Oh no, don't do that to us!  But if you don't, then the story would probably be saccharine and less effective. Beautifully wrought.  The dream sequence blends into the narrative very well.  Dreams can be irritating if they are used as an 'out', a way to resolve conflict.  But in your story, the dream sequence is used to provide insight. Great!

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