Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback, hopefully you can use it to your advantage in future tasks!

* Mentioning Oracle-D in an article is a big no-no for their tasks!
* I like the personal touch in the introduction if your story, but keep that going throughout the article. Tell us what you experienced in this game.
* In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing in your article.
* Improve the choice of images, now there is too much of the same, too big & poor quality.
* Title can be improved, put the game first. Tags and category are good.
* I am not a fan of the list of links at the bottom of the article, especially not without clarifying titles.
* Your tweet is too verbose.  You could learn a bit more how to use Twitter, people tend to be brief.
* State of the DApps mention is subtile and fits right into the story.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: 🚛🚛