We need more education-type posts on steemit I think, so, I approve!

Your advice is rather .. bare bones! I personally I'm more interested in the molecules rather than the organism, let's say. Like how to write a good sentence. Or if not down to sentence-level, maybe paragraph level? Or generally something more specific, like how to create movement in a scene, surprise, whatever.

The "indented" part is well-written. Is that from a book of yours, or something you wrote for this post?