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Write a Poem for You---My handwritten copy of the poem #5: Part of Article 为你写诗--我的手抄诗歌#5:断章 by mrspointm

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Write a Poem for You---My handwritten copy of the poem #5: Part of Article 为你写诗--我的手抄诗歌#5:断章
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Life is like a mirror, we get the best results when we smile at it.
<blockquote>生活像一面镜子,你对她微笑,它便会对你微笑。</blockquote>

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Today, I want to share with you a poem called <i>Part of Article</i>, written by Bian Zhilin.  The original text is as follows:
今天想要和大家分享的一首诗,叫《断章》,作者卞之琳。原文如下:

<b>断章</b>
你站在桥上看风景,

看风景的人在楼上看你。

明月装饰了你的窗子,

你装饰了别人的梦。
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Translation version 译文

<b>Part of Article</b>
As you are enjoying the scenery on a bridge,

Upstairs on a tower people are watching you.

The bright moon adorns your window,

But you adorn others' dream.
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The following is my handwritten copy of this poem.
以下是我的手抄本。
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My first impression of this poem is elegant and unique. Through plain words, the poem brings us a sense of delicacy. All sentences are linked one another, which are extremely beautiful. This poem tells that someone is appreciating the scenery on the bridge and the other one is looking at the very person on the bridge, like unrequited love. However, the person has no idea. The last sentence---<i>You adorn others dream</i>, is the most wonderful, which expresses that the beloved one just gives a dream to the one who loves him/her.
<blockquote>这首诗带给我的第一印象就是:优雅别致。它的用词不精美但却带给人精巧玲珑的感觉,句与句之间连接微妙,整首诗美妙至极。这首诗是在讲人在桥上看风景,而有另一个人在看“看风景的人”,就像是在寓意单恋一个人,而他却不毫不知情。最后一句“你装饰了别人的梦”,最为奇妙,表达那个被恋的人仅仅给予恋他的人是梦幻而已。</blockquote>

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注:英文译文来自William Wang译版,仅为文章需要。
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@liflorence ·
字写的好好看
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@mrspointm ·
谢谢,其实还需要很大的努力啊!O(∩_∩)O
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