create account

How I write. Lesson 6 by michelle.gent

View this thread on: hive.blogpeakd.comecency.com
· @michelle.gent · (edited)
$116.31
How I write. Lesson 6
[Lesson 1](https://steemit.com/writing/@michelle.gent/how-i-write-lesson-1)

[Lesson 2](https://steemit.com/writing/@michelle.gent/how-i-write-lesson-2)

[Lesson 3](https://steemit.com/writing/@michelle.gent/how-i-write-lesson-3)

[Lesson 4](https://steemit.com/writing/@michelle.gent/how-i-write-lesson-4)

[Lesson 5](https://steemit.com/writing/@michelle.gent/how-i-write-lesson-5)

I have been asked in replies on my blogs, in chat and in person. I've been asked to give tutorials and teach people how to write. I've thought about it, I've considered it and now I've started it.

I'm not sure I can teach ***YOU*** how to write like I do, but I can tell you how I developed my own style and maybe, hopefully, that will help you develop yours.

https://i.imgur.com/TDrrB8c.jpg

These are my books. It took two years to write my first book - and another nine years to publish it.


[My Amazon.co.uk page](https://www.amazon.co.uk/D-Michelle-Gent/e/B004J5EDQO/ref=sr_ntt_srch_lnk_1?qid=1505512274&sr=8-1)

*Google (free use) images and Pixabay*

---

We’ve come this far together and I’m starting to gain confidence in myself – perhaps I could teach you how to write a book? Who knows until I try, right?

If you’re willing to have a go, I’m willing to take a look at your writing.

Follow these instructions or the deal’s off, ok?

**No more than 1000 words. I can’t promise to read *all* the 1000, it depends on how many take me up on my offer.**

**Only work that’s posted here, in the comments will be looked at. I don’t want your links.. You’re free to post it on your blog of course, but I will NOT look at it there.**

**English only please.**

**There’s no prize, no overall winner.**

**I’d like a *story* out of this rather than a factual piece.**

---

Here are a few tips for writing.

![](https://steemitimages.com/DQmUm9X6vQQ7jsXVMEyE8cHDSofkQqQor9ens7y9kvsg1Lj/image.png)

1.	Write. Yes, I know… like, duh! Write every day if you can – I do. Write about things you’re interested in, write a story for some purpose – maybe a little story for your niece/nephew, child, grandparent – whatever the reason, as long as it gets you to write… even if you never show it to them… write it.

2.	Set a word-count. When I’m writing a novel, my word count target is 3000 words per day **On THAT project**. Anything else is extra and not counted.

![](https://steemitimages.com/DQmUPLZ7Ec5jA7H5JpHsbvkstaCVDRgoTeCuEnXvsAQWfh6/image.png)

3.	One piece of advice I found is ‘write in the same place, at the same time’ – I don’t think that’s relevant. I write wherever I feel comfortable – the garden when it’s sunny and not too windy, long-hand in a notebook, my bed, when an idea comes to me and I can’t get back to sleep and usually, it’s at the dining table on my lap-top but I don’t limit myself to there, or *then*.

4.	Set a *total* word count for the project. Personally, I try to go for around 100,000 words per novel, BUT if you want to do a novel of 65,000 that’s perfectly fine. Don’t allow the total word count to swamp you and discourage you, however, it’s not vital and the end result is what really counts. If you’ve told your story at 50,000 words and you’re happy with it, that’s fine.

5.	The advice of ‘write one chapter at a time doesn’t work for me – or at least, it didn’t in **Cruel and Unusual**. I skipped back and forth through the time-line of Jack The Ripper’s mayhem and tied it all up at the end.

![](https://steemitimages.com/DQmTvoQ57bepDeKrk7p9R4MP95YwG8k93bh266JFeKjkvpv/image.png)

6.	Write your progress in your blog. That’s a great way of keeping the momentum.

7.	Find an editor – a good one. Your mum, aunt, sister are all great, but unless they’re professionally trained, they won’t be any good where it counts.

8.	Take a break – take plenty, but take them when you’ve accomplished a set amount of words, otherwise, you’ll be nipping off to the loo/for a drink/a snack/checking on social media and you’ll have spent your writing day doing nothing.

9.	Don’t think of it as a chore, something you’ve **GOT** to do. If it’s hard work, you’ve got the wrong subject. Put that away and start something else.

![](https://steemitimages.com/DQmSCukeqzYF7UvYJh6kejQmn1vCMe8KQSzWHqGR93rEwep/image.png)

10.	Talk about your book – no, not **ALL** the time, to **EVERYONE** but do talk about it. If you have someone that you can chat with about it, you’ll get the story set in your head and it will become easier to write it.

---

Find your own rules and work them out for you. This has got to be fun, otherwise it becomes a struggle, painful even and eventually, you’ll loathe your computer and never write.

![](https://steemitimages.com/DQmSqc6QsQXEvBJA88pSDHKfHoKizCEaTE6AX4CkT9yEbax/image.png)

Once a character sits down and starts telling me their story, I find I’m so enthusiastic about it that I have to write constantly. If that ever happens to you, embrace it and go with it. 


Also,

You have to live the story – no… don’t go off trying to get someone to bite you (vampire novel) – I mean, the characters have to be so real inside your head that when they talk, you listen. When they end up in a bit of bother, ***YOUR*** pulse races and ***YOU*** get nervous. 

If you can’t do that, you need to learn how to do it. ***Fake it ‘til you make it!***

If you’re describing a scene, the characters and what they’re doing, you must remember what you’ve told the audience. You can’t have a character do something in your head and then expect the readers to know, if you’ve not told them. 

You’re in charge of the story, you have to let everyone know what everyone else is doing or it won’t work.

Some advice tells us not to edit as you go. That’s sound advice indeed because you’ll find yourself going over and over the same piece until you’ve got it exactly as you want it and you’ll be no further forward.

![](https://steemitimages.com/DQmdmBKYqbN6tRk2AXSUA3wgfR23prvPTh9Bfeos6jYqtzn/image.png)

I skim over what I wrote last and pick up the story from there. I find I **need** that bit of a reminder to get back into the flow of things. All I need is a bit of a jog – memory-wise (I don’t actually *go* jogging).

I also jot reminders down further down the page – that’s easy when you’re writing in your computer, but perhaps sticky-notes should be used if you’re writing long-hand (as I sometimes do).

For writing here, on Steemit, I like to give value for upvotes. I write around 1000 words per post and that’s where the word-count comes in useful, it gives a bit of discipline for your writing.

At the moment, I have that one story that’s consuming me (Ash’s story) and I’m limiting myself to 1000 words per day. Once that finishes, I may be able to get back to writing a new novel.

Ask for feedback, but do NOT take it to heart if someone doesn’t like your work. Ask for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism and ignore “Well, I just don’t like it…” type of comments. That’s not feedback.

Practice different types of writing. Flash-fiction is the shortest form. 100 words sometimes… but 200 – 700 is a good story-length. 100,000 words is an ‘Epic Novel’.

Enter the competitions here on Steemit. [Competition](https://steemit.com/contest/@stach/stach-short-story-contest-3-199-words-10sbd-prize-pool)

I’ve entered this one. [Here’s my effort](https://steemit.com/contest/@stach/stach-short-story-contest-3-199-words-10sbd-prize-pool#@michelle.gent/re-stach-stach-short-story-contest-3-199-words-10sbd-prize-pool-20170920t220033286z)
👍  , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , and 68 others
properties (23)
authormichelle.gent
permlinkhow-i-write-lesson-6
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing","story","fiction","education","tutorial"],"image":["https://i.imgur.com/TDrrB8c.jpg","https://steemitimages.com/DQmUm9X6vQQ7jsXVMEyE8cHDSofkQqQor9ens7y9kvsg1Lj/image.png","https://steemitimages.com/DQmUPLZ7Ec5jA7H5JpHsbvkstaCVDRgoTeCuEnXvsAQWfh6/image.png","https://steemitimages.com/DQmTvoQ57bepDeKrk7p9R4MP95YwG8k93bh266JFeKjkvpv/image.png","https://steemitimages.com/DQmSCukeqzYF7UvYJh6kejQmn1vCMe8KQSzWHqGR93rEwep/image.png","https://steemitimages.com/DQmSqc6QsQXEvBJA88pSDHKfHoKizCEaTE6AX4CkT9yEbax/image.png","https://steemitimages.com/DQmdmBKYqbN6tRk2AXSUA3wgfR23prvPTh9Bfeos6jYqtzn/image.png"],"links":["https://steemit.com/writing/@michelle.gent/how-i-write-lesson-1","https://steemit.com/writing/@michelle.gent/how-i-write-lesson-2","https://steemit.com/writing/@michelle.gent/how-i-write-lesson-3","https://steemit.com/writing/@michelle.gent/how-i-write-lesson-4","https://steemit.com/writing/@michelle.gent/how-i-write-lesson-5","https://www.amazon.co.uk/D-Michelle-Gent/e/B004J5EDQO/ref=sr_ntt_srch_lnk_1?qid=1505512274&sr=8-1","https://steemit.com/contest/@stach/stach-short-story-contest-3-199-words-10sbd-prize-pool","https://steemit.com/contest/@stach/stach-short-story-contest-3-199-words-10sbd-prize-pool#@michelle.gent/re-stach-stach-short-story-contest-3-199-words-10sbd-prize-pool-20170920t220033286z"],"app":"steemit/0.1","format":"markdown"}
created2017-09-21 12:13:06
last_update2017-09-22 11:43:09
depth0
children44
last_payout2017-09-28 12:13:06
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value91.484 HBD
curator_payout_value24.828 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length7,470
author_reputation391,981,473,456,682
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,516,065
net_rshares43,966,997,951,668
author_curate_reward""
vote details (132)
@amanrazz ·
very helpful post @michelle.gent thank you so much......
properties (22)
authoramanrazz
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t134742637z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"users":["michelle.gent"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 13:47:48
last_update2017-09-21 13:47:48
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 13:47:48
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length56
author_reputation718,947,750,488
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,523,706
net_rshares0
@bigsilver ·
$0.04
Well said and what a fabulous offer!

One of the ways I use to keep me on track and enjoying what I'm doing is to use what I call PPMs. (Personal, Programming, Messages)

Basically, I'm programming my subconscious to help me achieve my goals and keep me focused. I won't go into all the details here, I wrote an entire book on the subject. (The 7 Minute Millionaire: How to Think Yourself Rich)

I'm following you. 

Upvoted and resteemed.
👍  
properties (23)
authorbigsilver
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t141823812z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 14:18:12
last_update2017-09-21 14:18:12
depth1
children6
last_payout2017-09-28 14:18:12
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.040 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length439
author_reputation1,304,144,968,349
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,526,304
net_rshares16,021,067,443
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@michelle.gent ·
$0.05
Thank you and that sounds like it's a useful system.

So... did you make it to being a millionaire (either within the seven minutes, or not)? :)
👍  
properties (23)
authormichelle.gent
permlinkre-bigsilver-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t142837224z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 14:28:27
last_update2017-09-21 14:28:27
depth2
children5
last_payout2017-09-28 14:28:27
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.038 HBD
curator_payout_value0.012 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length144
author_reputation391,981,473,456,682
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,527,199
net_rshares19,752,000,957
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@bigsilver ·
$0.05
Yes, and far beyond. :)

You might like to check out my web site: www.tonyneumeyer.com 

I appreciate your comments.
👍  
properties (23)
authorbigsilver
permlinkre-michellegent-re-bigsilver-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170922t150716547z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-22 15:06:57
last_update2017-09-22 15:06:57
depth3
children4
last_payout2017-09-29 15:06:57
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.054 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length116
author_reputation1,304,144,968,349
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,625,126
net_rshares19,313,067,603
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@cecicastor ·
$0.22
Well, @michelle.gent! You have thrown down the gauntlet. Are you ready for the onslaught?  Here is my submission...

**Fiona**

The bitter cold nipped at Fiona's tear-streaked face. Her body shook with grief as she gazed at her mother's coffin. She felt as if her heart would break into tiny pieces. Strong arms held her shoulders as her brother Andre whispered comforting words to her. 

She could barely discern the words that Father Mulligan spoke over the ornately carved oak casket. It was what *Father* chose – certainly not her mother's taste. Leave it to ***Philippe de Chardonnay***  to have a final say. 

The single long-stemmed white rose drooped in her hand, the thorns piercing through her gloves. She felt her brother steering her towards the coffin. It was time. 

With a trembling hand, she lovingly placed the rose on the casket, whispering her final farewell to the only person who really understood her. 

She didn't know how long she had been standing there, staring blindly at the grave, not quite believing.  She was vaguely aware of Uncle Noel and Andre escorting her to the waiting limo. 

She found herself sandwiched between Uncle Noel and Auntie Tasha who grasped her hand tightly. Andre and her father sat facing them for the ride to Uncle's hotel where Father had planned to hold *a reception* for close family and friends.

Auntie was babbling on senselessly, about anything that popped into her head. Uncle Noel was drumming his fingers against the door while Andre fidgeted on his seat.

“For God's sake, Anastasia! Can't you shut up for five minutes?” 

Obviously, she had gotten on Philippe's frayed nerves. 

“She's just trying to break the heaviness of the ride Philippe. She doesn't mean anything by it.” 

Uncle Noel always came to everyone's defence, whether they needed or not. Auntie blushed and bit her bottom lip.

Andre was looking more and more uncomfortable as the ride wore on. Fiona was concerned but she knew better than to say anything in front of Father. 

He didn't have much patience for either of them lately. Perhaps she should be more charitable in her feelings toward him, after all he had just lost his wife, who he had professed was the love of his life. The drive continued on in stony silence.

The hotel parking lot was jammed with vehicles and the restaurant was already buzzing with activity when they arrived.

Father insisted on a receiving line. She, like her mother, would have preferred something a little less formal. Father did enjoy any excuse for pomp and circumstance. *And a drink or two...*

Thank goodness  Granddad wasn't here to witness this. He would have found it difficult to stomach her father's panache for the grandiose. He too, would have preferred to keep his beloved daughter's funeral a more subdued family matter. 

The reception would be held in the small banquet room at the back of the hotel. It was the most intimate gathering place that Auntie could arrange that met with Father's approval, but it would necessitate passing through the main lobby and the restaurant of the hotel. 

The buzz of conversation and clattering dishes hushed as they passed. There were urgent whispers behind raised hands. 

She knew that the family would be the fodder of the local gossipers for the next year or so, until some other juicy tidbit of gossip came along. Just another perk of coming from a well to do family in a small community with too much time on its hands. She should be used to it by now, given the positions her parents held in the community.

A large ornate gilded frame rested against a wobbly wooden stand that was positioned on the right side of the worn double doors leading into the reception room.  Large gaudy bouquets of flowers were placed on either side with a smaller and rounder arrangement placed in front of the stand. 

There in bold print, for all to see, was an enlarged copy of the obituary taken from the Nova Scotia Herald. The one she had carefully tried to avoid reading. It hit her hard. Seeing it print now, only made the gaping hole in her heart all the more painful. 

Tears started flowing like a river.
👍  
properties (23)
authorcecicastor
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t160248945z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"users":["michelle.gent"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 16:02:48
last_update2017-09-21 16:02:48
depth1
children10
last_payout2017-09-28 16:02:48
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.169 HBD
curator_payout_value0.055 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length4,126
author_reputation9,671,429,332,887
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,535,715
net_rshares86,363,861,007
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@michelle.gent ·
@cecicastor do you want the story put here or are you in chat so I can show you first?

I haven't butchered it and I'm grateful for the chance to show you how I work.
properties (22)
authormichelle.gent
permlinkre-cecicastor-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t173728164z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"users":["cecicastor"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 17:37:18
last_update2017-09-21 17:37:18
depth2
children4
last_payout2017-09-28 17:37:18
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length166
author_reputation391,981,473,456,682
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,543,734
net_rshares0
@cecicastor ·
I am a bit ashamed that I am not using chat yet. I am a slow learner and I seem to have a lot on my plate at the moment. Thank you so much for your interest in my work. You can put it up here. Perhaps others can learn too...
properties (22)
authorcecicastor
permlinkre-michellegent-re-cecicastor-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t201219418z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 20:12:18
last_update2017-09-21 20:12:18
depth3
children3
last_payout2017-09-28 20:12:18
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length224
author_reputation9,671,429,332,887
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,555,339
net_rshares0
@michelle.gent · (edited)
$0.25
Fiona
Bitter cold nipped at Fiona's tear-streaked face; she felt neither that nor the tremors of her body shaking with grief, not the frigid air. She gazed, unseeing at her mother's coffin. The area in her chest surrounding her heart felt like physical pressure, as though it would break into tiny pieces at any moment. Strong arms wrapped around her shoulders as her brother Andre whispered what should have been comforting words to her, but she couldn’t retain or decipher them.

The same with the words that Father Mulligan spoke over the ornately carved oak casket. The sermon was what Father chose – mother's taste had been more simple, elegant. As always, Philippe de Chardonnay, disregarding anyone that expressed a different opinion to his, had to have the final say.

---

**I expanded these paragraphs because I felt there was so much more that could be said about ‘Fiona’ and her grief for her mother and the relationships with her brother and her father.**

---

The single long-stemmed white rose held tight in her fist, the thorns piercing through her gloves; she’d feel those later. Andre steered her towards the coffin. She looked up at him; he gave an encouraging smile and he nodded, it was time.

---

**The human relationship with grief is special – everyone has felt it at some time or another and therefore, it’s the perfect opportunity for the writer to ‘hook’ their readers (sorry… cynical of me, I know).**

---

Fiona placed the rose on the casket, the leaves trembling as though a breeze had sprung up. She kept her hand on the oak while she whispered one final farewell to the only person who really understood her.

---

**Describing everyday items in a different way helps to kick the reader’s brain into gear so they can not only read what’s happening, but ‘see’ it too – Show, don’t tell’.**

---

Uncle Noel and Andre held her on either side and guided her to the waiting limo. She didn't know how long she had been standing there, staring blindly at the grave, not quite believing. She looked up, the graveyard had emptied in the time she’d stood as sentinel to the graveside. 

---

**If you think about what you’ve written and it makes you feel the same emotion the characters are feeling, you’ve nailed it. It doesn’t happen on the first draft very often.**

---

Sandwiched between Uncle Noel and Auntie *Tasha, who grasped her hand tightly, Fiona leaned back into the seat, allowing grief to wash over her again. Closing her eyes so she didn’t have to look at her father sitting opposite her, Andre murmured, “It’ll be over soon, Fi.”
She didn’t even want to think about the reception for close family and friends Father had arranged at her uncle’s hotel. 

---

**You have to try to put yourself in that car and *know* the characters, how they’d be reacting to the events and each other. Then you have to describe that to your readers so they can be there with you.**

---

Auntie babbled on about anything that popped into her head. Uncle Noel drummed his fingers against the door and Andre fidgeted on his seat.

---

**We all know someone like this, the trick is writing enough to jog that memory, but not too much as to imprint *your* details too heavily onto that character, otherwise the connection is lost between the character and the reader.**

---

Phillipe shifted in his seat and leaned forward a little. “For God's sake, *(Anastasia)! Can't you shut up for five minutes?” he barked. 

“She's just trying to break the heaviness of the ride, Philippe. She doesn't mean anything by it,” Uncle Noel said, coming to her defence as he did with everyone, whether they needed it or not. Anastasia blushed and bit her bottom lip.

Andre withdrew into himself, his frown deepened, his discomfort increasing as the ride wore on and Fiona noticed; she was concerned but knew better than to say anything in front of Father.

Father’s patience for either of them wore thin faster than usual, lately. Fiona considered perhaps she should be more charitable in her feelings toward him. He’d just lost his wife, the love of his life, or so he professed. 

The drive continued in stony silence.

The limo drive had trouble maneuvering through hotel parking lot because of the number of vehicles already there. Through the restaurant windows they could see the crowd, the room buzzed with a full attendance.

Father insisted on a receiving line to speak with the guests. Fiona, like her mother, would have preferred something less formal. Father did enjoy any excuse for pomp and circumstance. And a drink or two...

‘Thank goodness Granddad isn't here to witness this,’ Fiona thought as she watched her father's panache for the grandiose. Granddad would have found it difficult to stomach, he would have preferred to keep his beloved daughter's funeral a more subdued family matter.

Held in the small banquet room at the back of the hotel, the most intimate gathering place that Auntie could arrange that met with Father's approval, it still meant passing through the main lobby and the restaurant of the hotel to the reception.

The buzz of conversation and clattering dishes hushed as they passed. Fiona hated the urgent whispers behind raised hands.

The family would be the fodder of the local gossips for the next year or so, until some other juicy tidbit of gossip came along. One of the dubious perks of coming from a well-to-do family in a small community with too much time on its hands. She should be used to it by now, given the positions her parents held in the community.

A large ornate gilded frame rested against a wobbly wooden stand positioned on the right side of the worn double doors leading into the reception room. Bouquets of flowers placed on either side with a smaller and rounder arrangement placed in front of the stand. ‘Too large and too gaudy, mother would have loathed them,’ Fiona thought.

In bold print, for all to see, an enlarged copy of the obituary taken from the Nova Scotia Herald had been reproduced. The one she had meticulously avoided reading. It hit her hard, like a physical blow to her stomach. Seeing it in print now, only made the gaping hole in her heart all the more painful.
Tears flowed and Fiona couldn’t stop them even had she wanted to.
**Natasha is the long version of ‘Tasha,’ not Anastasia*

---

*I hope you can see what else I’ve done to this. If not, you can ask.*

*These would be recommendations ***ONLY***, not ‘Thou Shalt Do This’*
👍  
properties (23)
authormichelle.gent
permlinkre-cecicastor-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170922t121343736z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-22 12:13:33
last_update2017-09-22 12:31:48
depth2
children4
last_payout2017-09-29 12:13:33
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.187 HBD
curator_payout_value0.062 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length6,433
author_reputation391,981,473,456,682
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,611,524
net_rshares87,896,947,298
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@cecicastor ·
$2.19
Thank you so much, @michelle.gent! I can see the difference in what has been changed. It puts the reder more in the story. *"Show, don't tell"*  is really good advice and I need to remember this. I need more practice at writing. I think I have the skeleton but I need to flesh it out better and learn to deliver the "hook".
👍  
properties (23)
authorcecicastor
permlinkre-michellegent-re-cecicastor-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170922t231230383z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"users":["michelle.gent"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-22 23:12:30
last_update2017-09-22 23:12:30
depth3
children3
last_payout2017-09-29 23:12:30
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value1.642 HBD
curator_payout_value0.546 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length323
author_reputation9,671,429,332,887
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,659,906
net_rshares739,424,735,601
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@defreca ·
great job @michelle.gent  
https://s26.postimg.org/bvc9fs5ft/U5drf23gj_J5t85j4_Guqp2_Wi_WHz_Vt_NRE.gif
properties (22)
authordefreca
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t142843142z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"users":["michelle.gent"],"image":["https://s26.postimg.org/bvc9fs5ft/U5drf23gj_J5t85j4_Guqp2_Wi_WHz_Vt_NRE.gif"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 14:28:42
last_update2017-09-21 14:28:42
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 14:28:42
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length102
author_reputation-435,672,531,499
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,527,220
net_rshares0
@fadlie ·
@michelle.gent Very satisfying, I really want to be able to write a book like you.
properties (22)
authorfadlie
permlinkre-michellegent-2017921t193526715z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":"writing","app":"esteem/1.4.6","format":"markdown+html","community":"esteem"}
created2017-09-21 12:35:48
last_update2017-09-21 12:35:48
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 12:35:48
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length82
author_reputation1,637,454,357,132
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries
0.
accountesteemapp
weight500
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,517,764
net_rshares0
@fitinfun ·
This is such a helpful series, Michelle. Thank you so much for posting it :)
properties (22)
authorfitinfun
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t124234970z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 12:42:39
last_update2017-09-21 12:42:39
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 12:42:39
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length76
author_reputation155,514,258,903,945
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,518,303
net_rshares0
@hndmarshall ·
thanks again learning much..upvoted and resteemed
properties (22)
authorhndmarshall
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170923t010322984z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-23 01:02:09
last_update2017-09-23 01:02:09
depth1
children1
last_payout2017-09-30 01:02:09
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length49
author_reputation1,848,933,563,617
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,665,075
net_rshares0
@michelle.gent ·
Thank you. I'm so pleased I'm giving a bit back :)
properties (22)
authormichelle.gent
permlinkre-hndmarshall-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170923t081513755z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-23 08:15:03
last_update2017-09-23 08:15:03
depth2
children0
last_payout2017-09-30 08:15:03
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length50
author_reputation391,981,473,456,682
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,687,842
net_rshares0
@investopenly ·
Great tips @michelle.gent Thanks for sharing.. first tip is the most important one I guess lol
properties (22)
authorinvestopenly
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t123520997z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"users":["michelle.gent"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 12:35:21
last_update2017-09-21 12:35:21
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 12:35:21
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length94
author_reputation175,341,354,791
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,517,731
net_rshares0
@janisrijnieks ·
Its so nice to see good writers getting rewarded here on steemit, proves that the platform works.
Keep up the good work, cheers from Latvia!
properties (22)
authorjanisrijnieks
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t182455799z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 18:24:48
last_update2017-09-21 18:24:48
depth1
children1
last_payout2017-09-28 18:24:48
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length140
author_reputation68,545,834,619
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,547,436
net_rshares0
@michelle.gent ·
$2.49
Thank you. 

I'm not saying it's easy, it's certainly been a lot of hard work and I've had some luck too, but it can be done. :)
👍  
properties (23)
authormichelle.gent
permlinkre-janisrijnieks-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t213909457z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 21:39:00
last_update2017-09-21 21:39:00
depth2
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 21:39:00
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value1.867 HBD
curator_payout_value0.622 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length128
author_reputation391,981,473,456,682
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,561,035
net_rshares952,713,016,725
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@leo-tmp ·
Hey, my name is Nadine and I am new on steemit. Maybe you can check out my post as well and follow back, Thank you :-)
https://steemit.com/travel/@leo-tmp/a-wonderful-weekend-at-mon-jam-chiang-mai-my-travel-diary
I really love your post. Great!!!
properties (22)
authorleo-tmp
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t132954819z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"links":["https://steemit.com/travel/@leo-tmp/a-wonderful-weekend-at-mon-jam-chiang-mai-my-travel-diary"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 13:19:15
last_update2017-09-21 13:19:15
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 13:19:15
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length246
author_reputation548,041,704,249
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,521,156
net_rshares0
@lucylin · (edited)
hi there,

https://steemit.com/blog/@lucylin/patriot-wargamer-is-back-and-reloaded

hi there Everyone - I have had major problems this last week or so - So this my new account I am now using.

I have to start from scratch again - your support would be greatly appreciated -I am contacting all my followers to let you know.

I will be reposting all my best posts here, in the hope of getting things back as they were for me.

I hope you will be refollowing me - as I wil be, of course, to all my new friends I found over the last 3/4 weeks.

If anyone knows cheetah, tell him to lay off any plagiarism accusations! lol

Cheers PW
properties (22)
authorlucylin
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170922t000632138z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"links":["https://steemit.com/blog/@lucylin/patriot-wargamer-is-back-and-reloaded"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-22 00:06:57
last_update2017-09-22 00:09:39
depth1
children6
last_payout2017-09-29 00:06:57
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length628
author_reputation185,811,362,824,733
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,568,675
net_rshares0
@michelle.gent ·
Followed :)
properties (22)
authormichelle.gent
permlinkre-lucylin-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170922t091602128z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-22 09:15:51
last_update2017-09-22 09:15:51
depth2
children5
last_payout2017-09-29 09:15:51
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length11
author_reputation391,981,473,456,682
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,600,002
net_rshares0
@lucylin ·
Ty hun !

you should check out the blog - It's a  nightmare  ! lol- We now have this guy, upset because lucy isn't writing until she gets the new account - accusing me of stealing her profile!

We even took a pic today - with us both - to clarify things - He keeps down voting every post and still posting I have 'stolen lucy's account!'

You seem to be a steemit veteran - what is the best thing to do? ignore him or attack him?  ( I'm for the attack/ ridicule option personally )

Any advice appreciated. 

Cheers anyway !
properties (22)
authorlucylin
permlinkre-michellegent-re-lucylin-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170922t113308282z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-22 11:33:36
last_update2017-09-22 11:33:36
depth3
children2
last_payout2017-09-29 11:33:36
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length524
author_reputation185,811,362,824,733
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,608,738
net_rshares0
@lucylin ·
update  - sorry - he has now removed the down votes -last couple of minutes - so all is cool - I think -no need to for help! ( im pretty sure!) thanks anyway.
properties (22)
authorlucylin
permlinkre-michellegent-re-lucylin-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170922t114043596z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-22 11:41:12
last_update2017-09-22 11:41:12
depth3
children1
last_payout2017-09-29 11:41:12
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length158
author_reputation185,811,362,824,733
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,609,263
net_rshares0
@mariskalubis ·
Good luck! You will be the  winner...
properties (22)
authormariskalubis
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t123109359z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 12:29:39
last_update2017-09-21 12:29:39
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 12:29:39
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length37
author_reputation1,210,283,867,464
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,517,302
net_rshares0
@munawar1235 ·
$0.27
Very nice information for newbies like me. Thank you @michelle.gent
👍  , , , , , , , , , ,
properties (23)
authormunawar1235
permlinkre-michellegent-2017921t182731157z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":"writing","app":"esteem/1.4.7","format":"markdown+html","community":"esteem"}
created2017-09-21 13:27:39
last_update2017-09-21 13:27:39
depth1
children1
last_payout2017-09-28 13:27:39
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.265 HBD
curator_payout_value0.008 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length67
author_reputation86,522,918,923,810
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries
0.
accountesteemapp
weight500
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,521,890
net_rshares109,155,592,912
author_curate_reward""
vote details (11)
@michelle.gent ·
You're welcome :)
properties (22)
authormichelle.gent
permlinkre-munawar1235-re-michellegent-2017921t182731157z-20170923t171329201z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-23 17:13:18
last_update2017-09-23 17:13:18
depth2
children0
last_payout2017-09-30 17:13:18
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length17
author_reputation391,981,473,456,682
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,725,139
net_rshares0
@robert31 ·
i like the writer ..because she is the best popular in the world in every person...thanks for sharing post..upvoted.
properties (22)
authorrobert31
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t125851013z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 13:00:48
last_update2017-09-21 13:00:48
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 13:00:48
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length116
author_reputation2,055,986,023,324
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,519,656
net_rshares0
@rykamutiarasari ·
Kebetulan saya mau memulai menulis fiksi, dan ini bisa dijadikan panduan untuk saya menulis, terimakasih sister @michelle.gent
properties (22)
authorrykamutiarasari
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170922t093128094z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"users":["michelle.gent"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-22 09:31:33
last_update2017-09-22 09:31:33
depth1
children1
last_payout2017-09-29 09:31:33
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length126
author_reputation48,344,566,153
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,601,037
net_rshares0
@michelle.gent ·
Sama-sama. Terima kasih telah berkomentar Semoga kamu berhasil.
properties (22)
authormichelle.gent
permlinkre-rykamutiarasari-re-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170922t123554925z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-22 12:35:45
last_update2017-09-22 12:35:45
depth2
children0
last_payout2017-09-29 12:35:45
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length63
author_reputation391,981,473,456,682
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,613,229
net_rshares0
@twerking-girls ·
Dude, you're absolutely killing it. That's all I have to say.
properties (22)
authortwerking-girls
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t130850979z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 13:09:03
last_update2017-09-21 13:09:03
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 13:09:03
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length61
author_reputation-14,128,031,385
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,520,299
net_rshares0
@wrayca ·
brova @michelle.gent  
https://s26.postimg.org/i8lp3f0vt/U5driz_URs_P98rt_Ci7vrx9_Jg_XBp_JVc_AJ.gif
👍  ,
properties (23)
authorwrayca
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t135039025z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"users":["michelle.gent"],"image":["https://s26.postimg.org/i8lp3f0vt/U5driz_URs_P98rt_Ci7vrx9_Jg_XBp_JVc_AJ.gif"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 13:50:39
last_update2017-09-21 13:50:39
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 13:50:39
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length99
author_reputation597,468,444,569
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,523,969
net_rshares2,497,443,221
author_curate_reward""
vote details (2)
@zubett ·
cool
properties (22)
authorzubett
permlinkre-michellegent-how-i-write-lesson-6-20170921t122238995z
categorywriting
json_metadata{"tags":["writing"],"app":"steemit/0.1"}
created2017-09-21 12:24:09
last_update2017-09-21 12:24:09
depth1
children0
last_payout2017-09-28 12:24:09
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 HBD
curator_payout_value0.000 HBD
pending_payout_value0.000 HBD
promoted0.000 HBD
body_length4
author_reputation4,644,519,831,666
root_title"How I write. Lesson 6"
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 HBD
percent_hbd10,000
post_id15,516,915
net_rshares0