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· @pinkspectre ·
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In some days
When the light gives you direction
Forced to stand closer, to something
That you wish with time
Would grow dimmer
And fade away
From view

All-together life
Has changed its course forever
The world broke-down with resistance, in the dark
The world a dream-state
Almost nothing
You can explain
It's far away

In these days
Clouds are changing in the sky, to the light
I hope you haven't missed
The world passing you by?
The changing
Only some direction
But anywhere

They say love is never broken
You better look with your eyes
While they are still open
there's a wind blowing tides
Out on the sea
The sun is setting down
Over you and me
The day is flickering out like a flame
And I guess everything is still the same

No two signs
Could set fire to your world, you see
Or patch work in hearts
Your heart of hearts
In your time
Your imagination

There are words you will say
That mean nothing at all you see
You may cry out in the nighttime
But don't shed your tears to me
We are all that could ever be
Just open your eyes and look
You will always see

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@arthur.grafo ·
When writing prose, we find it easier to camouflage our inner self. Poetry though, even if it is something we try to 'make up', tends to get under our defences and we reveal that which we try to hide.

In other words, poetry makes us more vulnerable, but at the same time, if we use it to open ourselves to the world, we lose much of that vulnerability, since we no longer fear letting others get to know the real person inside us.

...and that real person? I find it is usually a child, or, childlike in its needs. It is what what helps save me from growing old (in the way I think). I hope it does so for you also.
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@bozz ·
I like the line "or patch work in hearts".  When I first read it I thought it was patchwork hearts, but then I read it again and I realized it wasn't that.  Nice poem!
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@bugavi ·
The verse is so versatile!  It's so incredibly beautiful.😍
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