桌子上放着老大的作文本,便翻看了起来,他昨天刚写了一篇作文《我的动物朋友》,开头是这样写的, >我的动物朋友是一只猫咪 我有点奇怪,家里没有养过猫,他哪里来的这个朋友呢? ![cat-8575768_1280.png](https://images.hive.blog/DQmcR84nsBXswPu9KihiiKQsHTz29rsH7CwPsvV31eAvB6f/cat-8575768_1280.png) 该图片由<a href="https://pixabay.com/zh/users/seidenperle-41220675/?utm_source=link-attribution&utm_medium=referral&utm_campaign=image&utm_content=8575768">Seidenperle</a>在<a href="https://pixabay.com/zh//?utm_source=link-attribution&utm_medium=referral&utm_campaign=image&utm_content=8575768">Pixabay</a>上发布 继续往下看, >它有一双水灵灵的大眼睛,一身金黄的毛发,就算在黑夜,它身上的毛也会发出金光,你就不用在黑夜害怕了。 这,一身金黄的毛,这种猫咪我都没见过啊?金黄色的狗倒是很常见,我心里这样想,但是不管是猫是狗,身上的毛发也不可能“发出金光”啊??? 耐着性子继续看下去,只见老大写道, >它很聪明,比如,我想安静睡觉时,做个安静的手势,它就会立马安静下来,我把一个飞盘扔出去,它不会像其它猫一样呆呆的愣在原地不动,而是跑回去把飞盘捡回来。 这?这?你确定这是只猫,而不是狗? 接下来的内容,就更加离谱了, >我问它一加一等于几?它就会喵喵的叫两声。我问它二加二等于几?它就会叫四声。 天那!这样绝顶聪明的猫咪,我这辈子不止没见过,听都没听过啊! 很明显,老大这就是胡编乱造!而且可以肯定的是,虽然他开始写的是猫,但是写到这里时,他脑子里想到的是狗,因此才会出现把狗的一些行为当成猫咪写了。 后边的内容,虽然没前边这么离谱,但依旧是很虚假, >它很聪明,但还是有些呆。比如我上学时它跑在我前面,结果一不小心摔了一跤,跌到了水里,身上全湿了。 猫咪的反应速度,远比人要灵敏许多,怎么走路会不小心跌倒呢?我都没看到这样的场景,明显是自己虚假杜撰的嘛! >我给它钱让它帮我买个冰淇淋,结果回来不仅冰淇淋没带回来,连我给它的钱也不知道去哪里了。 >你觉得我的动物朋友可爱吗? 结尾虽然是想幽默下,但因为前边虚假编造,完全脱离现实,实在是让人幽默不起来啊! ![royal-gramma-basslet-8012082_1920.jpg](https://images.hive.blog/DQmb8BtsZa8ePSiacLgmJKjd7HA2EzRjMCrqJhW7xp99XrL/royal-gramma-basslet-8012082_1920.jpg) 该图片由<a href="https://pixabay.com/zh/users/geraldrose-36385416/?utm_source=link-attribution&utm_medium=referral&utm_campaign=image&utm_content=8012082">geraldrose</a>在<a href="https://pixabay.com/zh//?utm_source=link-attribution&utm_medium=referral&utm_campaign=image&utm_content=8012082">Pixabay</a>上发布 我叫来老大,问明这篇作文的来历,跟我估计的八九不离十,这小子开头确实是写猫,但因为是编造,写到中途脑子里一心想的是狗,结果就张冠李戴,最后造成的情况就是,非猫非狗,成了个四不像。 我批评了下老大,让他以后写作文要有依据,可以拟人,可以适度发挥,甚至夸张些都没问题,但这不是写科幻文章,以后不能胡编乱造。 至于这篇造假的文章,征的他同意后,我当场便撕掉了。
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家里养动物的对于小朋友来说好写些,毕竟有观察,没有的可能就只有想象了。这猫和狗混着写,小朋友太可爱了😄😂
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哈哈哈,小朋友天马行空的想象 最后大伟哥的做法是对的
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哈哈哈,我还想说是不是小朋友抖音看多了,抖音上的猫啊,狗呀的,都很聪明,哈哈哈
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老大现实中有真的动物朋友吗?会不会是因为“没有”,所以这篇作文写不了,只好自己“造”一个动物朋友出来。
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这篇文章其实也可以保留下来,可以作为一面镜子,指导他以后写文的路。孩子天马行空的想法,我感觉也是一种创造,也许以后还真会存在一种似猫似狗的动物呢?
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呵呵,非狗非猫,小朋友能做到这样,也优秀了👍👍
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