RE: Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp! by otemzi

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odtasks · @otemzi · Feb 7 '19

$0.42

My second review on [Dragonereum](https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@otemzi/zvdaxio-dragonereum-the-crypto-base-game-i-might-never-get-to-play)

https://twitter.com/otemegift/status/1093582366063448064

https://medium.com/@otemegift/dragonereum-dragon-breeding-combating-and-more-891c4b1de83c

👍 mids106

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@mids106 · Feb 8 '19

It is refreshing to read your critical review and description of the problems that you are facing with Dragonereum. While it is very easy to say that a game is “awesome” or “the best”, DApp users and developers will learn nothing from such exaggerated claims. By describing your struggles and pains, you do a great service in showing the current limitations of DApps and the issues that many users like yourself will suffer. For you as reviewer it might be frustrating, but it is very valuable input!

There are some problems with your English, which can be a little distracting to the reader. Maybe you can ask a native speaker for some feedback and improvements? Your story telling is very good and the title of your article is one of the best among all the other dapp gaming reviews, even if it has a little mistake in there (crypto based game). Looking forward to your future work!

Meta review score: 🀄🀄🀄🀄

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@otemzi · Feb 8 '19

Thanks for your valuable insight, I will try to improve more 😁

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