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You've hit the nail on the head. I teach GAMSAT essay writing (essays for entry into medical school) and the key is to write from the heart - tell them a story from your experience, and not only 'the story', but also how you feel or felt about the events in the story. This is how to connect through the written word.
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Thank you, and yes if it is not from the heart do not write it, there must be a passion for what you write.
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