Good job on getting the first review of this task out. As I mentioned on Discord, you did certainly raise the bar :)

* The story is a compelling read, which gives me a good feeling for the gameplay of EOS Knights.
* You have experience writing game reviews, and that shows! Your criticism for the game is well substantiated.
* The screenshots are not very suitable, you could crop the relevant parts rather than showing fullscreen desktop shows everywhere.
* The initial title wasn't great and mentioned Oracle-D which is a big no-no per their guidelines, but you have improved it fortunately :)
* Your post has too many post & unrelated advertisement for my taste.
* Tweet is lacking flavour, has no text and has too many tags. Your Twitter profile is missing a profile picture :(
* State of the DApps mention is subtile and fits right into the story.

Meta review score: 🌟🌟🌟🌟