Tart - 5 Minute Freewrite by sumatranate

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freewrite · @sumatranate · May 29 '19 (edited)

$1.40

Tart - 5 Minute Freewrite

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His words stung deeply, like an emotional slap to the face.  And they reminded her of how she felt when her father yelled at her as a child.  His insults pierced her soul like a knife.

No one had every implied she was tasteless or sexually provocative.  This man was a liar.   When his friends laughed at her, her heart ached even more.  His words were filled with deceit, but the culture and tradition of her people would not allow her to speak out.  Her father and brothers would react strongly if she did so.  She could not afford the risk of more pain.   

She did not have a place to stand up and defend herself.  She was strong and full of life, but she felt helpless.   His reckless insults were hurled with such ease.  Oh, how they hurt!  She walked away ashamed, even though she had done nothing wrong.  She felt alone.

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@deeanndmathews · May 29 '19 (edited)

$0.03

We know that many young girls go through this ... vividly made real to the reader.

👍 sumatranate

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@mariannewest · May 29 '19

Hah! I used the same word! Vividly! It must be so 😀

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@sumatranate · May 29 '19 (edited)

Unfortunately, many young women experience this.  Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.  Much appreciated!

👍 ztz, mlkj

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@dexterdumb · May 29 '19

$0.07

I don't get it.

👍 dexterdumb, sumatranate

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@sumatranate · May 29 '19

$0.02

@dexterdumb - I appreciate your honesty.  This was my first attempt to join one of  @mariannewest's #freewrite prompts.  The word prompt was **tart**.

Even though I never used the word in my post, I implied that a crude man called the main character a **tart**, which is a derogatory way to say that a woman is sexually provocative.  In her culture, she would be shamed if she had acted that way.  And even though she had not acted that way, she felt shame for the way the man publicly put her down.

Hope my explanation helps.  Thanks for your commenting and stopping by!

👍 dexterdumb, penghuren

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@dexterdumb · May 31 '19

$0.03

It does, thank you sir!  Sorry for being dense ;)

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@isgledysduarte · May 29 '19

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I used to think that where I lived was safe, until one day a man takes me by the hair and tries to take me by force. The fear that invades every fiber of the body is indescribable. As well as infinite ways of reacting. Fortunately I managed to escape from such a situation.

👍 sumatranate

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@sumatranate · May 29 '19

I cannot imagine what you went through.  I am grateful that you escaped, and my hope for you is that you will find healing and that his man will receive justice.

👍 cheneats

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@mariannewest · May 29 '19

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You showed vividly what so many girls and young women experience. So glad that you joined the freewriters!

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👍 sumatranate

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@sumatranate · May 29 '19

Thanks for reaching out and for your encouraging word.  It was a challenging experience, but I hope to join more in the future.

👍 cheneats

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@steem-ua · May 29 '19

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@whatisnew · May 29 '19

$0.03

Welcome @sumatranate!  So happy to have you join us!  Emotional abuse is just as bad as physical abuse which you have written about perfectly.  Great job on your first freewrite!  : )

Resident cat here, wishing you a wonderful day.  Here is the new prompt:  https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-586-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-chapter

Win a Membership in Steem Basic Income - Tell us About a Favorite [Freewrite](https://steemit.com/contest/@freewritehouse/week-50-win-a-membership-in-steem-basic-income-tell-us-about-a-favorite-freewrite)

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👍 sumatranate

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@sumatranate · May 29 '19

Thanks for stopping by and leaving an encouraging comment.   I have posted a new entry for today's prompt.

👍 penghuren

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@whatisnew · May 30 '19

My pleasure!  Off to read your new entry now.  : )

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