Loved the ending. How did you come up with the idea to write it?

Very well built story my friend, keep up the good work.

Someone who wants to succeed must try, without effort all it is a dream

Great analogy and this clearly shows how going out to work, maybe a hardship to some but others have a burning desire to do it as there are people relying on them

very very deep thoughts bro .. and yes he seriously needs to get some bed action. :D    **upvoted & resteemed**

This resonates quite a bit with me because I find myself in a world where almost everyone wants to have kids, kids, kids. And the older folks fully expect me and others of my age to have kids. And I'm asking myself: "Is there no other purpose in life?" I have many other goals and I want to pursue them.

I'm of course fine with people wanting to have kids, but I'm not fine with society's pressure on young people to have kids. This can't be the default choice. It has to be one of many possible options.

**!off topic comment warning!** @kevinwong your up vote made my day today! #HF19 = Big Money
Thanks for your support. You have really made this fun for me and big group of others! 
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btw I have 5 kids...

go with the punches

So many questions, and so many answers. Keep turning the page @kevinwong :)
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yeap always helps to get laid first

Thank you for sharing it! It was interesting and at some points challenging for me to read it, thinking about the whole process we are in and what is the sense of it... I definitely think that all people here are trying to find a way out.. Thanks again for sharing :)

@kevinwong thats so awesome article it deserve my upvote and i am following you i am a little writer but not as you can you check my new story and encourage me if you think so 

https://steemit.com/story/@diverse-thinker/100-words-1-story-humans-as-earth-enemies

Hah. I'll admit.. didn't expect the last line. lol.

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From the highest chair in the land: It is to every good citizens benefit to find another and bear child. For only through the act of parenthood is one able to fully realize their part of the greater good. Have you not seen the lonesome old wanderers, lusting for a soul to love. Have you not seen their eyes in pain for another. When one births a child they no longer lust this desire, for they have found their part in the greater good. (My attempt at fiction)

Great read.   That punch line came unexpectedly at the end.   You saved the best for last.

good stor 👍 @kevinwong

WhaT a TreaT  .. to talk to you now .. 5 days after this piece - ))

i like the art .. reminds me .. i skimmed the first paragraph .. i got to "skirmishes and shenanigans" .. oh .. thats me .. -)) ..  start again .. hi .. first paragraph that .. i NOW kNOW .. i didn't kNOW .. .. so a thrid .. hmm !? - ) .. do you miss her ??
The desert a relationship .. the girl ..? .. god .. ? .. isn't it interesting .. we primarily travel physically "out" ... we primarily 'see out' .. so we must also be taking 'in' an equal and opposite am-OU-nt .. balance ..what is the "po-i-nt" .. ??? .. can you feel the energy when you squint your eyes a little .. being the consciousness .. that is bridging the gap .. asKING the mind to be both in and out at the same time ... electrifying !! - ))

i like your writing .. engaging .. - ))
" .. Mankind has always been winging it after all .. "
.. so true .. 
the 'TreK' in the DeserT .. .. S(w-in)G(in)G for the FencE - ))

IF there were only now .. our life experience .. could BE ? - )
.. de-scriBEd .. as a living stargate ?? .. K(NOW)L-edge ?? - ))
.. i think you might get a kick out of my post today ?? - ))

a love leTTer, TO MOM & DAD - ))
.. either i'm crazy .. or you'll dig .. ha ha ))

CRAZY ! - )
ha ha ))

PumpeD & reSTEEMed - ))
DaY 5 .. last gas ?? - ))
.. a start

LOVLOVELOVE )))
greb'Z )

ha ha ))
i'll drop this in behind my comment on this POST - ))
... just in case you'd like to remain a bit anonymous ?? - ))

SO FUNnY .. i'm reading some posts on A(THEN)S .. and thinking to myself ?? the ether punk is in Greece ??? .. ha ha ... i read a couple more posts .. and tHERE YOU ARE !!! - ))
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.. not sure if you've SEE(N) IT ?? - ))

AnywayS .. super COOL !! -))

.. and, a FUN SMILEY PicturE of YOU ! - )))

SorrY had to SharE !! - ))

LOVELOVELOVE )))
greb'Z )

This is inspiring !

can't describe how it was interesting to me
I have read it with sad music on my headphone it made it more interesting
thank you so much man really great

This is a brilliant mind setting description! Being a father i understand perfectly every word you wrote!

It's true we just pretend we know what we're doing half the time