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THE MAKING OF A PERFECT MEMORY by warpedpoetic

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· @warpedpoetic ·
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THE MAKING OF A PERFECT MEMORY
Smooth as surgeried lips, 
your skin spreads its thin voice 
over the quiet colour of night. 
Sleep like a ghost rises 
from the contours of your breath gently 
as if a beast cocks its ears against my ribs. 
The lush warmth of your body brightens 
in the room as if coming from a distance 
& everywhere opens inside me 
like a chipped bowl 
held for too long under the sun. 
Somewhere our sweat tangles, 
ache nods its weary head & begins 
to rise & harden, its stone angels almost afloat. 
In that fabled place, your body stretches 
into a sea & veils me in its dewy need.
& I, simple as a pebble, settle deep 
like a memory into your voice. 
Then I begin to sharpen into focus 
like heartbreak & you begin to recede 
until only your skin remains, pile 
upon pile of wet soil & all the palm trees 
drunk with my tears
***
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@emma-h2 ·
This was a great poem, I love how poems can convey so many different things, (storylines?) - this one had a few and I liked that. 
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@warpedpoetic ·
Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed this. 
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@jmis101 ·
This poem made me drop tears.
The end of it all.
My greatest fear.
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@warpedpoetic ·
Is it not everyone's fear? But inspite of it, love is always worth it 
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@jmis101 ·
Yes, love is the greatest.
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@mmenyene ·
I love this poem
♥️
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@warpedpoetic ·
Thank you for enhoying this poem. Do come around again. 
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@rinconpoetico7 ·
A very passionate poem, verses that describe the conjunction of two bodies in the dance of love. Excellent work.

Thanks for sharing.
Good day.
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@warpedpoetic ·
Thank you for reading. 🙌
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@silher ·
What a beautiful metaphor of love conjugated in the intimate act where two bodies are linked. Thank you for such a beautiful poem. Greetings.
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@warpedpoetic ·
A metaphor indeed. I'm glad you stopped by. 💚
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