This story has a good arc.  It has strong character development. It is a very good story.  However, smooth reading is somewhat disturbed by typos and other minor errors.  This sentence, for example seems to be self-contradictory:
> I was always ahead of my classmates because they were all extremely intelligent than me. 

The conflict resolution was excellent as was your description of scenes.

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