Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:

* Good story telling, great mix of supporting pictures images and content.
* In game review I want to read positive aspects, as well as criticism, plus your conclusion / recommendation  if and why I should play the game. I would love to read more why you like this game!
* I’d like to see some more in-game screenshots to get a feeling for the gameplay.
* Before tweeting edit the title; no need to add " - Steemit". With too many tags, it will quickly look like spam.
* I am not a fan of a quick-links section, personally I prefer them to be part of the story.
* Maybe you can tell us more about the dragons that you hatched?

Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!

Meta review score: 🥚🥚🥚