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Blockchain Poets - Prompt - Mother by todayslight

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Blockchain Poets - Prompt - Mother
You've lived through my pain
You've been the bearer of my lies
If i could change the world
I'd curse out all of the evil
And you'd be the only person i'd let breathe
You made me into a man
That gives it all to anyone that calls
I sometimes expect the same in return
But that's not what you taught me
I remember the times when the world could pass me by
And i wouldn't wish for a single change
That's when i was your son
Before i was a man
Before i learnt the dance of shame
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@emrysjobber · 
***Before i learnt the dance of shame***

This last line seems to have a meaning I can't comprehend. If you don't mind, can u please elaborate on what u meant by dance of shame.

Indeed mothers play an amazing role in every child lives.

Nice write up.
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@todayslight · 
before innocence was lost was what i was going for, thanks for the comment!
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@emrysjobber · 
Oh, thanks for the comment.
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@joseitosanchezs ·
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Very nice poem is special and also I love the drawing reflects well what you feel, thanks for sharing.
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@maylenasland · 
Writing about close ones is such a deep and sensitive topic...The expression ''dance of shame'' is a strong one. I like it. I also find your drawing nice chosen in this context. It connects me with the idea of roots and family.
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@todayslight · 
Thanks, happy wishes.
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@tahminasyed · 
So lost after the first read. So connected after the second read. Your words were totally indirect yet direct at some points. Correct me if I am wrong, but this poem is dedicated to mothers, right? A very nice attempt.
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