Here is my [Day One](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@deeanndmathews/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-one-done), and it took about 30 minutes ... 

My five comments:

1. Comment on [@morey-lezama's post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@deeanndmathews/re-morey-lezama-qn0m7s)
2. Comment on [@jayna's post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@deeanndmathews/re-jayna-qn0mga)
3. Comment on [@soyunasantacruz's post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@deeanndmathews/re-soyunasantacruz-qn0mpi)
4. Comment on [@ricardo993's post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@deeanndmathews/re-ricardo993-qn0mvs)
5. Comment on [@dwixer's post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@deeanndmathews/re-dwixer-qn0n5s)

Here is my Entry Link to Day one task.

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@dwixer/fast-and-furious-or-the

Comment made
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https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@jayna/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1#@dwixer/re-jayna-2021113t94418456z

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@soyunasantacruz/fast-and-furious-ink-festival-challenge-day-one#@dwixer/re-soyunasantacruz-2021113t9391036z

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@raj808/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1-dialogue#@dwixer/re-raj808-2021113t93322533z

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@gilliatt/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1-good-luck-short-story-by-gilliatt#@dwixer/re-gilliatt-2021113t94851458z

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@justclickindiva/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1#@dwixer/re-justclickindiva-2021114t111611887z

Here's link to my day 1 post
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@faith65/day-1-of-the-inkwell-fast-and-furious-festival

5 Comments Made

[To dwixer](https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@dwixer/fast-and-furious-or-the#@faith65/re-dwixer-2021127t84244611z)

[To soyunasantacruz](https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@soyunasantacruz/fast-and-furious-ink-festival-challenge-day-one#@faith65/re-soyunasantacruz-2021127t84946293z)

[To kaerpediem](https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@kaerpediem/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-or-or-day-one#@faith65/re-kaerpediem-2021127t8580180z)

[To -iamraincrystal](https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@iamraincrystal/introductions-or-the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-one#@faith65/re-iamraincrystal-2021127t985773z)

[To jayna](https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@jayna/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1#@faith65/re-jayna-2021127t91431452z)

So sorry I'm still trying to catch up with everyone. Have a good day.

Greetings to all and welcome to this fast and furious festival, we hope to have fun and learn from each and every one of the participants, it took me just over an hour, since seeing the demands of day one, I tried to cover all of them in this little story , Success for everyone. Here is my entry:
https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@gilliatt/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1-good-luck-short-story-by-gilliatt
<Center>***Commented***</Center>
- @mayifiestas
- @marcybetancourt
- @morey-lezama
- @justclickindiva
- @jayna

Greetings friends!
[Here is my Entry Link to Day one](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@gracielaacevedo/fastandfurious-or-the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-one)

I have made comments to the publications of the first day of 
@kaerpediem
 @gilliatt
@soyunasantacruz
@ iamraincrystal
 @notacinephile .

My participation for today:
[Introductions](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@iamraincrystal/introductions-or-the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-one)

Visited the ff: (will be back for more)
[@raj808](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@raj808/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1-dialogue)
[@kaerpediem](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@kaerpediem/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-or-or-day-one)
Additional visits:
[@jayna](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@jayna/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1)
[@soyunasantacruz](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@soyunasantacruz/fast-and-furious-ink-festival-challenge-day-one)
[@dwixer](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@dwixer/fast-and-furious-or-the)

Here's my Day 1 post: https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@jayna/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1

I have also commented on @soyunasantacruz's [post](https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@soyunasantacruz/fast-and-furious-ink-festival-challenge-day-one) and @raj808's [post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@raj808/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1-dialogue).

Hello. This was an interesting exercise for Day 1. I haven't participated in a workshop before, so it was refreshing to look at my dialogue and character development and analyze it against what you propose in your example. Thanks for the fresh approach I will adopt in the future to narrow my focus:

Here is the link to my Day 1 Festival:

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@justclickindiva/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1

***
LINKS TO COMMENTS: 

This section of the Festival is essential, I think, to the future success of the Community. Encouraging engagement on each other's content is a way to keep a high level of activity in the Community.  

1. [@morey-lezama](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@morey-lezama/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1)

2. [@ricardo993](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@ricardo993/fast-and-furious-or-day-one)

3. [@dwixer](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@dwixer/fast-and-furious-or-the)

4. [@kaerpediem](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@kaerpediem/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-or-or-day-one)

5. [@soyunasantacruz](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@soyunasantacruz/fast-and-furious-ink-festival-challenge-day-one)

**ADDITIONAL COMMENTS**
6. [@gilliatt](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@justclickindiva/re-gilliatt-qn5ioq)
7. [@deeanndmathews](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@justclickindiva/re-deeanndmathews-qn5mbz)
8. [@notacinephile](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@justclickindiva/re-notacinephile-qn6hyw)
9. [@marcybetancourt](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@justclickindiva/re-marcybetancourt-qn8ue3) 

**ADDITIONAL COMMENT ON 1/30/21:**
[@faith65](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@justclickindiva/re-faith65-qnqiun)

Here's my Day 1 - took me longer than the 1 hour I was supposed to have dedicated to it... but it will get faster
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@kaerpediem/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-or-or-day-one

🖌🖌🖌🖌🖌
Comments:
**raj808**
> Could relate to all three characters
I find most times, the gossip is the one that has plenty of time to do it, and then there's that friend who is more of an introvert, ever ready to soak it all in ;p
Could feel Mary's indignance :D

**soyunasantacruz** 
> Hah! Party animal is going to have to tone it down eh, to run for politics ;p
 A lesson in the dialogue, guess that's the last time he is helping her out ...:D

**jayna**
> Ooooh, I like that you connected them
Now I know the dynamics of their relationship :D

**dwixer**
> I have seen many like Doctor Williams
Give them a little power and they start gloating
Let's hope he is as good a doctor as his ego...
....

And also
iamraincrystal 
justclickindiva 
morey-lezama 
mayifiestas 

My participation - Day 1 https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@marcybetancourt/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1

Comments:
1 @deeanndmathews 
2 @notacinephile
3 @morey-lezama
4 @gilliatt Read but not commented
5 @raj808
6 @soyunasantacruz

Here is my entry, it was a bit confusing for me at first, I did it in 30 minutes, I did not post before due to internet connection problems

https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@mayifiestas/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-one

I have commented:

@dwixer
@soyunasantacruz
@gilliatt

Hi, this is my participation for the first day challenge:
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@morey-lezama/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1

I have also commented to [@raj808](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@morey-lezama/re-raj808-qmumh0), [@jayna](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@morey-lezama/re-jayna-qmxq4n) y [@justclickindiva](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@morey-lezama/re-justclickindiva-qmxqlq)

Here's my day 1 - https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@notacinephile/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1

https://twitter.com/theinkwell10/status/1349077794073010184

https://twitter.com/VozdeVilladeCur/status/1349762681570516996

My entry... can't believe I'm first off the bat for once in my life 😂 Usually I'm late for everything.

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@raj808/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1-dialogue

I've added some insights learned through the process in my post, and also tips I've learned in the past for dialogue. I didn't manage my time very well though, it took about 2 hours all in all after messing around in GIMP to create the title image. 

I had a lot of fun writing characters in response to your dialogue though 🙂 

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Comments on others posts:

> Hi soyunasantacruz.<br>
I love the way you have explored the motivations of the three character, especially the two gossiping women. Their character traits elaborates on why they might be gossiping about the third.<br>
And your dialogue effectively portrayed how a boss sometimes doesn't see how they have created a problem by overloading a worker... they so rarely see or admit it though.
This is why after my last job I vowed I would only work for myself from then onward 😂<br>
[soyunasantacruz post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@soyunasantacruz/fast-and-furious-ink-festival-challenge-day-one)

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> Hi Jayna<br>
Great character descriptions. I particularly liked the way you built a past between the three women. I tried to intimate similar between two of my characters, but I think I might have been too vague. There was  more of a 'mean girls' or ladies vibe going on in mine 😂<br>
The dialogue is fantastic. It builds really nicely to a real mystery cliffhanger type moment, leaving the reader wondering 'what is this disease'? Will Mr Caldwell be OK? The descriptive actions also progressed and informed the dialogue perfectly. Very nice!<br>
[jayna post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@jayna/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-1)

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> Hi dwixer<br>
You effectively build a picture of the social standings and friendships between the three women in your character study.<br> 
I also liked the dialogue section and how it shows the way people often become conceited upon winning professional awards.<br>
[dwixer post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@dwixer/fast-and-furious-or-the)

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> Hi kaerpediem. How are you? I hope you're well.<br>
I liked how you filled out the back story of the three women, especially the first gossiping woman, so different to mine who were both pretty mean spirited people 😂<br>
Interesting that we both painted the politician who had had 'work done' as a good person. I wonder how accurate that is to reality... a politician being a good person 🤣 Wishful thinking maybe.<br>
The dialogue was clear and concise and left me with a strong impression that it was two family members talking about another family member who is considered the black sheep.<br>
Nice work!<br>
[kaerpediem post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@kaerpediem/the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-or-or-day-one)

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> Hey iamraincrystal 👋 How's things? It has been a while.<br>
Great character descriptions; a psychic, a bookworm and a political powerhouse. Quite a combination 😉<br>
It is interesting the way you continued the dialogue from theinkwell post, sticking with those characters and further developing it to express the back story you created.<br> 
Nice 🙂<br>
[iamraincrystal post](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@iamraincrystal/introductions-or-the-ink-well-fast-and-furious-festival-day-one)   

Hello @theinkwell thank you very much for this challenge, it was very satisfying to participate, the creation lasted 30 minutes.

I guess expert writers should do it in 10 minutes. But I am very happy, I did all the homework and I will go to bed with excitement waiting for the second day.

Thank you 🙋🏽

Also take advantage and make the first comment, I leave it below.

https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@soyunasantacruz/fast-and-furious-ink-festival-challenge-day-one

This is the comment I made to @raj808 

> I laughed a little because of the description of his characters, a little eccentric but the dialogue also gives us the opportunity to blow up our imagination and exaggerate the description.

> I liked very much his post, very organized his presentation, has helped me with the options of the labels always I doubt with them.

> congratulations🤝


This is the comment I made to @jayna 
Good work on task 1.

I felt that it was not a description of characters, but a story that enthralls the life of those characters. The first part I loved the second part I missed a little bit. 

On task 2.

I liked the dialogue but again I had the perception that it was long, so I went to check with a word counter 🙈 and

This is the comment I made to @kaerpediem  
It is curious to see the different personality traits of our characters, they are so different.

However there is something in common between you and me and the other participants. We all assume the average age for each character being the last one older. 

I liked your dialogue very much, I felt the person's anger and I think I even took their side. 🤣😬 Good job.

This is the comment I made to @iamraincrystal 

It's interesting that in the description of your characters you haven't included age, I think you're the first to do that.

I liked your dialogue, especially the firmness and security of the man. He really liked that woman 🤣👏 @iamraincrystal 

This is the comment I made to @dwixer 

Hi, to comment and vote on your post I had to look for you at hive.blog because I don't have the application you post from.

Maybe it's better to share the links from hive or peakd so you don't miss the opportunity to comment or vote. 

Going back to your post, I really liked the dialogue. I think that nurses' conversation is more common than fiction 😜

This is the comment I made to @gilliatt 

What a good story, it surprised me several times in the development of the events.

Excellent, I think you have a talent for this, go ahead and don't be discouraged. 👍 Congratulations.

Happy day, I am looking forward to the second challenge.

Although I'm exhausted with the dynamics of the comments, that of going to comment and bringing it back, I don't think it will work for me, I'm a little confused and it's hard for me to organize my own commentary. 

It would be good to analyze that dynamic. Thank you and sorry if it causes you any inconvenience. @theinkwell