RE: How I write. Lesson 6 by cecicastor

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writing · @cecicastor · Sep 22 '17

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Thank you so much, @michelle.gent! I can see the difference in what has been changed. It puts the reder more in the story. *"Show, don't tell"*  is really good advice and I need to remember this. I need more practice at writing. I think I have the skeleton but I need to flesh it out better and learn to deliver the "hook".

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@michelle.gent · Sep 23 '17 (edited)

That's a relief. 

It's difficult to know which way writers will go when an editor gets a hold of a piece.

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to show what I do for a job and thank you for not getting angry with me (some do) xx

Don't worry. Practice and re-read once the excitement of writing it all down has passed.

As ever, you can't edit a blank piece of paper ❤️️

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@cecicastor · Sep 23 '17

Some editors aren't as polite as you are...

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@michelle.gent · Sep 23 '17

Ah, well, some editors aren't also writers and don't know how their words can hurt <3

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