought, he stopped. He stood there, looking at the garden, kind of baffled. What had he come out here to do? He searched his mind, but no recollection came. He turned around and saw the tool shack out of which he had just came. What had he wanted to take from there? He shook his head a little and raised his eyebrows. *“What the hell?”* he thought. *“Did Anthony hit me with something while I was asleep? Okay. Focus. What were my chores today? Weed the garden. So obviously I have come for the mattock”*. He went back in and moments later he came out with the mattock in hand. He closed the shack’s door and was ready to start working, when he heard a ruckus coming from the house. He heard many voices and what seemed like a woman’s scream. He threw the mattock on the ground and ran to see what was happening.

The sight left him even more baffled and he struggled to make sense of what was happening before him. Outside the house were four big men with black costumes and from inside came out two police officers that had between them a young woman who seemed to be under arrest. Behind them came two more people, who from the looks of it were from Peoples Security. The two officers and the Security agents were young enough, perhaps in their thirties. 

After them came two middle-aged men with grey hair. Both wore nice suits and one of them was holding a briefcase. That one seemed to be arguing with one of the agents, but what they were saying he couldn’t make out through the whole ruckus. The four big guys approached the second middle-aged man and surrounded him in a protective manner, but at the same time they seemed a little uncertain as to how to react to what was happening. 

Last came his family, who stopped at the doorway. His father seemed really upset, a grim expression on his face. His mother was crying and so was Anthony, who had her in his arms.

He immediately started going closer so he could figure out what was going on. And while doing so, it dawned on him who the middle-aged man with the bouncers and the young woman were. *“That’s George Sorras and that’s his beautiful daughter Zoe”*, he thought. *“But what are they doing in our house? And, moreover, why is she being arrested in our house?”* The commotion was such that nobody noticed him as he stepped on the porch and approached his family. So everybody froze when he asked: “Dad, what’s going on here?”

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“Marcus!” shouted Zoe and a big surprise showed on his face. 
“My boy!” shouted his mother and ran to him, squeezing him in her arms, closely followed my Anthony. Marcus just stood there trying to understand what all this was about. He wasn’t used to being hugged by his mother, not for many years now, and definitely not by his brother. And why were they crying? 

Next, his father approached him and pushed aside his mother and brother, a stern look on his face. Now, if up to that point he was struggling to understand what was going on, what happened next left him no choice but to conclude that everybody had gone crazy. His father hugged him too. And Marcus just stood there, not knowing how to receive this completely unexpected affection. 

And things got even weirder. Because moments later his father released from his grip, only to grab him with both hands by the collar. And although that wouldn’t have been so weird in itself, the fact that it came after a hug and that his father’s eyes appeared to be moist, well, that was unprecedented.

“Where the hell have you been?” he shouted in his face.
“What do you mean?” replied Marcus, but before any answer would come one of the agents spoke.
“Please, let your son go, Mr. Stavrou”. 
“Where the hell have you been?” said Marcus’ father again, this time shaking his son and his face started to get distorted by an expression of rage, one that Marcus was much more familiar with.
“Mr. Stavrou, please let go of your son”, repeated the agent.
Joseph turned a little towards the agent and then unhanded Marcus.
“Please step back”, said the agent as he made his way on the porch. It wasn’t until he came next to Joseph that he took a few steps back. He wasn’t happy that someone was telling him what to do in his own house and with his own son. But that what something that he hid well and only his family could maybe guess what was going on inside him.

The agent stood before Marcus, and although he was scared beyond his mind at this point, he did notice that George Sorras and the other middle-aged man had also approached.

“I suppose you are Marcus Stavrou, correct?” asked the agent.
“Yes, sir”, stuttered Marcus.
“I’m Agent Farris with Peoples Security, Phones Infringement Division”, he said while he flashed his badge in front of him for a second. “Where is your phone, Mr. Stavrou?”
“My phone?” asked Marcus.
“Yes, your phone. I assume you have it on your person, yes?”
“It’s in my bedroom, on the nightstand.”
Agent Farris gave a nod with his head to the other agent who went into the house.
“Why is your phone inside the house, Mr. Stavrou, and not on your person as it should be?”
“Well”, stuttered Marcus, “I was about to do some gardening and I didn’t want anything happening to it.”
“That is no excuse, Mr. Stavrou. You should just buy an appropriate case. You know that you are supposed to carry your phone on your person at all times, save when you are sleeping, don’t you?”
“Yes, of course, sir. I’m sorry, sir. Won’t happen again”, replied Marcus.
At that time the other agent came out, holding Marcus’ phone in his hand, which he gave to Agent Farris. He took it and showed it to Marcus.
“Is this your phone, Mr. Stavrou?” asked Agent Farris.
“Yes, sir”, answered Marcus.
“Could you, please, unlock it for me?”

Marcus took the phone and brought it in front of his face. The phone emitted a clicking sound and Marcus handed it over to the agent. He took it and started doing some gestures on the screen.
“You are almost out of battery. It’s at 15%”, said Agent Farris.
“That’s impossible”, protested Marcus. “I charged it all night.”
The agent took his eyes off the phone and turned to Marcus.
“You charged it all night? What do you mean?” asked the agent.
“I put it on the charger before I went to sleep and took it off this morning.”

Although completely lost as to what was happening, Marcus still noticed that this last statement created reactions to almost everyone there. But the reaction that stroked him more than anyone else’s was Zoe Sorras’, who gasped as if a silent “what?” has tried to come out but got stuck on the “a”, her face riddled with surprise and incomprehension. Nevertheless, she managed to shout to him: “Marcus? What are you saying?”

“Mr. Stavrou”, said Agent Farris while signaling with his hand to Zoe to stop shouting, “do you know this young woman?”
“Yes”, said Marcus. “It’s Zoe Sorras, Mr. George Sorras’ daughter”, he said, showing George Sorras who was standing just a few steps behind the agent.
“And were you with her last night?”
“What?” said Marcus, taken aback by the question. “Why would I be with her? I don’t know her. Personally I mean”. A thought crossed his mind and fear overcame him. “Mr. Sorras, I swear, I don’t know your daughter nor have I ever touched her.”
“Marcus, what the fuck?” shouted Zoe.
“Listen, son”, said the other middle-aged man as he approached, which Marcus deducted that it must be Sorras’ lawyer, “Miss Sorras, Zoe here, was with you last night in a cave, where you had some kind of accident and she had to throw her phone down to you to help you. Isn’t that so?”
“What?” said Marcus, in utter surprise. “What are you talking about? I was here last night, sound asleep in my bed.”
“Marcus!” shouted Zoe, and it was clear that what was mere incomprehension before, was now mixed with major doses of anger.
“You little shit!” shouted Sorras. “Isn’t it obvious what he’s doing? He knows that he will be in deep shit for forgetting his phone, so he makes up those lies and lets my daughter take the blame! He has her phone!”
“Mr. Sorras”, replied Agent Farris steadily, “your daughter’s phone isn’t here. We’ve checked. Mr. Stavrou”, continued the agent, turning to Marcus’ father, “did your son sleep here last night?”

In that moment, time slowed down to almost a stop for Joseph. He looked at the agent asking him the question, knowing he was measuring his every reaction. He looked at Sorras’ serious and stern face, now twisted with anger. He looked at his lawyer and his daughter. And finally, all in a split second, he looked at his son that had an expression of incomprehension and fear on his face.

“Yes”, he responded in his deep voice. “My son was here last night.”
“You lying piece of shit!” shouted George Sorras. 
“Please calm down Mr. Sorras”, said Agent Farris. “Here”, he said to Marcus handing him his phone. “Always keep it on your person and well charged, son. Let’s go”, he said to the other agent and the two officers.
“What?” exclaimed Sorras. “You are going to let him go?”
“Should we need him for further questioning, we know where to find him”, replied Agent Farris as he was heading towards the exit of the yard, followed by the other agent and Sorras with his lawyer. And continued: “This moment it’s just your daughter that is missing her phone and that is our concern. And yours. But at least there will be no murder investigation”. And turning to the other agent he said: “Call to cancel the homicide unit”.
“But he is lying!” protested Sorras, following the agent as he approached the gate. 
“Marcus, please!” shouted Zoe, as she was put inside a car by the two officers. “Please tell the truth!”
“He is obviously lying!” continued Sorras. “He is the reason that my daughter lost her phone!”

The agent stopped and turned to Sorras.
“The boy isn’t limping, Mr. Sorras”. And with that he entered the car himself.
George Sorras turned to Joseph, as the cars drove off.
“You made an enemy today Stavrou, one that you don’t want to have!” he said and then he left, followed by his lawyer and his men.

Marcus stood there stunned, unable to understand what was happening. 
“Dad”, he said, “what is going on?”
“You shut your mouth”, replied his father and walked in the house. His mother and brother followed him, confused themselves as to what was really going on.

Marcus stood alone on the porch. He sat down on a chair and put his hands on his lap, an empty gaze on his face. His hand touched something. He put his hand in his pocket and pulled it out. It was a wooden figurine of a satyr.
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[Hole in cave image](https://unsplash.com/photos/HauxSOFvh6k)
[Bone littered cave image](http://escapology.eu/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/tentena-6020.jpg)
[Golden doors image](https://priestessaura.files.wordpress.com/2013/11/golden-doors.jpg)
[Bright light image](https://ak4.picdn.net/shutterstock/videos/2496044/thumb/12.jpg)
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@aderonkemi ·
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Marcus examined the satyr unable to figure out how it got into his pocket. Until now, he didn't understand what was going on. What especially got to him, was seeing Zoe, Mr Sorras's daughter almost at the verge of tears while imploring him to speak the truth. He was sure there was more to the emptiness he felt. He picked up the satyr he dropped in fear and headed for the Sorras house. Although he was afraid but much more than the fear is the curiosity to the quagmirical situations that happened earlier in the day . 

Zoe, on the other hand, couldn't fathom why Marcus had to act in such manner. He acted like one who never even spoke to her. It was more than mere pretense. Could there be more to the cave than she imagined? It is better she finds out for herself. How about if she looses her senses just like marcus'? No. She would have to document today's events. Written words doesn't change nor forgets. Out of her father's men watchful eyes, she ran back to the forest without forgetting to hold a flashlight. 

Meanwhile, Mr Sorras was pacing round his room. Angrily thinking of a better way to deal with the defammatory Jacobs. Why his daughter would even stoop so low as to interact with such lowly son of a shepherd, he couldn't comprehend. She had always been the one to rebel but he never thought it to this extent. He was still thinking when he heard a ruckus oitside the house. He peeked from his window and saw his most hated figure been handled by one of his men. He smiled like a lion who had just been visited by a dog. Revenge sure is sweet. He commanded the men to let Marcus come to him. Once they were alone inside, he asked what if he had come to say the truth but Marcus answers only infuriated him the more. 
"You mean to say you came to look for my daughter?? What for? You scum" he shouted. This attracted some of his men who came in. He commanded that Marcus be thrown into their private dungeons without anyone knowing. 

Zoe had reached the spot where Marcus fell but couldn't find any hole. She was sure he fell there. At this rate, she would be taken for a liar. She sat frustrated on the floor. Against her wish, memories of her first encounter with Marcus flooded her being. No! She never wanted to remember that. It was horrible for her even until now. She didnt know when a tear fell, and like a padlock, it opened a portal with stairs leading underground. "OMG" she exclaimed, it was really the cafe!.... She dived unto the stairs lest it changes it mind and close again. Thank heavens she was wise enough to come with a flashlight. With enough light and prior knowledge of what Marcus explained some days ago, it didnt take her long before she got to the great door. The decision wasnt to hard to make because she needed to know what happened to Marcus in the past. She choose to follow one which states:

> IF YOU CHOOSE TO ENTER HERE BACK WILL YOU GO. A DAY OR LESS IN THE PAST, COMFORTABLE WHERE YOU WERE, NO MEMORY OF THINGS NOT YET ACCOMPLISHED.

In the town, the search for both children has started. The two families threathening to tear the town apart. Where is Marcus? Where is Zoe? 
After several search, Marcus was found in the Sorras house and Zoe found in Marcus bedroom. How manage??!! The battle has only just begun... There is a lot of explaining to do from no one in particular.......   

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Hope i didnt contribute too late??
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@michalis ·
Thank you @aderonkemi for your participation! What a mess at the end of your Chapter Three! Wonderful! Loving it!

Now tell people to upvote it! And upvote this post and the [intro](https://steemit.com/thestoryinseries/@michalis/chapter-two-of-the-story-in-series-is-out-win-sbd-in-this-contest) so that they are eligible to win the payout, small as it may be.
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@carlgnash ·
I will return soon when I have a bit of time to properly digest this and formulate a plot suggestion.  So glad to see the next chapter out!  Happy to resteem this and let's get some action going here!
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<h3>WHOEVER CHOOSES TO ENTER WILL TAP INTO AN UNIMAGINABLE POWER</h3>

As Marcus sits on the porch and ponders the meaning of the satyr and everything else that had just happened, he slowly becomes aware of the thoughts of his family in the house.  First he hears the inner monologue of Anthony - then his consciousness expands farther and he becomes aware of his parents as they are embroiled in an argument.  This is the last straw and he snaps, throwing his phone into the tall grass and running off to a private place he has been going to since he was a young boy when he needs some place to decompress.  He regrets throwing his phone.  What is happening to me?  He wonders.  He feels strange.  He doesn't feel like himself.  Who am I?  He wonders.

Cut to the Sorros house where an expedition is being outfitted with spelunking gear.  George Sorros is grilling his daughter and she sticks to the same story, repeating the events of Chapter 1 as she experienced them.  Mr. Sorros is growing more and more imaginative as he describes what he is going to do to the entire Stavreau family but ESPECIALLY that little shit Marcus.  

 Zoe leads her father's men into the cave to the drop off.  After setting up climbing ropes two men rappel down and find Marcus' dead body at the bottom of the drop off.  He appears to have been dead for at least a day.  They find Zoe's phone a few feet away from Marcus.   A confused Zoe asks if they see a stanchion.  Yes, they hold one up and point their lights at several more.  You know they used to bill this cave as a tourist attraction, right?  One of her father's men yells up.  The other sweeps his light across the gypsum crystals that cover the cavern wall, cauliflower formations and dense clusters of needles.  No bones, no passage to a metal door.  Broken neck, yells one of the men as he prods at Marcus with his foot.  Even from this distance Zoe can see the unnatural angle that Marcus' head is facing.

Marcus' dead body is transported to the Sorros home.  Zoe is beyond confused at this point and has dissolved into rage.  Not having anyone else to direct it at she explodes at her father when she realizes he is not planning to return the body to the Stavreaus nor inform the authorities.  Her father coldly sends her to her room as he calls his lawyer.  Zoe climbs out the window and runs off into the night.

End chapter 3.
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@carlgnash ·
Okay time to test out my fancy new demonic vote trail.  I call upon the dark powers to support my comment!
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@dante31 ·
hahaha bring it on,,dark lord
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@michalis ·
I don't think it worked, Carl...
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@michalis ·
Fantastic!! Marcus is dead??? Then who the hell was that guy at the end of this chapter?? Brilliant! Thank you my friend! Now all you have to do is get it upvoted! 😁
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@carlgnash · (edited)
Well obviously if my suggestion ends up being the winner, it will be up to future readers to decide.  I was personally envisioning Marcus as becoming a cross between Jesus returned from the dead and Professor Xavier.  A messianic Xman kinda thing.  I figured if time travel had already been introduced there was absolutely no reason we couldn't be dealing with some kind of split reality here where Marcus is both demonstrably dead and also quite obviously living
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@dante31 · (edited)
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<h1> Hello @michalis</h1>

Wow! just Wow

I am in awe

It's like we are in sync. you know this movie right. `Pacific Rim`. The Jaeger pilots neural bridge thing. 

yeah lol

Every step of the story was awesome. Kept me in the zone. Dang! i totally zoned in on this. I felt the story physically.

>Saw what you did with the door thing. You pulled it off  brilliantly. Hope it wasn't too tasking hahaha

<b>this story is what I call true art</b>

the transitioning shows your level of  adroitness to pull this of.

*BRAVO*

This is full of energy, suspense and thrill. 

"you name it"

I may consider to drop some contributions later on. but for now 
<h3>**I am lovin it**</h3>

Cheers

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@michalis ·
I'll start with the same word as you: 

**Wow!**

I really don't know how to respond to such amazing comments! Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked it. I haven't seen Pacific Rim though, but I think I got what you mean. Well, I'm really happy that I was able to put in words what you had in mind. Really happy! 

And it's really amazing the process, trying to create something that will resonate with what two different people had in mind for the same story.

Looking forward to reading your suggestion for Chapter Three, along with everybody else's!!

Thanks again!
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@michalis ·
You have the most upovotes and haven't even made a suggestion yet! How do you do it??

Looking forward to it! Time is running out!
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@dante31 ·
today fam, today
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@dante31 ·
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<H1>PRESENT DAY: BEFORE & AFTER THE TIME JUMP </H1>

`THE MYSTERIOUS CAVE`

Marcus! Marcus! Marcus!

Zoe yelled as her voiced echoed through the cave. She became worried like a grandma whose matured son is out on a cold Friday night.

Trying to be rational... I'm sure he is fine

But no that sinister feeling says to her that he is probably dead and it is all her fault.

She thought about jumping but the distance is way too far.

The only thing she could think off was the earlier idea she had of getting help. 

This is a bloody mess. Oh! Fuck me

Marcus! she called out his name again louder than before in hopes that her voice will scan the cave thereby reaching out to him.

Zoe rushed out at once to go find some help.

Running through the dark cave by guiding her way with the walls. She had memorized the path they came through.

The more she moved the more visible her path was from the ray of light that entered the cave.

To her astonishment there were no animals in the cave.

What?

The fire they set-up for themselves in the cave was no longer there.

It was like nothing ever happened.

As she came out of the cave. Rising out like a vampire on a bad day. 

The sun shone on her. She quickly covered her sight with her hand for the light was too much for her eyes to handle at the moment as her retina adjusted to it.

It was daytime. Today was already tomorrow.

Hey! a uniform man called out to her. Are you George Sorras's daughter?

She was still in confusion. And could not alter a word. The other uniform man recognized her immediately. WE HAVE FOUND HER.

The search party came charging towards her. 4 men in black costumes, 2 police officers and 2 agents from people’s security.
All came rushing at her with multiple questions like in the white house press conference. Coupled with the obvious questions she was totally expecting but not ready to answer.

Where have you been? Where did you go? Who were you with?

Are you hurt? What happened to your phone?

Answer the questions your lady.


Zoe stood still and lifeless. Then she spoke up.


I was with Marcus last night. We were taking shelter at the cave when the rains came pouring heavily. She explained the event as it is but could not make any explanation for the time lapse.
Hurry up she said. He is stuck down there in the cave.

Hold your horse’s young lady Agent Farris said in an interrogative manner. This is not the time for this let’s get Marcus some help then we would answer every question.
George Sorras was the scene but from a distance just observing the situation. Cooling his hanger as he smoked his tobacco.
They got into the cave search the entire place as she had described. It was no match.
It was just a small cave with thick walls as it has always been says Agent Farris. There was nothing in her statement that correlated to what she said.
We are here because we tracked your last phone signal to this place. Where is your phone?

She stuttered…still in awe of what was happening. It is with Marcus.

Who is Marcus the policemen interrupted getting impatient. The bouncers were in a protective ode taking there stand at her side.

Marcus…Marcus Starvou. You mean to say you were with Joseph Starvou’s son all night.

Yes, that right she said.

Till your story checks out we will be placing you as a suspect to an ongoing murder case that happened around this part within the last 24hours. Your alibi is this Marcus.

But Marcus is in the cave. She left there scene and returned to the cave after the officers had done that. She felt even more stupid because it was just as they said.

Zoe’s father was whispering to another man. She saw them from distant but could not discern what they were saying.
They all got into the vehicles and off they were to the Starvou’s resident.

`THE NIGHT AT THE STRARVOU’S RESIDENT BEFORE TE JUMP`

Joseph was furious that Marcus is yet to return home with the herds. That boy is surely gonna die when I lay my hands on him. He never gets anything right. What is he even good for?

His mum was more worried that her son was out there in the cold heavy stormy rain. I should have let Anthony take care of this. He better not come home tonight Joseph said.

While listen to his radio. The weather report stated that the weather was disastrous out there on the hills. The hot headed father suddenly became lore worried about the safety of his son but his poker face did not give him away. Anthony volunteered to step into the rain to find his brother. 
Their mother forbidden it saying they should pray that he is safe and protected. Their mum being a woman of faith believed her son will be protected. They all tried to stay up late but ended up sleeping in different positions in their living room till the day break.

They were woken up by a heavy knock on their door. Apparently, the visitors have been knocking for several, minutes with no one answering hence the increase in the door knock sound.

<h4>FLASH FORWARD</h4>

`THE PRESENT`

He looked at the figurine not knowing how he got a hold of it. Everything felt messy to him and not understanding what was happening. He went into his room gazing at the figurine hoping to make a meaning out it. 

Some moments later, his brother came knocking at his door. He hid the satyr under his pillow before his brother let himself in.

Where were you last night? We were worried about you and how did you get herds back safe in the middle of the storm?

Marcus gave him the same reply as he did to the officer that interrogated him.

You know I am here for you brother. You can talk to me. Anthony stepped out.

To his amazement his parent never spoke a word to him or ask him about what happened and all.

Marcus felt a void in him. That he was missing something and could not explain it.

The only thing that triggered in his mind was the look on Zoe’s face. It was like they had a bond which he could not relate with.

Marcus’ soliloquy begins with Zoe is in some sort of trouble. Why should I care?

Why were they here?

As he was in the middle of this he noticed the satyr glowing….

<h1>NOW WHAT!</h1>

What will happen to Zoe?

Is there going to be a romantic break through between Marcus and Zoe?

Will the Zoe be freed from the case?

*spoiler alert*

>The subject of the murder has a striking resemblance as Zoe

>Does Greorge Sorras have an information about the cave?

*Plot twist*
Zoe once entered a door in the cave before she met MARCUS.

…….

HEHEHE just adding some complications and more excitement to the story in case my entry tops or wins.

However, to me every entry is a winner

Cheers

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@michalis ·
Thanks for another great suggestion @dante31! 

However, this time you have a fierce competition from @aderonkemi. Do you think you can cover the distance in the 8 hours that remain and claim the victory? We'll see...

Just kidding, of course! Like you said, *"every entry is a winner"* and I'm so glad to have so many wonderful suggestions! And may the highest payout win! 🤑
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<h2>*everyone is a winner*</h2>

my plane is fueling up hahaha ...hopefully my black cat can get me ahead of her...

good luck @aderonkemi nice entry
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@jayna ·
This is so good! I love the twists and turns the story has taken. Great job taking the suggestions of @dante31 and spinning them into a very compelling story. 

Are there other suggestions yet for Chapter 3? (I don't see them!) If not, I suggest you write a new post with a title something like "Steemit contest: Help write the story - suggest chapter 3" or something like that. Then, restate the challenge and the rewards, with links to Chapter 1 and Chapter 2.

Meanwhile, I'm thinking!
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@michalis · (edited)
Thanks for your kind words @jayna! 

We haven't got any suggestions yet for Chapter Three, it's been a little slow on this chapter. But hey! All I need is a single suggestion to write it! The more the better, of course! And I may follow your advise and do another post promoting it. 

But to tell you the truth, even if it ends up having only a handful of people engaged in it, or not making significant rewards, I don't really mind. What I like is that we tell the story together and you keep me motivated to write!
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@jayna ·
Yes, I would definitely put the Chapter 3 challenge out as a new post. You'll get some good suggestions then, I wager!
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Okay, I'm pretty sure I am too late to be a contender. (AND I found out - thank you @michalis and @dante31 that I put my entry in the wrong place! Geez!) Anway, here it is for what it's worth....

Marcus goes back to his regular life, under the thumb of his overbearing and sometimes violent father and mousy mother. But something is off. He can feel it. Why did Zoe seem to know him? It seemed crazy, but she was so vehement and so certain that they had some past. Was he somehow responsible for what was happening to her?

He begins to get word of Zoe. She is in a low-security prison. He knows he cannot visit her under the watchful eye of the police, so he sends his friend Nick Stavros, who is a propeller-head techy guy and inventor who leads an undercover life that will only be revealed over time.

Nick finds that Zoe is living under horrible conditions, with guards leering at her and making lewd suggestions, and Marcos who has always found Zoe amazingly attractive (even though she is totally off-limits because of who her father is), decides he has to do something.

Marcos and Nick contrive to set off a bomb at one end of the prison (to avoid any casualties) and send in drones to rescue Zoe. The plan is to whisk her away to Crete and disguise her as a peasant on an olive farm.

Marcos has to secretly get supplies for the rescue from his home when his mother and father are out, which proves to be incredibly difficult since they are always around the farm. But there's a death in the community - an old friend of Marcos' father who has been found mysteriously shot in his car. Marcos is secretly relieved that the police are distracted by the murder, even though it does not bode well for the way things are going. On the day of the funeral, he pretends to be very ill, then gathers what he needs from the house.

That's when he discovers a cache of high-tech weapons and realizes his father is dangerous and possibly involved in a crime ring, and that he and his brother and mother are all in grave danger. He takes one of the guns, fearing that he is going to need to protect himself and his family.

He leaves the house, not knowing whether it is for the last time and looks for a place to hide the things he has gathered until it is time to meet Nick and put the plan in place to rescue Zoe, and he finds a door, hidden in hedges and overgrowth at the edge of his family's property.

The door looks ancient, and as he brushes the overgrowth away, he sees that it is covered in ancient symbols that are strangely familiar. His head starts to throb as he looks at them, wondering where he has seen them before and feeling that they have some kind of power over him.

He begins to step away, fearful that his parents will return soon from the funeral, and that going through the door will make him miss the connection time with Nick. But he is compelled, and touching the door he finds that it begins to move. Instantly, he is sucked inside into an enormous chamber, and the door slams shut.

Suddenly he remembers everything from before he emerged several days before to find police at his home arresting Zoe. He realizes there are two concurrent realities, and that he has no idea which one is real, or if somehow they both are. His leg is not broken, but Zoe is in prison. His head aches.

Suddenly, he hears voices. He crouches in the shadows behind a giant pillar. They are voices he recognizes. One is another friend of his father's, and the other is one of the police officers who arrested Zoe. They are talking about how their plan is going well, but that Zoe's antics have thrown a wrench in things because of her father's status.

As Marcos tries to make sense of what they are saying, there is a faint rumbling that grows louder. The earth is shaking. He realizes it is an earthquake, and he is likely to die here before he can rescue Zoe, figure out what scheme his father is involved in, and save his family.
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@katyclark ·
Here is my suggestion for what happens next:

Chapter 3

Marcus has no idea what has occurred. He realises that he has gravely upset Zoe. He wonders whether he has made a big mistake. He goes inside. There follows a horrible day as his father quizzes him on what has occurred, but he has no idea. The next day is Sunday, and matins begin at 8.30. Marcus walks behind his parents, Joseph and Martha. Kneeling before the icons, he glances up and something about the three ornate doors behind the altar triggers a memory. As he turns to take up a place to listen to the liturgy, he spies Zoe Sorras. She is angry and looks away. He bows his head and frowns. He looks behind to check what his mother and father are doing, and seeing they have already taken a position and have their backs to him, he curves through the worshippers and comes to stand behind Zoe. He fingers the satyr in his pocket and touches her on the shoulder. She leans back. “I don’t know what’s happened, but can I see you later?” She hesitates. Marcus has already brought her much grief. Her father thinks she has been smoking weed and having hallucinations. She has a doctor’s appointment in a few days in the city to determine whether she is mad, or on drugs. Her mother and father will both be attending, to hear the prognosis. Zoe nods. “I’ll meet you tonight, at the cave.” Marcus agrees and slips back into the crowd.
After lunch, Marcus takes the flock back up the hill, and as night falls, he makes his way towards the cave. He leaves the dog in charge of the flock and edges inside. He has already spotted Zoe ascending from the creek line. She is trying to be as inconspicuous as possible. As she approaches, he steps to the mouth of the cave so that only she can see him. She rushes inside. “Marcus, how could you?” she asks. “I can’t believe that you could play such a trick on me. And where is my phone?” She feels like striking him, but resists. She has seen her mother strike her father about the head many times and it always makes her feel uncomfortable. One day, she was sure he would snap and hit her back, and then there would be hell to pay. She knew that other villagers felt that her father, George, was henpecked by his wife. She would not strike Marcus. But she had got all of that off her chest, and now she would listen to his response, and it had better be good. “I don’t know what you’re talking about, Zoe,” answered Marcus. “What?” asked Zoe. She was thinking, “Oh, God, not Marcus, too.” She sat down and shook her head. There must be a way to explain. Meanwhile, Marcus had taken the satyr from his pocket. “When I awoke, I found this in my pocket,” he showed her the figurine. Zoe took it in her hand. “Look, Marcus,” she said. “I’ve brought my camping rucksack. Let’s explore that cave. You came back from it, so we know there’s a way out, but I’ve got a rope ladder, and we can avoid hurting ourselves.” Marcus thinks it over, and agrees. He wants to know what has happened, too, and besides, Zoe is very beautiful and when he looks at her face, he can’t think straight. They head to the cave, and lower the ladder.
Next: they find the phone & the 3 doors, and Zoe chooses one….please pick any door – to write what happens next. I look forward to reading Chapter 3
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@mr-aaron ·
While Marcus was still looking at the wooden satyr wondering how he got it, his brother came inside. His brother commented n the figurine that he still have it. Marcus got more confused. 
"when did you give me? " 
"yesterday when you came to relieve me of my duty. "
Marcus is now getting angry. He thinks everyone is taking him for a fool. He threw the figurine outside and warned everyone to start away from him. 
His mom was concerned. His dad probably thinks he's sick or gradually running mad. 
His dad was arguing with the mom to warn his son to confess whatever thing he has with the Sorras' .
He opened the door and tried to interrupt but the dad screamed "go back to your room and shut the door!"
He could hear the word "the door!" sounding repeatedly in his head. Flashes of two door came to his head. He screamed and then fainted. <hr/>
I've been busy with exams and couldn't come up with something better than this..
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@michalis ·
Thank you @mr-aaron for your suggestion! Well, of course your exams take precedence! Good luck with that!
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@sbd.giveaway ·
Can you put some space between the paragraphs ?
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@michalis ·
I usually put spaces between different sections of the story, but you are right; this doesn't look good. It looked better on the word processor. I'll edit it. 

Thank you for your input.
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