The Shoes Make The Outfit, a freewrite by owasco

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hive-161155 · @owasco · Mar 19 '23

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The Shoes Make The Outfit, a freewrite



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She looked happier. She was walking taller, with confidence and grace. Her hair had been cut and styled earlier that day. She'd had her nails done, top and bottom. Her dress fit beautifully, and her breath was sweet. And let's not forget the perfect shoes.

The shoes had literally fallen from the sky. She was driving under an overpass, when they fell onto the hood of her car, nearly causing an accident. She swerved to the right hoping the shoes would fall off, but they'd gotten hooked on a windsheild wiper, and were obstructing her view. She pulled over to remove them.

When she touched the shoes, she began to buzz. That's right, buzz. A very pleasant little buzz, just a quiet vibration, which brought with it a change in the light, everything downright rosier! That's it! Rosier! 

So when she put on the shoes to go out that night, with her fancy hairdo, nails, dress, and shoes, she walked with a sparkle and a hum. 

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This is my entry to @mariannewest's daily freewrite [challenge](https://peakd.com/hive-161155/@mariannewest/day-1981-5-minute-freewrite-sunday-prompt-she-looked-happier). Today's prompt is ***she looked happier***. 






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@myjob · Mar 19 '23

Were the red ruby shoes? lol

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@owasco · Mar 19 '23

Just as magical, yes!

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@sperosamuel15 · Mar 19 '23

>She was walking taller

How she wished it will always be hee height I guess😅

I'm not seeing her full picture but I'm sure she definitely looked like a damsel
Don't mind me, I know it's a fiction😅


That was a great write-up, really loved the way you started

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@owasco · Mar 19 '23

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

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@sperosamuel15 · Mar 19 '23

You're welcome

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