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Great job with this, @raikuhen! Be sure to drop your link into the most current prompt post each time you freewrite. This way it will be seen and we have people that support at times. Be sure to mention this is your first (awesome) try. And read the prompt post closely at least once a week. There is all kinds of opportunity over there. I just won 20 steem today!!!
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Oh, yes, thank you, I forgot about that! After I published it I immediately started working on the weekly update so I forgot to leave a comment with the article. And thanks for the tip, I'll look out for future opportunities! I'm glad someone likes this really rushed short story :)
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I think more than me will like it. We have other fantasy writers over there :)
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I will destroy Snapshot too if I were there. Great freewrite. Great story!!! --- <center>And, I am here to deliver the next prompt to you. Here it is, check it out! It is ['jittery'.](https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-504-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-jittery) <center>Also, don't forget to read the latest posts from our new page to join more awesome contests at the</center><center>FREEWRITE HOUSE!</center> <center>[](https://steemit.com/@freewritehouse) <center><sub>Click the graphic to join in the fun!</sub></center><div id="DAB4FAD8-2DD7-40BB-A1B8-4E2AA1F9FDF2"><br /> <table style="border-top: 1px solid #D3D4DE;"> <tr>
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I'm gonna think about the prompt and maybe I'll come up with something in the following days! :)
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Well done!! Snapshot sounds like a pretty scary weapon and the idea that we all might destroy the earth only too real. Glad that you are writing with us and hope to read many more of your freewrites. Also, check out the Freewrite House and the many contests we are running there.
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Thank you very much, I will check it out! :)
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