Hey Jubreal, 

Thank you for this comprehensive blog post. The post is editorial and unique. It contains your thoughts, and experiences with the app.

The content and volume of the post are decent enough, but the presentation could be better. The post could have more rounds of proofreading to improve its readability. There are some hard, and unclear sentences. I’ll cite an example.

> You listen to an opera, which is sung most of the time in a foreign language or language you really don’t understand, you could care less on how much you really understand the song lyrics because the music and melodies carry you through the piece.

First, this sentence could be 2 or 3 sentences, depending on the phrasing. Short, and concise sentences are easy to understand. Also, the first line of the texts is unclear, with many superfluous words.

I would advise you to avoid excessive words. Most of the time could be written as, mostly. Write simply, and clearly. Always keep your texts simple and clear. Also, dedicate more time to check, and proofread your texts correctly. Use Grammarly and Hemingway to eradicate minor issues. Last, be consistent in spacing your paragraphs.

Thank you. I hope to receive more contributions from you!

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