Thanks for the review of 0xUniverse, as I haven't seen any other reviews about it so far. The German text on the screenshots are a bit hard to read, that doesn't really fit with the English language in the review itself.

I did really like that you are showing your own planet, and continued the review after a day, so we get some more feeling for the gameplay.

Meta review score: ☄️☄️☄️☄️

Hey @bengy - Great review, lengthy without feeling lengthy. I like that you share some desktop screenshots, but it would have been great to have a closer look at the images.

I have to say that it is very clear, so good job on that. One thing that disappointed me for an informative review was the self-promotional part at the end... Besides that: 😎

Good job on getting the first review of this task out. As I mentioned on Discord, you did certainly raise the bar :)

* The story is a compelling read, which gives me a good feeling for the gameplay of EOS Knights.
* You have experience writing game reviews, and that shows! Your criticism for the game is well substantiated.
* The screenshots are not very suitable, you could crop the relevant parts rather than showing fullscreen desktop shows everywhere.
* The initial title wasn't great and mentioned Oracle-D which is a big no-no per their guidelines, but you have improved it fortunately :)
* Your post has too many post & unrelated advertisement for my taste.
* Tweet is lacking flavour, has no text and has too many tags. Your Twitter profile is missing a profile picture :(
* State of the DApps mention is subtile and fits right into the story.

Meta review score: 🌟🌟🌟🌟

Thanks for the advice, I will try to improve that in the future 🙂

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Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

* Your article is not really a review, more a list of features (you calls it a beginner guide).
* In your title you are very positive about the game, but you don't tell us why.
* In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing in your article.
* The screenshots are well chosen, although a bit over-compressed. Look into JPEG compression to see how you can improve that in the future.
* State of the DApps doesn't perfectly fit in the story, it is more added as an afterthought.
* Tweet is lacking flavour, has no text. With too many tags it looks like spam.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks & reviews!

Meta review score: ⭐⭐⭐

Can you link your Steem post as well? The link "Steemit post" isn't to your article, but to the task description.

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Thanks for your review of CryptoKitties.

As a little feedback: when you mention the 7 steps showing how the game is played, I'd write your own text to explain in your own words what the steps are. Some screenshots can provide supporting content, but reading the text with the small front size is difficult.

Meta review score: 😼😼😼😼

Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

* Good story telling, it reads very easily.
* In a game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. You mentioned some of this in your conclusion, but I’d like to read more of your personal feedback!
* Images are well chosen with a good mix of flavour pictures and in-game screenshots.
* Nice title, category and tags. Not sure why you added `indonesia` though, as it has nothing to do with the game.
* Your Tweet is not directly related to the review.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: 🎻🎻🎻

Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback, hopefully you can use it to your advantage in future tasks!

* Mentioning Oracle-D in an article is a big no-no for their tasks!
* I like the personal touch in the introduction if your story, but keep that going throughout the article. Tell us what you experienced in this game.
* In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing in your article.
* Improve the choice of images, now there is too much of the same, too big & poor quality.
* Title can be improved, put the game first. Tags and category are good.
* I am not a fan of the list of links at the bottom of the article, especially not without clarifying titles.
* Your tweet is too verbose.  You could learn a bit more how to use Twitter, people tend to be brief.
* State of the DApps mention is subtile and fits right into the story.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: 🚛🚛

Thanks for your second submission, I can see that you improved your review based on the feedback for your previous submission. Good job :)

You have some typos in your article, for example a space too many or missing. Please review an article carefully before posting it! While an article with typos can still be understood by the reader, it looks less professional and is more distracting to read.

In your conclusing you compare Gods Unchained with Heartstone. I’d love to read more about your comparison with it. How is it different? Which one is better and why, etc? This would make the review more interesting to read.

Meta review score: ⛓️⛓️⛓️

Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

* Good story telling, great mix of supporting pictures images and content.
* In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation  if and why I should play the game. I would love to read more why you like this game!
* I’d like to see some more in-game screenshots to get a feeling for the gameplay.
* Before tweeting edit the title; no need to add " - Steemit". With too many tags, it will quickly look like spam.
* I am not a fan of a quick-links section, personally I prefer them to be part of the story.
* Maybe you can tell us more about the dragons that you hatched?

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: 🥚🥚🥚

Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

* Nice story, it reads well and has a good introduction, body and conclusion.
* In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. You mentioned some of this in your conclusion, but I’d like to read more of your personal feedback!
* Good choice of screenshots, they really support the story.
* Title can be improved, it is a bold claim for an app to be the first, I would be critical in copying that. Tags and category are good.
* Tweet is okay, a bit too many tags for my taste.
* State of the DApps mention is subtile and fits right into the story.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: 🐲🐲🐲🐲

hey @menoski - Love the review! Well presented with images inserted at the right places!

What would have been even cooler, is to see a live battle from your own Axie's and/or an image from your Axie collections.

You mentioned having played many games, how does Axie Infinity compares to the ones you are familiar with? 

Anyway, loved it and found it very clear!

Another good review by @menoski. I don't have much to suggest as improvements :)

Meta review score: 🐪🐪🐪🐪

Good review, I like that you put the game it in context and compare it with similar games. A critical tone with good reasoning is always welcome!

Meta review score: 🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍

No worries @menoski, I have seen your review about CryptoKitties :)

You make a nice comparison between human beauty traits, family trees and the appeal of CryptoKitties. Very insightful!

Meta review score: 🐾🐾🐾🐾

Compelling review! I think I'm gonna go and play the game now 😁

Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

* Great story, I like how you follow up on your previous review of the game.
* Unlike many of the other articles for the task, you give a game review and share your opinion! Much appreciated :)
* State of the DApps is mentioned as an after thought, it could be better embedded in the story.
* You make compelling Tweets, a bit too many duplicate mentions maybe. No need to use punctuation between tags.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: 🦄🦄🦄🦄

It is refreshing to read your critical review and description of the problems that you are facing with Dragonereum. While it is very easy to say that a game is “awesome” or “the best”, DApp users and developers will learn nothing from such exaggerated claims. By describing your struggles and pains, you do a great service in showing the current limitations of DApps and the issues that many users like yourself will suffer. For you as reviewer it might be frustrating, but it is very valuable input!

There are some problems with your English, which can be a little distracting to the reader. Maybe you can ask a native speaker for some feedback and improvements? Your story telling is very good and the title of your article is one of the best among all the other dapp gaming reviews, even if it has a little mistake in there (crypto based game). Looking forward to your future work!

Meta review score: 🀄🀄🀄🀄

Thanks for your review. It is a pleasure to read, visually well formatted and even your tweet is an eye catcher.

After thinking hard, I only found two things to improve:
* There are still a couple typos that get distracting, for example frequent use of lowercase “i”. In English, the nominative form of the singular first-person pronoun, "I", is normally capitalized, along with all its contractions (I'll, I'm, etc.).
* I would like to see more review feedback & critique interwoven with the game play description, as well as some personal flavour. Which character did you pick? Are they well balanced? Is the marketplace intuitive and fairly priced? Are the pets any fun, what is the name of your pet and does it listen when you call it?

Overall, I think you did an excellent job with your review.
Meta review score: 👑👑👑👑👑

Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

* Great introduction and story, but mentioning Oracle-D is a big no-no for their tasks!
* After the embedded gameplay trailer video, your article falls a bit apart. It feels rushed and there is no conclusion. I would love to read how your story really ends :)
* In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation if and why I should play the game. This is missing.
* I get the feeling that you are trying to be too complex with your language, don't say "for your perusal" in a game review.
* The chosen screenshots are a bit chaotic, different sizes and styles. Not well mixed with the story.
* Title, category and tags are okay.
* I am not a fan of the list of links at the bottom of the article.
* Tweet has too many tags, looks like spam.

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: ⭐⭐⭐

Thanks for your second article, let me give you my feedback:

* For an introduction it is a nice read, with images that support the story.
* Tell us how it compares against the other DApp game that you reviewed, would you prefer Etheremon over Crypto Assault, and why?
* Research how you can make and edit / crop screenshots, that will really help for even better pictures.
* Don't tag random people like prashantbhalla and ivyriane, this is against the Oracle-D rules and on Twitter you might get banned for mention spam!

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: 🎲🎲🎲