Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

* Great introduction and story, but mentioning Oracle-D is a big no-no for their tasks!
* After the embedded gameplay trailer video, your article falls a bit apart. It feels rushed and there is no conclusion. I would love to read how your story really ends :)
* In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing.
* I get the feeling that you are trying to be too complex with your language, don't say "for your perusal" in a game review.
* The chosen screenshots are a bit chaotic, different sizes and styles. Not well mixed with the story.
* Title, category and tags are okay.
* I am not a fan of the list of links at the bottom of the article.
* Tweet has too many tags, looks like spam.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: ⭐⭐⭐