create account

RE: Peer Query core open source release, what you can do with the platform and more by didic

View this thread on: hive.blogpeakd.comecency.com

Viewing a response to: @dzivenu/peer-query-core-open-source-release-what-you-can-do-with-the-platform-and-more

· @didic ·
$6.19
We at Utopian are always delighted when an app or a service goes open source. More cool stuff to support! 

I did have a couple of issues with this post, however, both in regards to content and presentation.

On the content side, the post presumes significant pre-existing knowledge on the side of readers. A more comprehensive explanation of what Peer Query does and how it does it would have made the post more accessible to those new to the platform. 

On the presentation side, there were issues of style and grammar, as well as a shortage of graphical illustrations. I'll cite a couple of examples of those style and grammar issues. 

* "It is free to create a project, and you can create as many projects as you want." This is a style issue. It would be clearer as "Creating a project is free, and you can create as many as you want." This avoids both the duplication of "project/projects" and the confusion of "it is free" as the start of a sentence.

* "We will soon as many new features for projects." I think this may be a proofreading issue? The word "as" should obviously be "have," and I guess it may have been left over in an edit?

Issues such as these make the post a little harder to read, and I would urge greater attention to them going forward. 

Your contribution has been evaluated according to [Utopian policies and guidelines](https://join.utopian.io/guidelines), as well as a predefined set of questions pertaining to the category.

To view those questions and the relevant answers related to your post, [click here](https://review.utopian.io/result/1/23421312).

---- 
Need help? Write a ticket on https://support.utopian.io/. 
Chat with us on [Discord](https://discord.gg/uTyJkNm). 
[[utopian-moderator]](https://join.utopian.io/)
👍  , , , , , , , ,
properties (23)
authordidic
permlinkre-dzivenu-peer-query-core-open-source-release-what-you-can-do-with-the-platform-and-more-20180908t223228981z
categoryutopian-io
json_metadata{"tags":["utopian-io"],"links":["https://join.utopian.io/guidelines","https://review.utopian.io/result/1/23421312","https://support.utopian.io/","https://discord.gg/uTyJkNm","https://join.utopian.io/"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2018-09-08 22:32:27
last_update2018-09-08 22:32:27
depth1
children2
last_payout2018-09-15 22:32:27
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value4.692 HBD
curator_payout_value1.500 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length1,757
author_reputation76,371,161,336,613
root_title"Peer Query core open source release, what you can do with the platform and more"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id70,737,014
net_rshares5,914,209,857,749
author_curate_reward""
vote details (9)
@dzivenu ·
totally my bad; edited the areas you highlighted. thanks
properties (22)
authordzivenu
permlinkre-didic-re-dzivenu-peer-query-core-open-source-release-what-you-can-do-with-the-platform-and-more-20180909t093913078z
categoryutopian-io
json_metadata{"tags":["utopian-io"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2018-09-09 09:39:33
last_update2018-09-09 09:39:33
depth2
children0
last_payout2018-09-16 09:39:33
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length56
author_reputation35,080,388,713,175
root_title"Peer Query core open source release, what you can do with the platform and more"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id70,773,387
net_rshares0
@utopian-io ·
Thank you for your review, @didic!

So far this week you've reviewed 15 contributions. Keep up the good work!
properties (22)
authorutopian-io
permlinkre-re-dzivenu-peer-query-core-open-source-release-what-you-can-do-with-the-platform-and-more-20180908t223228981z-20180914t064510z
categoryutopian-io
json_metadata"{"app": "beem/0.19.42"}"
created2018-09-14 06:45:12
last_update2018-09-14 06:45:12
depth2
children0
last_payout2018-09-21 06:45:12
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length109
author_reputation152,955,367,999,756
root_title"Peer Query core open source release, what you can do with the platform and more"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id71,248,245
net_rshares0