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Arrows in Flight - Fantasy Fiction (Part Two) by raj808

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Arrows in Flight - Fantasy Fiction (Part Two)
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**Below is a brief recap (in quotation markdown) of the ending of part one of this three-part story. It also serves as a link to the post, this story is much better if you've read the first part 😉**

> [In the distance, a lone figure steps out from the brow of a hill.<br>
Wrapped in a leather cloak with animal bones dangling from his neck, this small goblin fixes the captain with azure glowing eyes, like the depths of the Calista sea where the whales sing to the sea folk.<br>
Staff upraised, the spindly creature almost coughs a series of guttural croaks that reverberate through the earth, shaking the standard in the still air of the dying day.<br>
Captain Gream stands stock still on a heap of bodies he has kicked into a makeshift platform.<br>
Silence descends, Orc and man stiff as desiccated trees as the incantation takes effect and the shaman walks calmly toward the final enclave of knights frozen like stone statues.](https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/red-days-fantasy-fiction-part)<br>

In the quiet shade of the eternal grove, shining eyes blink as scenes shift in the silver water. A goblin shaman steps forward. Eliethen’s slender hands channel crackling bolts of magic through the Scrying pool.

The Elven king raises his own staff, emitting a sickly azure mist that creeps along the sides of the pool, seeking out the crackling magic and wrapping around it almost sensually.

“Very well incanted Eliethen,” the king’s rich sonorous voice echoes around that grove. That sacred place of constant calm where only he is ordained to speak “that pitiful goblin shaman has barely the power to paralyse a Brace of warriors of the Seventh Company. Your magic has the whole human force in its grip… even some of the Westwold Orcs are staggering in confusion.”

The king’s smile creeps across his lips like a snake in the final stage of the hunt. 

“Step into that wretched creature and guide the tides of battle, Eliethen. Our warriors wait under the eaves of Blackenblade forest.”

The king shifts the angle of his staff, wafting its power to wrap tendrils around his chosen sorcerer. A silent scream echoes across his face as he seems to shrink, walking through the air into the pool at the apex where the goblin Shaman’s staff glows.  

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Captain Gream screams at this spindle-armed creature, calmly approaching.

Silence. 

He thought he’d screamed. 

His mind rages with wrath, insults, and threats. He issues commands to the last of the surrounding Seventh Company. All thought.

The only sound, the harsh caw of a crow, disturbs the field of carnage.

A sudden grumble of thunder heralds the advance of dark clouds.

A single lightning bolt arcs from the sky to strike the Goblin’s upraised staff. Saved by the gods… Captain Gream tries to bellow. But still his arms flap limp, his vocal cords dead, cuckold to this venomous worm’s magic.

The Goblin Shrieks at the Orcs who stagger about in confusion from the initial blast of magic. High and shrill, the Westwold tongue startles the crows from their feast, one takes wing over the brow of the hill trailing a string of intestine in its mouth. 

Pressure builds in Captain Gream’s head. He knows a little of the Westwold language but one word burns in his thoughts; attack. 

He looks at the men in his field of vision all in a similar statuesque state. It is truly hopeless.

The Orcs slowly rally around the Shaman as they come to themselves. He shrieks at them again, eyes now a mirror of silver that seem to ripple like water. Finally, the fierce Warriors of Westwold shake off the confusion and charge.

The pressure mounts in Captain Gream’s head like the building thunder. Pressure spawned from ancient anger born of rage, born of nights spent hiding beneath the grain bags in the cellar as his father raged around the kitchen looking for another body to beat. 

Anger born from watching the petty concerns of the Lords of Eastwold’s pointless power struggles that started the first war. 

Rage born of seeing three sons die on the field of battle, three of his blood taken by the great game. 

His arm twitches, it feels like a river of fire as he slowly moves that arm upwards as the rage builds. 

Pointless death after pointless death, until he had learned to tutor even the most yellow-bellied lad to see the whole thing as a game, with rules, and prizes for those who could last.

<i>His second son’s eyes stared emptily at the greying sky in the fields outside the great city of Gramburg.</i>

His vocal cords awaken in a guttural howl.

The Goblin Shaman looks his way. Chattering in Westwold, arms waving furiously.

Captain Gream explodes forward in a cathartic spasm of rage so deep that it unleashes a torrent of hot tears down his face. 

<i>His wife’s bloated corpse, almost unrecognisable from the play of the maggots, after an elven raid upon his homestead.</i>

The howl explodes from his lips louder this time in a single word, almost drowning out the thunder.

“Seventh.”

Orcs crash into the Company.

Some of the Seventh Company awaken with his howl. 

Those with the gift of the many horrors that the circus of life plays out in an unending cavort, a dance of suffering and death.

Gream sees it, that hot wash of tears in their eyes and the blood trying to burst from temples.

Gream barges the first orc aside, determined to get to that Shaman. As it stumbles he slashes at its heels spinning his blade around his head from the backslash momentum to lop a Westwold’s head clean off. 

For a second he sees the Goblin Shaman swiftly loping away from the fray in the direction of Blackenblade forest.

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Eliethen glances back as he turns to the distant green of Blackenblade forest. 

That dam captain’s eyes burn right into his, an unnatural wildness shining through streaming tears, his face red with raging blood flow. The man lifts up one arm and points right at Eliethen riding in this Goblin wretch.

“I know the truth.”

The captain’s voice bellows so loud it pierces the din of battle. 

Eliethen runs as he prepares another spell, how the hell has this captain and so many of his men resisted the paralysis spell? 

His countenance, his actions and the flush of blood and rage driving him spoke of a Berserker, yet Eastwold had no Berserker warriors. In fact, they were nothing but a myth of the north.

He stumbled in this ungainly body, realising that the spell had been blown away by the wind of his thoughts. 

His training kicked in.

The concentration of steel.

Will of iron.

No thought.

He channels the magic reciting the simple spell double speed instinctually. 

Voice amplified he shouts a short series of commands at the now not-so-distant trees.

Thelithen dalieth brenmn bremnessen. 

![](https://images.ecency.com/DQmNykvS2gqABymu7EAvHhvcWdZczkxMyAG3MhD4Qq1YKHT/orc_pagebreak.png)

Gream hears that retched Shaman shouting Elvish words, those most cursed of syllables that he understands all too well. 

Thelithen dalieth brenmn bremnessen.

He nearly stumbles as he translates the words and a Westwold’s cleaver nicks his left ear clean off. The grisly talisman sails toward those thunderheads, trailing rubies of blood in its flight. 

He laughs at the capricious beauty of the great game. This Westworld is a wily one, and Gream trades slashes and parries as he carefully translates through the rhythm of battle.

Thelithen means brethren in common, the general name a group of elves give each other. 

Gream manages a low slash between the Orc’s greaves and its shoulder armour and the creature dances back flipping its long axe to the other hand.

Dalieth means to advance, he was certain of it. The Orc came back in at him axe slashing fast and furious nearly catching the captain off guard with its ambidextrous skill. Gream spun away sword deflecting the axe in the spin.

Brenmn meant to rain arrows. There was no real comparative word in common, it was a single word for an action so usual to the elvish scum that they felt no need to elaborate meaning. 

Gream ends the dance as the Orc slips on a well-trodden corpse and he thrust his sword through the creature’s backbone. Bleeding good fighter, for an Orc.

Bremnessen was simply an extension of the word. It meant to rain arrows of death at will.

The captain smelled how wrong this was, just as he saw svelt figures emerge from the trees of Blackenblade forest. The wretched Shaman was only about fifty yards away now, still madly running in that strange way, almost like it wasn’t used to the length of its arms and legs. 

Without thought, Gream scoops up a spear from the mess of the sepulture battlefield and launches it in a high arc.

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Thunder rolls as most of the Seventh now follow their fellows to the fray, defying the magic from the inspiration of their molten-faced companions. 

Willow spins his usual dance, standard swirling and slashing its spear end through throats, but he seemed to dance a little faster and anticipate the movement of opponents even more gracefully. 

Others stumbled as if drunk, finding the magic’s hold harder to shake. They are quickly either skewered like suckling pigs by Westwold spears or slashed to ribbons by saw-toothed Orcish scimitars.

![](https://images.ecency.com/DQmNykvS2gqABymu7EAvHhvcWdZczkxMyAG3MhD4Qq1YKHT/orc_pagebreak.png)

In the distance, the lone figure of Captain Gream stands stock still as he watches a spear tear through the neck of the fleeing shaman. 

He stares back at the Seventh Company and the Westwolds, and on the wind of the storm his voice bellows first in Eastwold common, and then in broken Westwold tongue.

“The Shaman Elvish puppet. Look to the skies. The elves approach.”

A hail of arrowheads lights up the sky for a single moment, as a break in the clouds allows the sun to illuminate their adamantite tips. 

The sky above the distant forest shimmers like uncountable diamonds raining down on the gore of the battle between Blackenblade forest and the Cramndel Hills. 

A million tiny rainbow specks alight on trampled heads, limbs lone and lost from their owners. 

The great game continues.

**To be continued...**

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<center>This is part two in a three-part fantasy story that I have written for the fantastic month-long collaboration between, @ecency @dreemport and the [Scholar and Scribe community.](https://peakd.com/c/hive-199275/created)<br>
Unfortunately, I did not check the Dreemport rules closely enough where they stipulate that any posts submitted to dreemport must be rated PG13. After a long discussion with the most gracious and understanding @dreemsteem, I explained that I simply did not have the time to edit what I had already written, which is gritty adult fantasy. In fact, I don't think it could be turned PG13 tbh 😂<br>
So, I won't be submitting this to dreemport, but hope those who are doing the challenge, and enjoy dark gritty fantasy might read and enjoy this series. Instead, I will simply publish through @ecency to the [Scholar and Scribe community.](https://peakd.com/c/hive-199275/created)<br>
In part three you can expect more magic, gritty battles and a finale to shake the foundations of the Seven Wolds.</center>

<center>To help anyone reviewing this story for the @dreemport [Hive Book Club](https://peakd.com/c/hive-180164/created) & [Scholar and Scribe community](https://peakd.com/c/hive-199275/created) collaboration I have provided easy links to all four parts below.</center>

<center><h3>[Part 1, entitled 'Red Days' can be found on this link.](https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/red-days-fantasy-fiction-part)</h3><h3>[Part 2, entitled 'Arrows in Flight' can be found on this link.](https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/red-days-fantasy-fiction-part)</h3><h3>[Part 3, entitled 'The King's Gambit' can be found on this link.](https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/the-king-s-gambit-fantasy)</h3><h3>[Part 4 (Finale) entitled ‘Deathdrinker’s Bite' can be found on this link.]( https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/deathdrinker-s-bite-fantasy-fiction)</h3></center>

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@anikekirsten ·
(insert astounded expletives here)

All I can say is that I'm loving it! This fast pacing is perfect for the nature of the setting and the colourful descriptors give it a flair of poetry. Beautiful. Now I need the next part. So badly.

!PIZZA
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@raj808 ·
> (insert astounded expletives here)

😂 I love this, brilliant. Yes it can be like that on hive. I've been in serious writer's workshops, and had proofreaders on other fiction where it is almost the opposite of the hive way 🤣

They pick it apart with the precision of a surgeon, and the sadist in me loves that 😂 but we're talking a whole other kettle of fish with that writing. I'm sure I remember you being around as far back as 2017 and being involved in the some of the more serious discord creative writing groups. Or am I remembering wrong?

Anyway, I'm glad you're enjoying the mix of brutality and poetic imagery @anikekirsten I am an active poet (performing in my home city) and writing loads of poetry, but I've always aspired to be a novelist. And I've really worked hard on balancing how I naturally go into imagery in fiction, where perhaps many others wouldn't. Or might not take it so far. But I feel I'm getting close to a balance I can accept, and I think is acceptable to the reader, which is more important. It is starting to feel like it's my style, rather than the imagery taking hold of me like some type of B-Movie demonic possession.  

I'm only halfway finished writing the concluding part, so I'm still at that exciting writing point where even I don't quite know what will happen.

Thanks for your comment, and for reading this series 🙂 I'm aiming to get the finale out Friday or Saturday. Then I'm going to give hive a break for a while to focus on a larger writing project. 
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@anikekirsten ·
Yeah, I've been around for a while, haha. Back when it was still Steem. Was until recently still in a few serious writing groups, pursuing the traditional short fiction publishing route, but that industry is toxic now and Hive is so much... more. 

I remember you, but I thought I was remembering someone else named Raj. Small blockchain world! Definitely keep that poetic flair you have going. It's refreshing and different and works so well with this type of story.

The number one thing I've learned after all these years, what the pros and newbies all keep saying: write what you want to read. I think you've hit that sweet spot of imagery balance in this story, especially in this part. It also serves to give more characterisation, which is a show of mastery of the craft in my opinion.
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@bluefinstudios ·
It may be Gritty, 
It may be dark,

...but 
***It is SOOOO GOOOD!***
Well done. I cannot wait to read Part Three!
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@raj808 ·
ha ha, cheers it certainly is gritty and dark. 
If only I'd read more carefully... ahhh who am I kidding I could never have made this PG13 😂

Glad you're enjoying it @bluefinstudios 
I'm only halfway finished writing the concluding part, so I'm still at that exciting writing point where even I don't quite know what will happen.

![untitled.gif](https://media.tenor.com/images/bcc2b7d90f52a4a353da2e17494fd03e/tenor.gif)
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@raj808 · (edited)
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Part 3, [The King's Gambit,](https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/the-king-s-gambit-fantasy) was published yesterday and I've just finished the finale [Deathdrinker’s Bite](https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/deathdrinker-s-bite-fantasy-fiction) now.

I wouldn't be sharing like this usually, but these are the final things I'm putting on hive for a long time, and I thought I'd share links with people who read past episodes.
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@raj808 ·
Awesome. Thanks so much!
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@generikat ·
You write the tale as if you are in the battlefield with the combatants, Gream's angst with the shaman really hit me, lol! I love this story so far my friend, can't wait til part three!!

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@raj808 ·
> You write the tale as if you are in the battlefield with the combatants

This is honestly how I see it when I'm writing, especially if I'm firing on all cylinders creatively, like not forcing myself to write through a creative block.

I see the scenes flow and progress as I type out the scenes, I guess this is because I get the same visual flow when reading a good book too. 

Sometimes it is awesome, then others, like when the Captain is remembering all the horrors that allow him to break through the mental barrier of the paralysis spell... well it is less pleasant, but all part of the process.

I'm glad you are enjoying these fantasy pieces @generikat 

The final part will be out next weekend, and that will probably be the last thing I put on hive for quite a while as I have a large writing project I have to focus on.

Thanks again for reading 🙂
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@raj808 ·
Part 3, [The King's Gambit,](https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/the-king-s-gambit-fantasy) was published yesterday and I'm just polishing the finale (part 4) to go out either later today or tomorrow.

I wouldn't be sharing like this usually, but these are the final things I'm putting on hive for a long time, and I thought I'd share links with people who read past episodes.
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@generikat ·
I'm glad you are sharing! I have all sorts of things logged away that I have wanted to say to you, especially in the encouragement department, as I am just so dang excited for you to head off and do your project, it's just that I am stuck in the middle of more than a bit of chaos right now with the whole state fair thing lol! 

You are awesome, I will so read part three when I get a sec because I love the story so far, and I am super excited for you (okay, I am going to miss you too😊)

Annnddd...Frantic Kat out lol! 
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@rcaine ·
You have a great story going. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing.
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@raj808 ·
Will do rcaine 

The final part will be out next weekend, and that will probably be the last thing I put on hive for quite a while as I have a large writing project I have to focus on.

Thanks for reading 🙂
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@teamuksupport ·
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 For more information visit our discord https://discord.gg/8CVx2Am
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@wongi ·
Hello @raj808, I'd like to make a review of this hive  book for the @dreemport book challenge for this week ✨
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@raj808 ·
Hi @wongi, of course i would be honoured to see a review of this short story.
 
Just so you know, there are four parts that make up the full story which are all an essential read for the plot, character development and twists to make sense. 

Please do tag me in the review when you've written it, and don't worry if there is critical feedback etc as i studied creative writing in university and have attended many peer reviewed writing workshops. Basically, what I'm saying is i won't be offended if there are narrative styles, characters or plot devices you don't like 🙂👍
 
For your ease, here are links to all 4 parts on peakd:
 
<h3>[Red Days (Part 1) can be found on this link.](https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/red-days-fantasy-fiction-part)</h3>
<h3>[Arrows in Flight (Part 2) can be found on this link.](https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/red-days-fantasy-fiction-part)</h3>
<h3>[The King's Gambit (Part 3) can be found on this link.](https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/the-king-s-gambit-fantasy)</h3>
<h3>[Deathdrinker’s Bite (Part 4 & the Finale) can be found on this link.]( https://peakd.com/hive-199275/@raj808/deathdrinker-s-bite-fantasy-fiction)</h3>
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@wongi · (edited)
Thank you very much @raj808 , I really appreciate the fact that you've made my work easier.😊✨
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@wrestlingdesires ·
>Voice amplified he shouted a short series of commands at the now not-so-distant trees.

At first when I read that, I thought the trees themselves would enter the war! Another great chapter, I'm looking forward to more 🙌

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@raj808 ·
> to take full advantage of such curation, please use the vyb and proofofbrain tags

I will remember for next time @wrestlingdesires 
Glad you enjoyed this episode. The final part will be out next weekend, and that will probably be the last thing I put on hive for quite a while as I've a large writing project I have to focus on.

Thanks again for the curation 🙂
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@wrestlingdesires ·
I'll miss seeing you here! Thanks so much for sharing your stories :)
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