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A stunning piece. Whilst some struggle to really capture the internal world of characters and use third person to flip between people who are at odds with and at war with each other, you do this brilliantly in the first person, really conveying that internal angst and fatal attraction to the other. Brilliantly executed.
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Thank you, my lovely 😘 I appreciate this from you! I do love *first-person* narrative 💗 I find it allows me to *feel* more and *share* more in a way that is more *real* to me !LUV !ALIVE
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Oh yes, it's more emotionally immediate. It's a good exercise though to write in first or third then flip it and see what's missing or different! But gah .. hate flipping through character names. It's hard to do third omniscient!
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