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My review on God's Unchained [https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@ferrate/god-s-unchained-review-7fe543d42101](https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@ferrate/god-s-unchained-review-7fe543d42101) My tweet [https://mobile.twitter.com/appawd/status/1093471108811182080](https://mobile.twitter.com/appawd/status/1093471108811182080)
| author | ferrate |
|---|---|
| permlink | ferrate-re-oracle-d-tasks-task-1-review-a-crypto-game-dapp-20190207t121831953z |
| category | odtasks |
| json_metadata | {"app":"partiko","client":"android"} |
| created | 2019-02-07 12:18:33 |
| last_update | 2019-02-07 17:29:57 |
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| cashout_time | 1969-12-31 23:59:59 |
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| author_reputation | 137,049,614,705,615 |
| root_title | "Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp!" |
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| voter | weight | wgt% | rshares | pct | time |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| mids106 | 0 | 698,959,246,251 | 63% | ||
| neoxian | 0 | 176,968,601,678 | 5% |
Thanks for your second submission, I can see that you improved your review based on the feedback for your previous submission. Good job :) You have some typos in your article, for example a space too many or missing. Please review an article carefully before posting it! While an article with typos can still be understood by the reader, it looks less professional and is more distracting to read. In your conclusing you compare Gods Unchained with Heartstone. Iād love to read more about your comparison with it. How is it different? Which one is better and why, etc? This would make the review more interesting to read. Meta review score: āļøāļøāļø
| author | mids106 |
|---|---|
| permlink | re-ferrate-ferrate-re-oracle-d-tasks-task-1-review-a-crypto-game-dapp-20190208t135142293z |
| category | odtasks |
| json_metadata | {"tags":["odtasks"],"app":"steemit/0.1"} |
| created | 2019-02-08 13:51:42 |
| last_update | 2019-02-08 13:51:42 |
| depth | 2 |
| children | 1 |
| last_payout | 2019-02-15 13:51:42 |
| cashout_time | 1969-12-31 23:59:59 |
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| author_reputation | 6,712,338,389,359 |
| root_title | "Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp!" |
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|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| gentlebot | 0 | 196,898,570,641 | 15% |
Thanks a lot for the review. And am happy I have improved a bit and with the corrections, will get through again. Thanks a lot Posted using [Partiko Android](https://steemit.com/@partiko-android)
| author | ferrate |
|---|---|
| permlink | ferrate-re-mids106-re-ferrate-ferrate-re-oracle-d-tasks-task-1-review-a-crypto-game-dapp-20190208t152430511z |
| category | odtasks |
| json_metadata | "{\"app\":\"partiko\",\"client\":\"android\"}" |
| created | 2019-02-08 15:24:30 |
| last_update | 2019-02-08 15:24:30 |
| depth | 3 |
| children | 0 |
| last_payout | 2019-02-15 15:24:30 |
| cashout_time | 1969-12-31 23:59:59 |
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| body_length | 196 |
| author_reputation | 137,049,614,705,615 |
| root_title | "Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp!" |
| beneficiaries | [] |
| max_accepted_payout | 1,000,000.000 HBD |
| percent_hbd | 10,000 |
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