Thank you for your contribution. The following are some of my thoughts on your lesson and suggestions as to how you can improve on your video tutorials. 

- Your language is at times difficult to follow as you often seem to lose you place and say, "ahh." This can be distracting for learners. You need to take your time and speak clearly and slow. 

- Many of the concepts are touched on too briefly. Unless you show a thorough lesson on each and every topic it is of no value to learners. 

- I think you tried to cover too many things in this tutorial. Many concepts go by too quickly. You need to thoroughly explain why you are doing the things you do. 

- If you make a mistake, like 24:40 you need to edit it out. 

- I would like to see more explanation about the functions you are showing. Often times you showed how to do certain things but you did not explain specifically why and how you did them. For example, around 20:00 you talked about find but did give details about why you used specific commands. Things went by too fast. 

- Font size is far too small. You need to enlarge your font so learners can easily read it. Make your terminal window full screen at the very least.

- I liked that you created some graphics at 8:00 but you need to prepare this offline then use it quickly in your video. Do not create them as part of the video. Learners do not want to see this. 




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