create account

Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run by sunnyag

View this thread on: hive.blogpeakd.comecency.com
· @sunnyag · (edited)
$6.40
Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run
Johnny looked at that transfer letter and cursed his luck as he got posted in Turkey as a project engineer for the construction of a bridge in Golden Horn’s rocky area. Johnny wasn’t happy to go to Turkey as a project manager. 
This is a THE FLASH FICTION CONTEST by @theinkwell. If you're willing to join please check- [HERE](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/the-ink-well-prompt-31-and-flash-fiction-contest-read-the-post-for-rules) 

πŸ‘  , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , and 310 others
properties (23)
authorsunnyag
permlinkjohnny-felt-a-creepy-sensation-and-wanted-to-run
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata"{"app":"peakd/2021.09.1","format":"markdown","description":"I know you will manage the fireworks the way I am looking for?\" To Johnny, his voice sounded mysterious.","tags":["fiction","theinkwell","writing","theinkwellcontest","flashfiction","ocd","proofofbrain","curangel","archon","neoaxian"],"users":["theinkwell.","theinkwell"],"image":[]}"
created2021-09-16 09:18:48
last_update2021-11-20 02:03:18
depth0
children16
last_payout2021-09-23 09:18:48
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value3.177 HBD
curator_payout_value3.226 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length445
author_reputation19,883,643,851,717
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries
0.
accountpeakd
weight500
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,328,821
net_rshares7,843,668,032,343
author_curate_reward""
vote details (374)
@agmoore ·
$0.02
This is a wonderful story, but it does beg for the other shoe to drop.  I know the word limit hampers that.  You developed this really well.  The questions are intriguing: Why the fireworks/explosives?  Why the similarity in appearance?  Are the children referenced in the last part going to get hurt.  This bit might be seen as foreshadowing if the story were developed further.

A really great build-up.  Great mood creation also.  I enjoyed reading this.  Your fiction skills are getting better and better. 
πŸ‘  ,
properties (23)
authoragmoore
permlinkre-sunnyag-qzjp35
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-16 21:01:57
last_update2021-09-16 21:01:57
depth1
children2
last_payout2021-09-23 21:01:57
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.010 HBD
curator_payout_value0.010 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length510
author_reputation340,708,908,574,604
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,342,895
net_rshares27,697,120,475
author_curate_reward""
vote details (2)
@sunnyag ·
@theinkwell @gracielaacevedo @agmoore @kaerpediem When I started, I had an idea where and how to finish this story, but to finish the way I wanted to, it would take another 600-700 words. I can still do it only if I am allowed to add that many more words. 

I know this is not the proper end of the story so I accept your comments gracefully! 

Actually, Pasha has a secret plan in his mind and he wants to use Johnny and his expertise in explosives to topple the local government by killing the Sultan of the state on the occasion of his sister's marriage. 
   
properties (22)
authorsunnyag
permlinkre-agmoore-qzjrjl
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-16 21:54:57
last_update2021-09-16 21:54:57
depth2
children1
last_payout2021-09-23 21:54:57
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length562
author_reputation19,883,643,851,717
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,343,835
net_rshares0
@agmoore ·
I love that imagination.  Not wasted.  Someday you'll use that story line. Believe me, I've been there.
properties (22)
authoragmoore
permlinkre-sunnyag-qzk5qc
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-17 03:01:27
last_update2021-09-17 03:01:27
depth3
children0
last_payout2021-09-24 03:01:27
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length103
author_reputation340,708,908,574,604
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,348,179
net_rshares0
@b0s ·
I really wanted to know why that man looked like him. Also, why they kept asking him about explosives. I'm sure you ended it there not to exceed the limit. It was a nice story nonetheless 
properties (22)
authorb0s
permlinkre-sunnyag-2021917t11436320z
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798","fiction","theinkwell","writing","theinkwellcontest","flashfiction","ocd","proofofbrain","curangel","archon","neoaxian"],"app":"ecency/3.0.22-mobile","format":"markdown+html"}
created2021-09-17 10:43:09
last_update2021-09-17 10:43:09
depth1
children1
last_payout2021-09-24 10:43:09
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length188
author_reputation168,276,669,613,685
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,354,643
net_rshares0
@sunnyag ·
I guess Pasha selected him because he looked like him. After all, he has a plan that involves his expertise as well his looks that fits in that! 
πŸ‘  
properties (23)
authorsunnyag
permlinkre-b0s-qzkrcg
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-17 10:48:15
last_update2021-09-17 10:48:15
depth2
children0
last_payout2021-09-24 10:48:15
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length145
author_reputation19,883,643,851,717
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,354,711
net_rshares3,057,294,276
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@gracielaacevedo ·
This is a mysterious story, full of vivid imagery, @sunnyag . A story that can take many directions but whose ending comes abruptly, leaving us bewildered.   
πŸ‘  
πŸ‘Ž  
properties (23)
authorgracielaacevedo
permlinkre-sunnyag-qzjhqv
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-16 18:20:54
last_update2021-09-16 18:20:54
depth1
children0
last_payout2021-09-23 18:20:54
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length158
author_reputation78,354,227,391,283
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,339,930
net_rshares3,052,675,977
author_curate_reward""
vote details (2)
@jayna ·
So intriguing and mysterious, @sunnyag! I like your character development in this story. Thanks for joining the contest.
πŸ‘  
properties (23)
authorjayna
permlinkre-sunnyag-qzkcbk
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-17 05:23:27
last_update2021-09-17 05:23:27
depth1
children1
last_payout2021-09-24 05:23:27
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length120
author_reputation337,115,374,659,195
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,350,028
net_rshares5,866,482,418
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@sunnyag ·
Thanks but I could not finish the story as I wanted to. It would be longer than the allowed number of words. But there is always a next time :) 
properties (22)
authorsunnyag
permlinkre-jayna-qzkcid
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-17 05:27:48
last_update2021-09-17 05:27:48
depth2
children0
last_payout2021-09-24 05:27:48
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length144
author_reputation19,883,643,851,717
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,350,096
net_rshares0
@kaerpediem ·
$0.02
Nooooooo
Why does this man look familiar??!!!
πŸ‘  ,
properties (23)
authorkaerpediem
permlinkre-sunnyag-qzj1hh
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-16 12:32:06
last_update2021-09-16 12:32:06
depth1
children5
last_payout2021-09-23 12:32:06
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.011 HBD
curator_payout_value0.010 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length46
author_reputation207,900,436,998,140
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,332,021
net_rshares26,093,767,597
author_curate_reward""
vote details (2)
@sunnyag ·
I am not sure, maybe this Johnny guy has gone crazy and seeing things. 
properties (22)
authorsunnyag
permlinkre-kaerpediem-qzj7kq
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-16 14:43:39
last_update2021-09-16 14:43:39
depth2
children4
last_payout2021-09-23 14:43:39
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length71
author_reputation19,883,643,851,717
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,335,039
net_rshares0
@agmoore ·
:))
properties (22)
authoragmoore
permlinkre-sunnyag-qzjoxl
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-16 20:58:36
last_update2021-09-16 20:58:36
depth3
children0
last_payout2021-09-23 20:58:36
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length3
author_reputation340,708,908,574,604
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,342,823
net_rshares0
@kaerpediem ·
It must be working with explosions
It has blurred his vision hahahaha
properties (22)
authorkaerpediem
permlinkre-sunnyag-qzj8sp
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-16 15:10:00
last_update2021-09-16 15:10:00
depth3
children2
last_payout2021-09-23 15:10:00
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length69
author_reputation207,900,436,998,140
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,335,650
net_rshares0
@theinkwell ·
 Thank you for posting this intriguing story in the community showcase,  @sunnyag !
Thanks also for the comments you make to fellow writers, helping the community to grow strong. 
πŸ‘  
properties (23)
authortheinkwell
permlinkre-sunnyag-qzjhwz
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["hive-170798"],"app":"peakd/2021.09.1"}
created2021-09-16 18:24:33
last_update2021-09-16 18:24:33
depth1
children0
last_payout2021-09-23 18:24:33
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length179
author_reputation193,883,300,940,978
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,340,010
net_rshares3,237,469,420
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@yuki-nee ·
There's just one word to describe the story: Intriguing. 
properties (22)
authoryuki-nee
permlinkre-sunnyag-2021917t15024732z
categoryhive-170798
json_metadata{"tags":["fiction","theinkwell","writing","theinkwellcontest","flashfiction","ocd","proofofbrain","curangel","archon","neoaxian"],"app":"ecency/3.0.19-vision","format":"markdown+html"}
created2021-09-17 07:00:27
last_update2021-09-17 07:00:27
depth1
children0
last_payout2021-09-24 07:00:27
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length57
author_reputation35,315,443,927,590
root_title"Johnny felt a creepy sensation and wanted to run"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id106,351,366
net_rshares0