# Saludos, comunidad de Steemit. # <div class="text-justify"> ¿Qué tanto estamos dispuestos a entregar por otra persona? Algunos, colmados de presencia ajena, dejan que hasta la noche se les vea arrebatada por el deseo. Se diluyen entre el anhelo y la expectación... Sobre eso trata este poema: la noche, la soledad y el amor (o tal vez eso creo yo). # **Espero les guste; de antemano agradezco sus lecturas y comentarios.**</div> --------------------------------------------- # **Insomnio** Porque no eres más que esto: noches despiertas, tibios recuerdos. Solo esto: búsqueda de olor menguante, persecución improbable de respiración. Inexistencia de tu peso sobre mí. No eres más que esto... Espera eterna, vaivén ligero, fe sin sueños ni caricias. https://cdn.pixabay.com/photo/2015/08/26/20/31/man-909049_960_720.jpg [Fuente](https://pixabay.com/es/hombre-joven-masculina-adulto-909049/)
author | ramhei.textual |
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permlink | insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad |
category | castellano |
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created | 2018-06-16 22:12:42 |
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author_curate_reward | "" |
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sofiaquino98 | 0 | 428,458,399 | 75% | ||
rafaelaquino | 0 | 423,698,426 | 75% | ||
lizbetcontreras | 0 | 421,267,338 | 75% | ||
fefecolors | 0 | 417,446,351 | 75% | ||
octocel | 0 | 404,815,620 | 75% | ||
edwardstobia | 0 | 1,666,941,043 | 75% | ||
danapalooza | 0 | 422,852,489 | 75% | ||
eudisdiaz | 0 | 420,490,928 | 75% | ||
hljott | 0 | 420,465,449 | 75% | ||
ysaiasnunez | 0 | 1,227,586,050 | 100% | ||
franciscomarval | 0 | 423,222,440 | 75% | ||
morey-lezama | 0 | 422,902,701 | 75% | ||
sandracabrera | 0 | 638,636,582 | 75% | ||
bertrayo | 0 | 220,060,535 | 37.5% | ||
francisaponte25 | 0 | 421,177,212 | 75% | ||
omarmontes | 0 | 4,022,487,709 | 75% | ||
andresromero | 0 | 404,719,515 | 75% | ||
luisparada3000 | 0 | 403,598,027 | 75% | ||
loro143 | 0 | 421,697,181 | 75% | ||
kellysar | 0 | 371,911,910 | 75% | ||
lnr28book | 0 | 421,637,717 | 75% | ||
siomarasalmeron | 0 | 760,726,644 | 75% | ||
reycard | 0 | 422,830,301 | 75% | ||
flamendialis | 0 | 422,646,543 | 75% | ||
isauris | 0 | 417,433,083 | 75% | ||
josemalavem | 0 | 609,421,188 | 100% | ||
roycabrera01 | 0 | 402,857,663 | 75% | ||
spavan697 | 0 | 605,244,814 | 100% | ||
antoaristi | 0 | 403,305,384 | 75% | ||
fafavasquez | 0 | 576,014,349 | 100% | ||
antolinamartell | 0 | 420,529,269 | 75% | ||
solperez | 0 | 427,937,534 | 75% | ||
ramhei.textual | 0 | 422,583,067 | 75% | ||
diamondfit | 0 | 402,857,663 | 75% | ||
libelulaerrante | 0 | 421,169,374 | 75% | ||
ingritte | 0 | 403,820,146 | 75% | ||
lauram | 0 | 603,839,386 | 100% | ||
marcybetancourt | 0 | 420,502,982 | 75% | ||
cantantecumanes | 0 | 421,479,497 | 75% | ||
girl-qmk | 0 | 610,598,885 | 100% | ||
hlezama | 0 | 619,157,038 | 75% | ||
audiarmis | 0 | 404,692,248 | 75% | ||
oacevedo | 0 | 422,341,033 | 75% | ||
chretien | 0 | 383,360,875 | 75% | ||
alidamaria | 0 | 409,020,397 | 75% | ||
acostacazorla | 0 | 422,205,772 | 75% | ||
rasanthony | 0 | 408,480,493 | 75% | ||
felixmarranz | 0 | 420,602,018 | 75% | ||
adoshop | 0 | 422,769,505 | 75% | ||
nina203 | 0 | 403,524,239 | 75% | ||
valenta | 0 | 400,084,984 | 75% | ||
nancybriti | 0 | 418,057,726 | 75% | ||
gythanobonfak | 0 | 415,721,475 | 75% | ||
gracielaacevedo | 0 | 420,604,225 | 75% | ||
mvvaleskap | 0 | 422,168,950 | 75% | ||
evagavilan | 0 | 423,540,459 | 75% | ||
beatrizpw1905 | 0 | 421,368,864 | 75% | ||
maxipiano | 0 | 377,814,494 | 75% | ||
nsteem | 0 | 404,422,714 | 75% | ||
snowy-june | 0 | 609,584,037 | 100% | ||
rafartista | 0 | 609,989,820 | 100% | ||
ramonochoag | 0 | 421,646,542 | 75% | ||
angel.isaacdavid | 0 | 407,358,717 | 75% | ||
danielarodri | 0 | 403,214,482 | 75% | ||
juanitojones | 0 | 614,487,187 | 100% | ||
angelus.nomada | 0 | 415,452,643 | 75% | ||
equipocardumen | 0 | 420,849,738 | 75% | ||
virtualink | 0 | 403,558,582 | 75% | ||
steemitchallenge | 0 | 403,773,669 | 75% | ||
arturobravo | 0 | 403,501,443 | 75% | ||
capitannemo | 0 | 421,892,952 | 75% | ||
perlamilano | 0 | 403,432,469 | 75% | ||
cachalote | 0 | 403,432,469 | 75% | ||
jorlando | 0 | 402,670,708 | 75% | ||
moliere | 0 | 421,362,067 | 75% | ||
votocardumen | 0 | 403,039,965 | 75% | ||
yaniraherrera | 0 | 403,039,965 | 75% | ||
hernancamino | 0 | 403,039,965 | 75% | ||
marlyncabrera2 | 0 | 381,356,402 | 75% | ||
coachluicho | 0 | 402,670,708 | 75% | ||
adncabrera-1 | 0 | 84,176,901 | 75% |
Hermoso texto, @ramhei.textual. Esa manera de plasmar el anhelo con sus efectos es muy suspicaz. Saludos.
author | fafavasquez |
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permlink | re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180616t222749659z |
category | castellano |
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root_title | "Insomnio - Un poema para la soledad" |
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Gracias por pasar por acá, @fafavasquez. Significa mucho para mí tu lectura, y mucho más que te haya gustado el texto. Un abrazo.
author | ramhei.textual |
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permlink | re-fafavasquez-re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180616t225156294z |
category | castellano |
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created | 2018-06-16 22:52:03 |
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Algunos pensadores han dicho que la duermevela es el estado por excelencia de la creación poética, y el insomnio, la mayoría de las veces, no es absoluto, sino que se entra y sale del sueño y la vigilia sin darnos cuenta. Disculpa la digresión inicial, @ramhei.textual; todo ello para decirte que tu poema me ha gustado y me parece que expresa muy bien ese estado en el que la poesía se hace texto acicateada por la vigilia que despierta el recuerdo y el deseo, y a la vez los sueña. Aprecio la levedad y sutileza de sus imágenes. Saludos.
author | josemalavem |
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permlink | re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180617t194010335z |
category | castellano |
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created | 2018-06-17 19:40:12 |
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Agradecido por sus lecturas (en general) y comentarios que siempre dan más de lo que se espera. No se limita al texto y ayuda mucho comentando de forma tan completa. Gracias, @josemalavem.
author | ramhei.textual |
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permlink | re-josemalavem-re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180618t004118119z |
category | castellano |
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Es muy grato haberme topado con este poema y su autor. saludos :3
author | juanitojones |
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permlink | re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180618t134611097z |
category | castellano |
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Magnífico tenerte por acá. Un abrazo, @juanitojones.
author | ramhei.textual |
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permlink | re-juanitojones-re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180618t183813835z |
category | castellano |
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Lindo poema, @ramhei.textual, aunque es muy malo el insomnio ... Saludos.
author | lauram |
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permlink | re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180616t232000914z |
category | castellano |
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Verdaderamente es muy malo, incomodísimo. Aun así, lo malo puede producir algo "bueno" (el poema). Gracias por leer, @lauram.
author | ramhei.textual |
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permlink | re-lauram-re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180616t232945893z |
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Corto pero hermoso, bien manejadas las palabras, transmite un sentimiento bonito de anhelo en esas horas que no podemos dormir pensando en el amor inalcanzable, me gustó!..
author | marybellrg |
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permlink | re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180625t014100560z |
category | castellano |
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Lo breve es hermoso por lo fugaz, creo que eso le da cierto encanto. Gracias por tu lectura, @marybellrg.
author | ramhei.textual |
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permlink | re-marybellrg-re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180625t032729844z |
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Un poema muy bueno, me gustó bastante. Ese pensamiento recurrente que no quiere recostar la cabeza está presente. Y el poema tiene su ritmo, no es arrítmico. Saludos.
author | spavan697 |
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permlink | re-ramheitextual-insomnio-un-poema-para-la-soledad-20180618t205749409z |
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Sin duda hay pensamientos que corren y no nos dejan de inquietar. Gracias por tomarte el tiempo, amigo.
author | ramhei.textual |
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"Fe sin sueños ni caricias". Si es así, entonces lo mejor es seguir durmiendo. Buen poema.
author | ysaiasnunez |
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Jajaja, si duermo no escribo... mejor el insomnio. Gracias por tu lectura, @ysaiasnunez.
author | ramhei.textual |
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