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RE: The illusion of self by samsmith1971

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· @samsmith1971 ·
hi 🤗💗

yes... I agree... it's not long enough. I wanted it to be better *and* I would have liked to have had a couple of pivotal interactions between the two of them... something that developed the relationship, the understanding, the appreciation... but I only just got this entry in with 2 minutes to spare... and so it is somewhat lacking in that area... maybe I'll develop it further... I have a couple of short stories that I may go back to one day and do a part 2, 3 etc...  they may require minor rewrites of the original to make them work better as a series. 

But yes... both personalities, although experienced as separate... are from one source... within one body, one mind, one soul... and so I do believe that salvation is *theirs*. It was just something that popped into my head as a rhetorical question whilst I was ruminating about the prompt and I thought it would be interesting to explore it in fiction.

Thank you for always encouraging me with your beautiful words 💗

!LUV !LADY
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