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The guardian angel... by abdul-qudus

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The guardian angel...
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> ***Like it’s said that when the child of someone with a righteous soul is about to fall into a pit, the fireflies would shine their light.***  

Ade was a young man who has always tried his best, he is brilliant, talented, and also that hardworking man every woman would want to have as their spouse. His handsomeness is always the talk of the street whenever he passes by in his luxury cars and attires. One thing Ade is always fearful about is the fact that he never can tell who he would have to choose as a wife. Everyone wants him but how does he know who is who? Who has that true love for him and not because of his money or handsome look. 

This burden gets more and more and has been accumulating so much in his mind. Not until the day he had decided to take that step he had been thinking about, did he summon the courage and decided to leave his comfort zone for somewhere far away. It’s a tough decision for him to make but he just had to make one. 

He traveled far away to another state leaving behind his company, his wealth, and his power, and then decided to settle down. He decided to start a new life purposely in search of true love. 

Days have been counting by as he continued to live his life in disguise. He has been living like a poor man who struggles to get his daily bread. His apartment is nothing compared to that of a street hustler and his attires are just that normal without any special treatment. He would walk down to ladies on the street and most times any lady he felt should make him a better wife and a good mother to his children but in the long run, he realized that they were all after a luxurious life and whenever they got to his apartment they felt that he is not their type. Some of them would manage with him but within a short period they would break up with him. 

The hunt for a good woman out there had been giving him a hard time as he continued to enjoy the game personally known to him. He remained prayerful but never let his guards down. 
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# <center>INTERMISSION</center> 
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At his workplace, they employed a lady who was looking pretty but one would know she is also trying to make ends meet. She was posted to the same department where Ade works. At first, they never talked to each other but Ade who is on the hunt for a better woman had his eyes on her and kept on focusing on her every attitude while he remained in disguise. 

Her name is Mary, she has a calm voice and her manner of approach was so cool 😎. After a few months of understudy, he tracked her down to where she lives and realized she was just an average woman with good character. This should be the woman he had been hunting for. Ade took the step towards approaching her and expressing his love to her. She felt reluctant at first but told him to give her some time. 

It’s clear to her that she made herself a promise not to ever fall in love foolishly. She promised herself to take her time to search for a man who would love her for who she was regardless of her claws and flaws. She also thought Ade would be the perfect fit for her. A man who is averagely okay and living fine. She hoped the two of them would make a better future together. 

Days passed by as they continued to have a good relationship. Everyone knew about their relationship and they were planning their wedding ceremony. Before that, he had to reveal his true self to her since they already gotten in touch with each other. He took her down to his home and showed her his company and his mighty building. She was so amazed to have been with him for so long and he could keep such a thing from her. Then he apologized to her for the disguise and explained to her that he needs a woman who is not after his wealth but someone who is in love with him. 

She agreed with him and they decided to pay a visit to her parents. On getting to their home Ade was shocked to have known he was dating a princess to a wealthy king who had also been in search of a husband who would marry her for whom she was and not for her being a princess or for the wealth of her father. 

She apologized to him for the pretense and they both planned a great wedding ever. The wedding was like the clash of the sun and the moon. Everyone was so amazed and happy to have experienced such an event in their lifetime. Ade and Mary gave birth to their kids and lived happily together. 
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@gangstalking ·
It is pretty creepy the way everyone is ignoring what is happening to me and still going to Hivefest. Lay the dirty snatches out why dont ya. Fake it all you want creeps, its so obvious the blind eye you are turning. @fyrstikken told me what V2K and RNM was before they turned it on for me. Around that time he introduced me to @roelandp .  I still have the emails between myself and @roelandp . This chain is centralized by design and @fyrstikken helped set it all up to fuck everyone, one by one, slowly into my situation. This is no joke you dumb mother fuckers, they shock you to your thoughts..... Hello????? It is in store for everyone you fools and your helping. Voices pulsed in your head and shocks to your thoughts??? Ignore me and help fuck innocent people for life? @roelandp and other top witnesses I know are involved with @fyrstikken..  Wait until people find out you conspired to enslave them with this shit. I am not crazy and you know it. they are doing this shit to me and told me what it mother fucking was BEFORE THEY TURNED IT ON! Your acting like naive children or maybe you are just part of the problem? You look like sociopaths. Everyone should unplug from HIVE until they are caught, .your. celebrating and ignoring my obvious, you look like fools. You know who is doing it....they are trying to kill me with it. The Havana Syndrome is real too you slave trading V2K, RNM enabling fuckers. Arrogantly play ignorant you Creeps, your setting the table for trafficking and total enslavement. I did not know I was circumvented until a year after I was..People here will be nice until it?s too late. There is no way to stop it once they have you. Grow the fuck up, this is not aliens, gods, celebrities or a medicate-able mental concern. It is 100% electronic and beast as fuck. You do not want this shit. https://ecency.com/fyrstikken/@fairandbalanced/i-am-the-only-motherfucker-on-the-internet-pointing-to-a-direct-source-for-voice-to-skull-electronic-terrorism ..... https://ecency.com/gangstalking/@acousticpulses/electronic-terrorism-and-gaslighting--if-you-downvote-this-post-you-are-part-of-the-problem 
πŸ‘Ž  
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@hazmat ·
It's beautiful that they both eventually found love in one another and everything worked out for both of them in the end
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@jayna ·
Ade found a good person, and one who will truly enjoy the better life she is heading into as his wife!
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@lordtimoty ·
Hi Abdul-Qudus.

In The Ink Well, one of the hopes is to comment on other author's posts, when you yourself post for the week. It's a great opportunity to see how others develop the prompt, but also to offer some constructive advice. 

Here's mine for you:
This piece reads like a general fable, and very much feels like it fits into the aural storytelling tradition - but, where this piece could improve is in moving from generalisations to being concrete in the example. 

1. Where did he move? 'Another state' - pretty vague. What was the situation around the move, or what did it look like? The setting felt quite underdeveloped - which would be OK if the characters were developed stronger.
2. In this case, the main character is a bit of a trope; he has money and looks and is in search of love. But behind this, we're not given a lot - we know he works, and has been part of a company, but no information about what his work actually is.
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@merit.ahama ·
Wow I didn't expect that, Mary is actually rich too πŸ˜… what a pretence relationship and I love it!

The wedding being the talk of the town is very imaginable, the money is there so why not!

Nice story, happy ending! 
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@theinkwell ·
Your story shares the importance of finding a life partner who values personality and commitment over money.

A few bits of feedback for you, @abdul-qudus. Have you read our community rules? You can find them at the top of [The Ink Well community home page](https://peakd.com/c/hive-170798/created). We ask everyone who publishes in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other stories for each one published in our community.

Also, we'd like to point you to our [catalog of fiction writing tips](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/catalog-of-fiction-writing-tips-from-the-ink-well), which is an excellent collection of helpful articles for people who are developing their writing skills. In particular, we recommend the article, [Action, Dialog and Narrative: The Dynamic Trio](https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/writing-tip-of-the-week-26-action-dialog-and-narrative-the-dynamic-trio). It describes the importance of including all of those elements in a story. Otherwise, if a story is all narrative, it is like a *summary* of a story. 

Good luck and keep writing.
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