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Write a Poem for You---My handwritten copy of the poem #1: If there is an afterlife 为你写诗--我的手抄诗歌#1:如果有来生 by mrspointm

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Write a Poem for You---My handwritten copy of the poem #1: If there is an afterlife 为你写诗--我的手抄诗歌#1:如果有来生
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To make your life like a poem. 
<blockquote>生活要过得像诗一样美。</blockquote>
最近,为了想要写出不一样的写作素材绞尽脑汁,突然了灵光一闪,想到了用笔记录下那些美好的诗句,一来是为了陶冶情操,二是为了跟大家分享我喜欢的诗歌,当然大家有喜欢的诗歌也可以推荐给我呀!再来说说灵感的来源,昨天我埋头于手机,我母亲就感叹道,现在的人啊,一天到晚都拿着手机戳戳戳,怕是连基本的字都不会写了,什么都用手机搞定,连写篇文章都是在电脑上完成的,也许现在用到它的时候真的不多了。

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我选择这样的方式是想让自己放松下来,而且抄写可以让人心静下来。烦躁的时候,可以练练字也好。记得最近看董卿的《朗读者》,受益颇多,感触也很深。还记得那些开场白吗?“朗读者就是朗读的人,可以分为两部分理解,朗读是传播文字,而人则是展现生命,将值得尊重的生命和值得关注的文章完美结合,就是朗读者的含义。”  而手抄诗歌也可以达到这样的效果,我打算以后的每一篇诗歌都分享一篇我的手抄(写的不是很好,虽然字如其人,但我已经很努力地在写了,O(∩_∩)O哈哈~),同时把我所理解的诗意分享给大家。
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今天要分享的是三毛的作品《如果有来生》,是三毛在《写给自己》里的一首诗,但有些资料说是引自 姜岩的《北飞候鸟》,原文如下:
<b>如果有来生---三毛</b>
如果有来生,要做一棵树,
站成永恒。没有悲欢的姿势,
一半在尘土里安详,
一半在风里飞扬;
一半洒落荫凉,
一半沐浴阳光。
非常沉默、非常骄傲。
从不依靠、从不寻找。
如果有来生,要化成一阵风,
一瞬间也能成为永恒。
没有 善感的情怀,没有多情的眼睛。
一半在雨里洒脱,
一半在 春光里旅行;
寂寞了,孤自去远行,
把淡淡的思念统带走,
从不思念、从不爱恋;
如果有来生,要做一只鸟,
飞越永恒,没有迷途的苦恼。
东方有火红的希望,
南方有温暖的巢床,
向西逐退残阳,向北唤醒芬芳。
如果有来生,
希望每次相遇,
都能化为永恒。
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我的手抄本(节选的部分)如下(希望大家不要嫌弃😭,我会继续努力的):
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我自己的理解是这样的:每当事与愿违的时候,我们总会说“要是...就好了”或者期待有来生,从头来过。我们期待在来生中化成永恒,再也没有悲欢离合。也许是现实给她的打击,这首诗可以看出她向往自由,无欲无求的生活方式,她总是用善良看世界。她的这一生虽然短暂,但也痛快地活过。
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@azazqwe ·
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覺得厲害...我看一頁書就想睡覺了
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@mrspointm ·
哈哈 其实我也不算太喜欢看书 就是最近受《朗读者》的启发,想要去看一点感兴趣的东西。
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https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/the-blue-moon-of-love-love-me-like-crazy

nice post...upvoted and follow..kindly check my post also and upvote it thanks

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